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Reviewer: Iamthemagicmaker Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2015 8:27:02 AM Title: Grey Walls

Terrific start - keep going!

Author's Response: Thanks! I am hoping to write a chapter a day but I am not sure If I will be able to keep that up.

Reviewer: Killing_time Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2015 3:34:57 AM Title: Grey Walls

Dark but awesome, excited to see what you have in store for rogue :)

Author's Response: I don't normally write dark stories but this was a zombie plot bunny that bit me. :D

Reviewer: askita Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2015 12:08:49 AM Title: Grey Walls

Love this!
She felt her chest start to tighten, there wasn’t enough air, that slot couldn’t possibly provide enough air. Her head started to swim. The walls began to close. She couldn’t take it.

You can just feel how scared and in pain she is!

Author's Response: Good. I wanted to convey her sheer terror. I am enjoying writing the darkness.

Reviewer: Goodkarmaplease Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2015 12:07:46 AM Title: Grey Walls

Ooh, great start - not for rogue- obviously- but I'm really looking forward to seeing where this goes! Thanks for posting!

Author's Response: Thanks!! I will try to update again soon.

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