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Reviewer: Aoria Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2012 12:35:54 AM Title: When the world comes crashing in

Oh, intrigue! I'm always amazed at the tracking abilities of these ferals. Curious to see what happens next! Keep up the awesome work :)

Author's Response: And Victor is quite the tracker! Thanks Aoria!

Reviewer: WitchBaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/14/2012 11:11:38 PM Title: When the world comes crashing in

great update and i like the new pov! i'm glad marie/anna didn't stay angry at logan, she was fair about it which i like! i hope bobby is ok and vic didn't hurt him or anything and i'm eager to see some jean/scott and marie/logan interaction. stupid jean for trying to cheat on scott, hopefully she'll get the message about marie though. can't wait for more!

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it - that POV is my typical writing but I wanted to switch it up a bit. Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/14/2012 9:42:40 PM Title: When the world comes crashing in

Short, but oh so sweet. I cannot get over your ability to keep the story moving and still pack plenty of emotion into every scene. Nice. --Wendie

Author's Response: Thanks Wendie!

Reviewer: Sparroe Signed star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/14/2012 9:13:41 PM Title: When the world comes crashing in

OOOOOOOOO Can't wait for the next Chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks, Sparroe! :)

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