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Reviewer: Solidae Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/22/2019 10:53:03 PM Title: Chapter 10

This is where you lost me. A premature birth in the shower with neither party having any idea has taken what was a promising start and turned it a crack fic. They would have known.

Author's Response: Thanks for your review :) To clear up any confusion, the condition is called a Cryptic Pregnancy, recent studies suggest it effects around 1 in every 475 pregnancies (usually women under 22), it makes the pregnancy undetectable to home pregnancy tests (due to lower than normal hCG levels), no bump, and minimal to no usual pregnancy symptoms. My muses' hypothesis for Logan not realising is that he hadn't been around Marie enough before she got pregnant to be able to pick up the minimal change in hormones, plus, she was on the pill which also effects the hormones, the side effects of which can also explain away any minimal pregnancy symptoms, including no period.

Reviewer: Goodkarmaplease Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/18/2019 2:37:32 PM Title: Chapter 10

Well that’s an absolutely wonderful and surprising part of this fic, welcome baby girl:)

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