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Reviewer: baybelletrist Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2012 8:04:40 PM Title: Breakfast and bombshells

Oh holy great googly moogly smokes. (You have reduced me to incoherency. Well played!)

I'm enjoying this story. The pacing is good and it's fun seeing how you work in each new character.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I just couln't leave out Jubilee. :p

Reviewer: notmyself Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2012 5:38:49 PM Title: Breakfast and bombshells

SquEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!

Author's Response: Yay!

Reviewer: alesia Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2012 2:57:20 PM Title: Breakfast and bombshells

And the world comes full circle! Nicely done. Logan won't have any choice but to tell her now.

Author's Response: Yeah, he can't run from his past anymore! Thanks alesia.

Reviewer: doctorg Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2012 9:45:30 PM Title: A little closer

I'll have to admit, I wasn't immediately sold on a "no powers" story. To me their powers are so much of what makes them Logan and Marie. BUT, I am really enjoying this. You really seemed to hit your stride with this chapter. It's really well-written. I loved this part:

"...I wouldn't forgive myself if you got put in the middle of some dangerous situation."

"And I wouldn't forgive myself if I didn't put myself between you and that dangerous situation."

Author's Response: Thank you so much. It's an idea that's been in my head for awhile so I wanted to get it out and see what happened. I just had a desire to see what Marie and Logan would be like in the 'real world'. rnrnI really appreciate the feedback - especially from someone who writes Rogan so amazingly well. :)

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2012 11:08:35 AM Title: A little closer

Lovely! Positively lovely...You've got a great sense of timing in the twists and turns as well as with the little hints of what's to come, starting with that first jolt when Marie went from all smiley over her lustful thoughts to the pain and upset of her flash of memory. And, who doesn't love protective!Logan?
Oh, and Marie, he did growl. Trust me, honey, you'll not only get used to it, you'll CRAVE it! Which is how I feel about updates for this story. -- Wendie

Author's Response: Thank you Wendie. Just the idea of that Logan growl makes one all rubbery, no? ;)

Reviewer: Sparroe Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2012 4:00:25 PM Title: A little closer

I hope you update soon. : )

Author's Response: I will really try. :)

Reviewer: WitchBaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2012 2:17:50 PM Title: A little closer

yay for updates!

Author's Response: Yay for reviews! ;)

Reviewer: FaythBrady Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/12/2012 5:53:16 PM Title: You do know Jack

nice so far, like the addition of jack and you can feel the wolverine in there even tho theres no powers.

Author's Response: Thank you. I appreciate your review!

Reviewer: notmyself Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/06/2012 3:48:10 PM Title: You do know Jack

I like reading your words.

~Mia

Author's Response: Thank you, Mia.

Reviewer: wudelfin Signed star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2012 9:13:05 AM Title: You do know Jack

now this ones a keeper. more!!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: jenefaner Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2012 3:26:56 AM Title: You do know Jack

looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Thank you! Hope to have it soon!

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2012 12:45:03 PM Title: You do know Jack

I love Jack and I love that Logan sees the similarities between him and his 'partner' in their reactions to Marie. I think his last line may prove to be rather prophetic...Yeah, Logan, buddy, you're done for.

Best lines: "First of all, you're not old. Second, I just meant that you seem like a no nonsense guy."

Understatement.


Sometimes one good word says it all. --Wendie

Author's Response: Aw, thanks Wendie! I think Jack and Logan are the true soulmates. ;)

Reviewer: Ebony10 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2012 12:33:22 PM Title: You do know Jack

OMG!!!

I simply love this chapter. The Jack bit was great. :D It gave me a huge grin. Thank you for making my day! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thank YOU, Ebony! You made my day!

Reviewer: Sparroe Signed star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2012 8:10:08 PM Title: You do know Jack

I like they way your story is heading and how your using the characters.

Author's Response: Thank you, Sparroe. I so appreciate the feedback.

Reviewer: notmyself Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2012 12:39:25 PM Title: A little help from his friends

I really like the way this is going so far.

~Mia

Author's Response: Thanks Mia. I'm really glad.

Reviewer: alesia Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/22/2012 11:32:51 PM Title: You do know Jack

I LOVE JACK!!!! What a perfect dog for Logan? Wolf-hybrids are funny, the ones that aren't completely clueless are exceptionally smart (like how you describe Jack) and are more partners then pets.

I still really like the slow development you have going on here.

Author's Response: Thanks, alesia. I'm glad you like the 'new character'. ;)

Reviewer: WitchBaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/22/2012 10:34:11 PM Title: You do know Jack

sweet chappie with jack and marie, love it! i can't wait to see some more marie/logan bonding too!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: WolvieDoesItBest Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2012 7:18:32 PM Title: A little help from his friends

Now I really wanna see him fall hard for Marie! Love the Dumb Bobby interaction with Logan! Please, ma'am, may I have some more?!?

Author's Response: Yes, yes you may. Just not right now. ;) I'll try and get you some more soon!

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2012 11:18:00 AM Title: A little help from his friends

What I think is that this story is going great. Don't second guess the pacing. It's terrific. Very romance novel-ish. Which leads me to a question: Will we be getting any of the story from Marie's POV? I have no preference either way, just curious... --Wendie

Author's Response: Whew, thanks! I just didn't want people to expect a fast pace with this one and be disappointed. I haven't quite decided yet on the POV. I'd planned it from Logan's but I might change that up a bit. Thanks again, Wendie!

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2012 11:10:15 AM Title: A riddle wrapped in a mystery

OK, I'm in. You hooked me into your AU with Bobby Drake having "the organizational skills of a rhesus monkey". And you were right about Logan seeming more Logan-like when dealing with others. Certainly his primal response to Marie follows the right track. On to Chapter 3... --Wendie

Author's Response: I'm so glad you saw Logan in there! Thanks for taking time to review!

Reviewer: alesia Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/14/2012 3:45:56 PM Title: A little help from his friends

I, for one, like the pace. Part of the neat thing with AUs is that you don't have the 'normal' interactions to fall back on. Besides it is fun to watch Logan's own instincts mess with his head. :)

Author's Response: Great, thank you for the feedback, alesia. I tend to have more action going but I really want to explore their relationship. I appreciate the support!

Reviewer: anglophile Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/14/2012 8:45:41 AM Title: A little help from his friends

I'm happy to give Logan and Marie time to get to know each other and like the slower pace. Love the story, keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thank you so much. :)

Reviewer: notmyself Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2012 4:58:33 PM Title: One of those days

ALL of it. It's wonderful.

Reviewer: notmyself Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2012 3:56:15 PM Title: One of those days

Gorgeous. I want it all. All of it, now. I want all the things. All the story are belong to me. Do it.

~Mia

Author's Response: Thanks Mia, you can have as much of It as you want! ;)

Reviewer: WitchBaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2012 1:18:49 AM Title: A riddle wrapped in a mystery

short but great!

Author's Response: Thank you!

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