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Whoops! Getting so into the story I clicked through to the next chapter and almost forgot to review! I really like this insight into Logan's thoughts. This moment was just spectacular:
He turned his head and slowly swooped down, wanting to taste her mouth, wanting to drink her in. She wanted him!
“Don't,” she whispered.
Or not. He stopped his movement but didn't pull away. He brought his eyes up from her lips to her suddenly terrified eyes.
“My skin...” she added. And he could breathe again.
“Was never a problem...” he finished.
Love seeing Logan's momentary doubt, and his reassurance.
A great chapter. I loved how we got to see Logan's thoughts and more about his feelings. It's about time Logan finally accepted he needed to act on his feeling about Rogue. Keep up the great work. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: I like Logan's POV too! Always nice!
Your end notes sounded like the goose on Charlotte's Web. Thank you for not drawing this out for a hundred years. This truly is hot and I am enjoying the burn. I love the sassy, I love the messed up bits. And I really am in love with this story. Thank you for your superb writing skills.
~Mia
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, thank you!
so glad i belong to this site! i was reading this on ff.net and saw the note and was like, oh good, i belong to that! lol. loving this story. it's getting super hot! can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Yeah...I wanted to but smut smut and more smut in the story and I can't on ff.net...Hope you keep on enjoy it!
You're killing us here....more!
Author's Response: more killin' you? *shrug* ooookaaaaay! hehe