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[Report This]Date: 04/03/2012 10:01:24 AM Title: Mine
Oh! Goody, goody. I absolutely love this story. And oddly enough one of my more favorite characters is Jack. :)
Marie's background is interesting and I look forward to seeing how much further you wish to go with it. I also hope Marie gets her memory back soon, but as it's a key part of this story I doubt it.
Thanks for publishing this and updating so quickly, I look forward to seeing the next chapter. Good luck!
-Ellen Marie
Author's Response: Thank you Ellen Marie. This is a fun story to write although real life is intruding a bit. Hope you like what's coming up next!
Date: 04/03/2012 9:58:52 AM Title: Mine
Oh! Goody, goody. I absolutely love this story. And oddly enough one of my more favorite characters is Jack. :)
Marie's background is interesting and I look forward to seeing how much further y
[Report This]Date: 03/26/2012 6:49:15 PM Title: Mine
Wish it was more.
Author's Response: I know, I'm working on it!
Date: 03/26/2012 6:46:10 PM Title: Mine
Love!!!!!
Author's Response: Love your review!
Date: 03/26/2012 3:44:53 PM Title: Mine
Awww...love it!
Author's Response: Thank you!!
Date: 03/25/2012 9:54:53 PM Title: Mine
I abosolutely think the interaction between Logan and Bobby is the cutest thing I have ever read!! Bobby and Logan rarely get good fic time together and it is refreshing to see it done well. I was a little afraid the Mob had shown up already but then I realized the guys were just really rude bikers. Logan's realization at the end is really sweet. And just in time for the Baddies to show up.
Author's Response: Writing Bobby is fun. And, no worries, we'll have some more 'quality Rogan time' before the baddies show up. ;)
[Report This]Date: 03/25/2012 5:54:57 PM Title: Mine
OUTSTANDING! Oh, heavens, and to think I once doubted that this Logan IS Logan. Silly me.
And please allow me to correct an oversight from my last review -- love, Love, LOVE your Jubilee! I don't recognize Angelo as an X-Man character, but I'm not as steeped in the comic books or cartoons as some are, so that's my fault, not yours.
I'm guessing these crude dudes were the advance recon for Victor, checking the lay of the land...seeing if Marie was, in fact, in town and how well protected she was...and maybe even if the sheriff was the badass he'd been rumored to be...whatever.
I also very much enjoy your little details that point to the characters' X-personas: '...very own little Chinese firecracker'...'I was probably drunk'...Victor Creed's tenaciousness and taste for killing. It's all just great.
One tiny little note: '...moan until your voice went horse.' Unless he means for her to whinny or neigh like Seabiscuit, it should be 'hoarse'. (Don't you just hate it when Spellcheck can't read your mind?)
More, please! -- Wendie
Author's Response: Thank you Wendie! Yes, Angelo was a good friend of Jubilee's in the comics and asked her out before he died. She always regretted not saying yes. I'm glad you're seeing my little nods to their X-men lives, it's just something I like to do to connect them to that 'world.' Thank you for the correction! I actually changed that line last night and I was tired so didn't connect the wrong spelling of 'hoarse'. XXOO!