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Date: 03/25/2015 6:13:42 PM Title: Chapter 4
Logan didn't see that coming *g*
Date: 03/11/2015 6:05:35 AM Title: Chapter 4
So I just left a LONG comment over at your LJ then got defeated by the spam bot I DO NOT UNDERSTAND THOSE THINGS AT ALL. But anyway ... i think what I said was along the lines of a) I love the leisurely pace of this and the light, fluffy feel that shows Rogue interacting with her friends (the whiskey heist was superb), and I really felt for her with the scene in the woods with Logan where she KNOWS that she doesn't want to be just his friend, knows its not right, but feel she loves him so much she can't refuse him that, not when he was trying so hard to share his feelings. And the scene in the bathtub is just perfect because it shows that he still thinks of her as essentially a shy teenager, not expecting her to get up and help herself, but she's had enough of being put in his boxes. Lovely dialogue, and just the sort of dynamic between them that I adore. Well done!
Author's Response:
*Does happy dance* I am honored to have a review from JaqofSpades!!!! Squee!
rnOh, man, I hate when that happens--writing a long comment, only to have it obliterated, then trying to remember what you wrote. I learned my lesson the hard way; I copy the message periodically and then right before i submit in case something happens, then I can paste it if I have to.
rnThank you so much for your detailed comment! It's so great to hear that kind of feedback and to know that what I'm trying to convey is coming through through in my writing. You have made me a very happy fangirl!!!
[Report This]Date: 03/10/2015 2:05:37 PM Title: Chapter 4
Hehe, I wonder how logan will recover from that! Any chance of seeing a chapter from his POV?
Author's Response:
I'm keeping the story in Rogue's POV, but the thought did cross my mind to do a whole new remix from Logan's POV...do you think that would be too redundant? Might be worth it, just to see this one scene from his point of view! :)
Date: 03/10/2015 9:10:49 AM Title: Chapter 4
Check, Logan....the next move is yours, obviously!!
Author's Response:
Yes, Logan needs to get a clue so he can make a move! Thanks for commenting!
[Report This]Date: 03/10/2015 5:36:57 AM Title: Chapter 4
Damn, this was just what I needed this morning! I was prepared for a full on angsty chapter, but that ending.. Left me breathless ;) so can't wait for more!!
Author's Response:
So glad I could add something nice to your morning! Oh, that Rogue. She can be impulsive sometimes when she gets mad! :)
[Report This]Date: 03/10/2015 3:31:32 AM Title: Chapter 4
Woah! Go roguey! Can't wait to see how this will effect things with logan after this, hope more soon!
Author's Response:
Yeah, go Roguey! I wanted to see her get a little sassy, and I think Logan got a pretty nice eyeful of what he's missing. :)