Not 100% sure what I like about it. Your writing is good, the plot is moving along. But is English your first language?

~Mia

P.S. I didn't mean that to sound so snotty. I do like your story. Can't pinpoint why yet. I'll be looking for its updates.

Author's Response: Thanks for your review. You are right, English is not my first language - I try my hardest, but when I have no time to read English fanfics and I'm only surrounded by German words, my English gets a little rusty and the words and phrase I 'would' know aren't 'flowing' like they should.rnI'll update later with the next chapter. I would be happy to hear from you again.