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Reviewer: Sparroe Signed star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/20/2012 7:29:19 PM Title: Breakfast and bombshells

OOOOOOOOOOOOOO. Please update soon :)

Author's Response: I will try! Thank you, Sparroe!

Reviewer: Aoria Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/19/2012 5:22:23 PM Title: Breakfast and bombshells

Oh, wow. Victor Creed? Shoot, I didn't see that one coming! Can't wait for the next bit. Keep up the great work! :D

Author's Response: Well, I'm glad I surprised you! Thank you for the review. :)

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2012 9:51:58 PM Title: Breakfast and bombshells

HOLY CRAP, I WISH THIS THING WOULD TYPE BIGGER, BECAUSE I WANT TO FILL THIS LITTLE BOX WITH COMPLIMENTS TILL THE EFFING BLUE EDGES BURST WIDE OPEN AND SPEW OBNOXIOUSLY GUSHING REVIEWS ALL OVER THE DAMN PLACE!!!!!!!!!

OK, I'll calm down...a little. Hitting the fave button after this. Definitely. And that ain't something I do for just any old fic.

I am painfully jealous of your skill at adding in bucketfuls of emotion with few words and minimal fuss. Best example: Marie laughed and Logan felt that lock on his emotions crack open. He still didn't know if she could be married, have children or some incredible life. But no matter what he told himself about keeping his distance, he'd been pulled in way too deep.
Three sentences...and yet it tells the whole tale.

Even shorter example: Seeing her distress made his chest constrict with that feeling of protectiveness.
Crystal clear image that makes it impossible not to understand and sympathize with Logan.

I also love that Bobby is uncharacteristically somber and serious when dropping his bombshell. Ditzy as a dumb-blonde joke he may be, but he's obviously got a big heart and isn't afraid to use it. He knows how hard it is for his boss to hear what he's discovered...well, except for that last HOLY-SHIT-HOLY-SHIT-OH-NO-YOU-DI'INT detail.

Amazing. Totally f-ing amazing. --Wendie

Author's Response: Wendie, you don't even know how much your words mean to me. I know I'm not the greatest writer - there are so many that are just heads and shoulders beter than me - but I try really, really hard to craft a well written and engaging story. It means the world that it touches even one person let alone all the people who have reviewed so far. So, thank you, thank you. :)

Reviewer: Wanderlust Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2012 8:24:00 PM Title: Breakfast and bombshells

Ahhhhhhh!!!!!!!!! This story is *so* good! I've been trying to login to review it for a week, but wasn't able to manage it till tonight. And this chapter is my favorite!!! Victor is definitely the scary dude from her memory, and I am seriously intrigued by the mob angle. Please, please, PUH-LEEZ update soon!!!

Author's Response: I will try! Thank you so much for the review - especially after all you went through to get it written!

Reviewer: baybelletrist Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2012 8:04:40 PM Title: Breakfast and bombshells

Oh holy great googly moogly smokes. (You have reduced me to incoherency. Well played!)

I'm enjoying this story. The pacing is good and it's fun seeing how you work in each new character.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I just couln't leave out Jubilee. :p

Reviewer: notmyself Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2012 5:38:49 PM Title: Breakfast and bombshells

SquEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!

Author's Response: Yay!

Reviewer: alesia Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2012 2:57:20 PM Title: Breakfast and bombshells

And the world comes full circle! Nicely done. Logan won't have any choice but to tell her now.

Author's Response: Yeah, he can't run from his past anymore! Thanks alesia.

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