I like it, I like it! I love the interplay between Rogue and Victor. This is definitely a take on him that you don't usually see and I'm loving every bit of it. He's still an arrogant, full-of-himself asshole but you're showing him as a multidimensional person, and ALL people have crappy parts and not-so-crappy parts to them. Most portrayals of him are extremely one-dimensional so it's really nice to see this side.

I also love that Rogue is her own person. So many fics paint her as a person very dependent on the emotional support of another, usually Logan. Your Rogue knows what she wants, has taken steps to obtain it, and ain't about to take shit from anyone, not even Victor, about it. Not that there's anything wrong with an emotionally needy Rogue but it's lovely to see a different take on her from time to time, and yours fits that to a tee :D

No pressure but... can't wait for next update! LOL!

(And don't worry about the language thing, your writing works and it's perfectly understandable, so it's all good!)