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Reviewer: Jahunta4974 Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2016 11:02:42 AM Title: Step Two: Acquiring the Targeet

Stryker! That man is worse than a f@#%ing cockroach! What does he want with the X-Men (you know, other than to torture, beat, brutalize, etc.)?

Great chapter! I loved how ruthless you showed Cyclops could be. He's usually so calm and staid; it's nice to see him get in on the action!

Reviewer: Jahunta4974 Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2016 10:54:17 AM Title: Step One: Retrieving the Bait

Ohhhhhhh, this is ominous to say the least! Going from an innocent day at the mall to that! Harsh! Who has captured them and why? Cant' wait to find out! Great beginning!

P.S. Glad to see you back and writing!

Reviewer: Iamthemagicmaker Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/07/2015 4:45:19 PM Title: Step Six: Relocation for Phase Two

Gonna have to check my junk folder because I'm sure I was subscribed to this fic, otherwise this review would have been sooner, fab part, and always love the rogany :) their sweet scenes make their confinement *almost* worth it!! Excited for more :)

Author's Response: I'm just so glad you're here and you've read it! Thanks for enjoying it. They're just so sweet together. I'll be back soon with an update!!

Reviewer: Killing_time Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/06/2015 9:20:15 AM Title: Step Six: Relocation for Phase Two

The rogan was a sweet touch in a great chapter, damn -- I'm so worried for all of them!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Things will pick up soon I promise!

Reviewer: Goodkarmaplease Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/06/2015 3:18:23 AM Title: Step Six: Relocation for Phase Two

Yay, it's so great to see this back (not yay the situation these four are still in lol) that last line was a little ominous and hope not an indication of something going to happen to Marie -- hope the next part isn't too far away!

Author's Response: I'm glad to be back. It wasn't meant to be honest it was meant to be kind of a declaration on her part. I'll be working on the next part probably today or tomorrow. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Feralbites Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2015 10:50:44 PM Title: Step Six: Relocation for Phase Two

Scott took a step forward toward the men putting him in line with Logan.
**Loving Scott in this. I always pictured him as a badass**


Scott shifted uncomfortably but tightened his grip on his wife. “I will do what I need to do.” He replied, his eyes just as steely
**Again. SCOTT LOVE!!!!**

Marie snaked her arms around his neck as he laid them both down on the bed. “I don’t want to be your weak spot.” She whispered.
**Awwww**


“You’re my everything too. You’re mine and if I can spare you from one tiny little hurt, I’ll do it and gladly.”
**Perfect ending to the chapter**

Author's Response: So glad you loved it! Scott is def getting some love in m stories. He's not such a bad character, he just gets a bad rap!

Reviewer: Iamthemagicmaker Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2015 5:09:43 AM Title: Step Five: Mission Sucessful

Definitely dark!! But it's always a joy to see Logan and rogue back together:)

Author's Response: Dark is fun, this chapter was great! I'm working on the next!

Author's Response: Dark is fun, this chapter was great! I'm working on the next!

Reviewer: Killing_time Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2015 6:57:36 AM Title: Step Five: Mission Sucessful

Excellent part, rather chilling!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Goodkarmaplease Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2015 1:28:05 AM Title: Step Five: Mission Sucessful

You are spoiling us with these updates:) fab chapter, dark and fascinating. And yay indeed at them reuniting!

Author's Response: I'm enjoying writing it! Definitely dark, loved this one.

Reviewer: Feralbites Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2015 11:07:01 PM Title: Step Five: Mission Sucessful

He’d meant to take his time going through the warehouse, he really had but the soft whimper of pain and brought him to a full run through the rooms. What he found would have made any man sick to his stomach and Logan wasn’t spared that emotion

So queasy about what happened but I am glad to see the normal human/mutant side of Logan.

Logan spent a long minute just holding her while she cried. He wasn’t sure what had happened while he was gone, but he’d get it out of her later rather than sooner. Now he just growled softly to her and held her close to him, glad to have his mate back in his arms.

I had two favorite lines. LOL. I love the sweetness of their relationship.

Author's Response: *flails* I know right! Because I gave him the separate Wolverine personality that is very selfish and know that is going to play a role in the future, I decided to take some time to show him as a man and showcase his humanity. It's one of the things that makes up the Logan that we all loved from the movies, his soft spot for Marie and his humanity.rnrnAlso, I love the way they interact too. They are in such a good place in their relationship they're starting a family together consciously. I thought I'd remind everyone of how much they love each other. Plus it plays a huge role in this story as well.

Reviewer: Iamthemagicmaker Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2015 1:26:05 AM Title: Step Four: Initial Testing

Considering the "dark" tag this story has I don't know how worried to be about rogues pregnancy/those tests...but this story is still going beautifully!

Author's Response: You'll get a little more of the dark soon! Thanks for the wonderful comments!

Reviewer: Killing_time Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/06/2015 5:59:31 AM Title: Step Four: Initial Testing

Those tests are worrying me a little, poor ladies:(

Author's Response: They're strong!

Reviewer: Feralbites Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/06/2015 12:53:53 AM Title: Step Four: Initial Testing

Jean and Scott reunited with a long and searing kiss, hands checking each other for injuries and general realness. Marie sat down on her mattress and listened woodenly as Jean filled Scott in on what they had done. Marie, not knowing Stryker’s endgame, sat still and waited. Logan would be back soon.


Aww. She just needs Logan.

Author's Response: She totally does

Reviewer: Goodkarmaplease Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/06/2015 12:14:09 AM Title: Step Four: Initial Testing

Stressful chapter, but very good! Hope Logan will be back soon :)

Author's Response: *wink* he will!

Reviewer: Iamthemagicmaker Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2015 12:15:08 AM Title: Curve-ball One: Don't Underestimate the Women

I definitely "woah-ed" several times during this chapter. God damn this is good!

Author's Response: So glad you're loving it!

Reviewer: Killing_time Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/04/2015 11:01:10 AM Title: Curve-ball One: Don't Underestimate the Women

One hell of a bomb. Protective rogue x 2. Needs to look after her mate and her cub!

Author's Response: Definitely! I'm going heavily in that direction and don't worry, it's not the first bomb of the series!! *grins*

Reviewer: Goodkarmaplease Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/04/2015 3:57:25 AM Title: Curve-ball One: Don't Underestimate the Women

Wasn't expecting the pregnancy news at all. You're good with the surprises ;) brilliant chapter!

Author's Response: I got a whole lot more up my sleeve!!

Reviewer: Feralbites Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/04/2015 12:28:38 AM Title: Step Three: Laying Down The Rules

Scott made a shushing sound at Jean and turned his attention toward Marie and Logan. His face was contorted in a mask of rage and frustration the look burned in his eyes along with a question. What can we do? It was still odd to her seeing Scott’s eyes, as brown as her own, without the protection of his glasses. He cradled Jean against him, rubbing her back and talking quietly to her.

I have to say that is my favorite scene of them all.

Author's Response: Yeah. I've got a soft spot for ruthless!Scott. :D

Reviewer: Feralbites Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/04/2015 12:27:32 AM Title: Step Two: Acquiring the Targeet

"the equipment didn’t take any damage that it wasn’t created for and could easily be repaired."

LOL. Love it!

Author's Response: :) I wanted Logan to loose his shit!

Reviewer: Feralbites Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/04/2015 12:26:47 AM Title: Step One: Retrieving the Bait

Crawling on all fours over to her friend, Marie made it over to her friends side. “Jean, Jean come on I need you to wake up.”

I like that line the most! I can see it and its sad and awesome.

Author's Response: I want to show how good of friends they are. It's important to this fic.

Reviewer: Ashnan Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2015 10:37:19 PM Title: Step Three: Laying Down The Rules

So excited about this story! More, please.

Author's Response: More coming up tonight! So glad you're enjoying it!

Author's Response: More coming up tonight! So glad you're enjoying it!

Author's Response: More coming up tonight! So glad you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: Iamthemagicmaker Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2015 8:28:06 AM Title: Step Three: Laying Down The Rules

Oh boy, I can't wait for someone to mess with a feral rogue who has had her mate taken!

Author's Response: :D I hear that!

Reviewer: Goodkarmaplease Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2015 5:26:40 AM Title: Step Three: Laying Down The Rules

Strange, thought I'd reviewed this (but I did it at 4am when all my faculties probably weren't in order, so maybe I deleted it?) this was wonderful - love feral rogue, and hope there's going to be a lot of her!!

Author's Response: You did and I accidentally deleted it! I'm so sorry! I wanted to tell you that feral!Rogue isn't going anywhere and will definitely make a comeback!

Reviewer: Killing_time Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2015 3:36:44 AM Title: Step Three: Laying Down The Rules

Loved the rogue coming out to play, that was a nice touch that I hadn't expected at all! Go rogue! And go you too! Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: I enjoyed writing her. She's a feral girl who would rather converse in grunts and growls and live in a cave, but she's pretty awesome. More soon, hopefully tonight!

Reviewer: Iamthemagicmaker Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2015 4:32:26 PM Title: Step Two: Acquiring the Targeet

At least they're together - for now! Wondering how long that will last, keep going, I'm enthralled.

Author's Response: YES!

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