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Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2012 6:54:58 PM Title: Crashing Down

Well done! A climactic fight scene written with the same precision and efficiency as every other chapter. I need to take lessons from you on how to know when 'enough is enough'. Can't wait to see how this all winds up, though I will be sad to say goodbye to this Logan and this Marie...and Jack. --Wendie

Author's Response: Thanks, Wendie. I sort of feel like I don't quite get enough in there! But there comes a point where I feel like I'd better cut it off or risk just rambling. :p

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