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Reviewer: Killing_time Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/10/2015 6:33:47 PM Title: Soldiers pain

Too many feels for Logan/wolverine in this, good work!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: askita Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/10/2015 11:32:58 AM Title: Soldiers pain

The Wolverine surged to the forefront when he registered the smells in the air. When the door opened it had gusted in air from the hallway and he could smell the girl. Why hadn’t she run? Had they caught her already? Why was he laying there and taking it instead of raising hell?

Love how he's worried about her!

Author's Response: Yeah. He barely knows her but he already wants her to have a chance. You don't see it in the story but that's the first person he has seen since captured. (Guards not included of course)

Reviewer: Goodkarmaplease Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/10/2015 9:24:03 AM Title: Soldiers pain

Wow, I feel kinda dumb, I thought these two were on the verge of escape. Maybe I wasn't reading closely enough. Brilliant couple of chapters nonetheless!

Author's Response: Don't! That is what I wanted everyone to think. Keep reading. The next few chapters will clear everything up. :D Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Iamthemagicmaker Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/10/2015 6:05:06 AM Title: Soldiers pain

Great part, if rather distressing!

Author's Response: Logan's or Marie's? LOL

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