This was wonderfully written -- no surprise there -- in the sense that the sex was not only a truly organic part of the scene, but also it was a mere five or six paragraphs and still '...amazing. Powerful. Right.'

Love Scott and Jean and the familiar issues involving Logan.

I held my breath as I read the 'afterglow', waiting for the photo of Victor to surface one way or another -- falling out of his shirt pocket or whatever -- but it didn't. Letting them have their 'calm before the storm' was a sweet surprise.

I've got goosebumps wondering how you'll test Logan's vow to do 'anything' to keep her with him. Goosebumps...no shit... --Wendie

Author's Response: Thank you, Wendie!