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Date: 06/14/2020 6:10:29 PM Title: Want it more
To say I love this story isn't strong enough
Wow!!!! Extraordinary!
I love the strength of rogue in this story, and I'm not really talking about her powers. Not many write a truly strong rogue,/Marie or when they do she loses her sweetness and heart. You wrote her perfectly
[Report This]Date: 05/23/2012 9:22:23 PM Title: Want it more
This is such a gripping first chapter. I like that this is a hard decision for her, and she's really thought about both sides. Her mutation is not the unbearable curse it can be sometimes, now that she's worked toward control. Logan's comments shake her confidence a little bit, but in the end, she really does want touch more than any of it. And of course all your Rogan fans are swooning guessing why...
Author's Response: I like the idea of her having to struggle with it. Why CAN'T her mutation be cool? I think it should be! : )
Date: 05/15/2012 8:22:52 PM Title: Want it more
;D
Author's Response: :-D
Date: 05/14/2012 8:31:28 PM Title: Want it more
IT MADE ME CRY!!! lol
Author's Response: It's SUPPOSED to make you SMILE!!!!!! LOL
Date: 05/14/2012 7:50:16 PM Title: Want it more
Oh psh! Dont act surprised. You know this stuff is crack to us. Sequel, whenever you can. (soon. lol) ;)
Author's Response: *sigh* A sequel? I'll think about it.... : )
Date: 05/10/2012 3:32:28 PM Title: Want it more
I did. It was a truly glorious treat to have an extra chapter. I'm sorry I didn't review it. I was too eager to go on to the next course.
~Mia
Author's Response: Thanks so much! It's okay that you didn't review...I would have been going on to the next chapter as well. : )
Date: 05/03/2012 7:56:48 PM Title: Want it more
Boo. I am dissappoint. I will accept your offer of a sequel. Or any damn thing else really. And if you ever have need of an additional BETA or simply a sounding board, my email is prissiepup@hotmail.com. I've betaed several things before. I'm good with ideas and encouragement and looking things over for spelling and the like. For instance, I am aware of the many spelling errors I have made and of the humongous run on sentence just previous. If you ever have the need...
~Mia
Author's Response: Well, I'm not sure I'll do a sequel. It's sort of....a maybe. But I will keep writing. It might be a bit longer in between stories than in between chapters though. But I'm sure no one will complain. :) Thanks for the offer to help BETA! I will take that into account! : )
Date: 05/03/2012 4:52:44 PM Title: Want it more
I'm hopping over to your profile now to see if you've ever written anything else here. I've never seen anyone update like you do. Not quality stuff, anyways.
~Mia
Author's Response: Sad to report, I have not written anything else. But hopefully I will continue to write. I've been throwing some ideas around in my head. I've even talked to my BETA, doctorg, about doing a sequel to this one. We'll see, I guess.
Author's Response: Sad to report, I have not written anything else. But hopefully I will continue to write. I've been throwing some ideas around in my head. I've even talked to my BETA, doctorg, about doing a sequel to this one. We'll see, I guess.
Date: 04/24/2012 10:56:06 AM Title: Want it more
Not an empty offer.
~Mia
Date: 04/17/2012 8:39:45 AM Title: Want it more
Great start. Keep up the great work.
Author's Response: :)
[Report This]Date: 04/11/2012 10:27:16 AM Title: Want it more
Apparently I show my appriciation with threats of violence, so, you better keep going with this or I will kill you! And smut, smut pleeease! So good!
Author's Response: Smut is on its way, don't fret...but we gotta build up to it...can't take off early now, can we?
Date: 04/05/2012 9:38:31 PM Title: Want it more
I like this! I'll admit, I started to read the first chapter and the lack of paragraphs got to me. I backed out. I'm so glad I came back to it...it's very interesting, and hooray for paragraphs! I respectfully suggest that you go back and add them to the first chapter so more people will be able to enjoy this story. ;-) It might also be worth having someone beta to catch a few small errors.
Author's Response: Yeah! I'd never posted on this website before and my origional story 'did', in fact, carry paragraphs. I promise. When it uploaded, I was like...uhh? But I figured it out with the help of a previous reviewer and TA DA! I took your advice and went back to put the first chapter right. And I am on the hunt for a BETA to catch the slip-ups but I'm also going to go through after a couple days and re-edit myself so hopefully the slips will be corrected. Thanks for the reviews!
Date: 04/03/2012 9:25:31 AM Title: Want it more
You have some interesting insights here. I never really thought about the limitations of other mutants' powers, or that Rogue might have found a way to use the benefits of her mutation and limit or even eliminate the downside. I'll be interested to see where you go with this. --Wendie
Date: 04/03/2012 3:30:08 AM Title: Want it more
I highly suggest that you add a blank line between paragraphs. This is almost impossible to read.
Author's Response: Thank you. It's my fist story and I wasn't sure how the upload would look. Will take into account!
Date: 04/03/2012 12:53:55 AM Title: Want it more
I really love those last two sentences. Best lines ever.