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Reviewer: Jolie Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/11/2016 1:26:22 AM Title: Dawn


Author's Response:

W.  :)  Just being facetious.  I'm guessing you wrote something and it accidentally got erased?

Reviewer: Iamthemagicmaker Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2016 2:52:42 AM Title: Dawn

Amazing as always!
So happy you didn't keep these two apart any longer for the angst factor ;) although I have to say, my heart broke for Logan when he found those tags :( hope more really soon!

Author's Response:

Thank you!  Sorry for the delayed response - I could have sworn that I replied to your comment!  It was hard keeping them apart - they want to be together so much!  :)  Ah, the tags. There's more to that story, as you'll find out soon.  Thank you for commenting!

Reviewer: Nebelwerfer42 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/09/2016 9:22:12 PM Title: Dawn

Another great chapter I like that you start it out the chapter with a little introspection from Logan, Looks like this has pull a significant amount of thought into his new relationship with Marie.

And I see Logan's respect for social norms came stayed with him. I must admit wandering into other peoples room seems to be a tradition in the mansion, I can't count the number of time that's happened in other fics.

I think in the comics Carol's mind co-inhabiting Marie's body for a while, I am very surprise that get along so well, Carol is almost like a big sister to Marie. Plus some very interesting hints on Marie's past.

Loved seeing them reconnect with each other, and to see Logan so caring. Some every good line in this chapter, Logan 's line on his effect on women for example, but best line has to be Logan's unparalleled self control regarding sex one. Can't wait to see how long he can last.

Some great reveals on Logan's and Marie's thoughts and personality. And I'm loving how much of an enigma this Marie is, soon as I thought I got a good handle on her as a character a new surprise comes.

Very much looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Yes, this Logan has learned some things from his past mistakes, and he doesn't want to screw up again.  Haha, the wandering into other people's rooms is irresistible when you live in a mansion I think!  Carol is kind of like a big sister to Marie; I liked the idea of her actually helping Marie, rather than the usual angle of being someone trying to take over Marie's body.  Logan is a cocky one for sure; we'll see how far his unparalleled self control will go, haha.

Reviewer: Killing_time Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/09/2016 2:15:15 PM Title: Dawn

So good, love to see them back in each other's arms, even if they have a lot to work through. I hope he is able to get through to her how important she is/was to him!

Author's Response:

I think Logan finally made a crack in Rogue's armor; now he just has to keep wiggling his way into her heart.  Rogue wants to believe that Logan truly cares for her, even if she's being cautious with her heart right now.  Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Goodkarmaplease Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/09/2016 3:36:23 AM Title: Dawn

Love it when he uses lines from the first movie :) such a touching part, and I loved every minute of it, looking forward to them divulging their pasts to each other. Hope the next part won't be too far away!

Author's Response:

I know, I can't resist using some lines from the first movie!  They are taking things slow now, but they will definitely be revealing some things to each other.  Thanks for commenting!

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