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[Report This]Date: 03/15/2012 9:45:30 PM Title: A little closer
I'll have to admit, I wasn't immediately sold on a "no powers" story. To me their powers are so much of what makes them Logan and Marie. BUT, I am really enjoying this. You really seemed to hit your stride with this chapter. It's really well-written. I loved this part:
"...I wouldn't forgive myself if you got put in the middle of some dangerous situation."
"And I wouldn't forgive myself if I didn't put myself between you and that dangerous situation."
Author's Response: Thank you so much. It's an idea that's been in my head for awhile so I wanted to get it out and see what happened. I just had a desire to see what Marie and Logan would be like in the 'real world'. rnrnI really appreciate the feedback - especially from someone who writes Rogan so amazingly well. :)
Date: 03/15/2012 11:08:35 AM Title: A little closer
Lovely! Positively lovely...You've got a great sense of timing in the twists and turns as well as with the little hints of what's to come, starting with that first jolt when Marie went from all smiley over her lustful thoughts to the pain and upset of her flash of memory. And, who doesn't love protective!Logan?
Oh, and Marie, he did growl. Trust me, honey, you'll not only get used to it, you'll CRAVE it! Which is how I feel about updates for this story. -- Wendie
Author's Response: Thank you Wendie. Just the idea of that Logan growl makes one all rubbery, no? ;)
Date: 03/14/2012 4:00:25 PM Title: A little closer
I hope you update soon. : )
Author's Response: I will really try. :)
Date: 03/14/2012 2:17:50 PM Title: A little closer
yay for updates!
Author's Response: Yay for reviews! ;)