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Date: 05/31/2007 3:40:44 AM Title: Chapter 42 - Sauve Qui Peut (Save himself who can)

Those last paragraphs have a frightening feel to them *shudders*


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Date: 05/27/2007 9:31:04 PM Title: Chapter 42 - Sauve Qui Peut (Save himself who can)

Oh, Jo! I'm with ya on the CSI fannage! Once I read your A/N, I could very easily see Mac and the team crawling all over the remains of the Mansion. I Love Mac's dedication to duty, the loyalty he has from his team and the honor he inspires in them. Personally tho, I'd like to do some private investigations of my own with Danny!! That Lindsay is so lucky!

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Date: 05/27/2007 11:36:09 AM Title: Chapter 42 - Sauve Qui Peut (Save himself who can)

OOooooo, this doesn't sound as good as it did 2 paragraphs ago, does it? But I'm still with the 'vacationing' troops...let the evidence speak for itself, the "truth" will come out eventually....touted to the masses, unfortunately, by those that won.

Who was it that said......"Those that do not remember history are doomed to repeat it." I think your use of the word 'reich' is not just coincidence? No?

Author's Response: Your right it isn't just a co-incidence, the world has changed and it will unfold around our players. The machine has been primed for years, all it was waiting for was the right time to act. Unfortunately I'm a CSI fan and I could just *see* Mac and his team in New York trying to get to the bottom of the mess that was left behind. An knowing him, he would, no matter what the cost to himself or those around him. Glad you enjoyed the chapter honey.

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Date: 05/24/2007 2:35:53 AM Title: Chapter 41 - Alterum Tantum (As much again- Twice as much)

LOVED the paragraphs about the wolverine - great addition. And 5 extra points for using 'pugnaciousness'.

Author's Response: I just *had* to have something of him in that chapter, the image of 'The hidden Wolf at the Door', that it had been waiting for a child to get close to the burrow hole so it could pounce on them..... But *He* stopped that, our little Wolverine! Your right Pugnacious is word that should be used more often, lol, thanks honey.

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Date: 05/23/2007 8:58:35 AM Title: Chapter 41 - Alterum Tantum (As much again- Twice as much)

I've always hated the way the media twisted and turned things around; always having it favor one side or the other. So much for freedom of the press, it's a freedeom for who ever can afford to buy it out.

Author's Response: Exactly honey, thats why Emma feels so bad about what's happened to the kids from Xavier's. Their families are going to think they're dead, move on with their lives, have funerals when they're still alive. The sucky thing is this though, *BECAUSE* they've been declared *dead* they have NO rights anymore....what a perfect way to get the things they were promised by Xavier. Don't you think?

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Date: 05/21/2007 3:55:36 PM Title: Chapter 40 - Dies Irae - Evening til Dawn

Awww zebra stripes.

Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2007 1:31:53 PM Title: Chapter 40 - Dies Irae - Evening til Dawn

Wow, I feel sorry for the isolation that has just hit Jubes; but after all that's happened she can't just up and "switch sides" again because she feels sorry for the ultimate untimely death of Xavier. He had no trouble sending innocents to their death, why should 'his' death for their survival mean so much??
I'm glad to see the Logan and Marie have caught a break. I had a feeling about the driver; kinda thought he might be okay. Really glad to see I was right!! Keep up the great work!

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Date: 05/17/2007 2:13:49 PM Title: Chapter 39 - Dies Irae - Noon Til Dusk

Damn I'm wondering if it can get any worse... well maybe I should ask how much worse...

Author's Response: 'When you have this many jackals all feeding from the same carcass you're bound to get the attention of the lions.' Can't remember who said it or where, but I think it fits this situation very, very well. Thanks for the feedback hon.

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Date: 05/17/2007 2:54:09 AM Title: Chapter 38 - Dies Irae - War in Heaven comes to Earth

Damn good battle you wrote!

Author's Response: Thank you honey! Thanks for following me this far babe.

Reviewer: Wolf CrescentWalker Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2007 2:21:16 AM Title: Chapter 38 - Dies Irae - War in Heaven comes to Earth

Jai Shiva! Jai Kali! Nasty, messy story, but well done.

Author's Response: Thanks, I aim to please *takes bow*

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Date: 05/13/2007 4:35:11 PM Title: Chapter 37 - Dies Irae - Morning

Oh, Jo,....who have you brought into the fray now?
>it would be so nice to see his creation come home<
And what the ^%&*%$ is up with the ever-resurrecting Mags??? This is 'more' than just Mystique impersonating him! I'm suspecting Multiple Man???
And...just how far into the day are we, sweetie? Please tell me we're at least up to lunch time?? Huh? Please? And that chapter 38 is coming soon??

Author's Response: Your right about it not being Mystique, and no it's not multiple man, it is however a very sad thing and something Xavier is going to have to live with for the rest of his life. We're just into 11am now, we've got an interlude coming next (well I say interlude but its going to be more like a bloodbath). Then we get to dinner time! And the man watching the soldiers, well *where* did you think Xavier was getting his information *from*? (Evil Grin) All will be revealed in time......trust me.

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Date: 05/13/2007 10:47:49 AM Title: Chapter 37 - Dies Irae - Morning

Uhoh that last part is a vey very evil cliffhanger!

So evil!

Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Valeriusjka Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/11/2007 8:59:41 AM Title: Chapter 36 - DIES IRAE (Judgement Day - Dawn)

WOW.
This turned into one raw blood stained battle ground. Impressive! And even more effectful if you listen to the 300 soundtrack, like I did.

Now I have to wonder if there will be any light after this grey dawn for all the people fighting for their lives.

Reviewer: Wolf CrescentWalker Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 05/11/2007 2:33:53 AM Title: Chapter 36 - DIES IRAE (Judgement Day - Dawn)

What a fantastic association: Rogue as Kali, and Logan as her consort, as she tries to save his humanity. Such a mirroring of Hindu mythology. marvelous chapter - thank you so much!

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2007 1:05:39 PM Title: Chapter 36 - DIES IRAE (Judgement Day - Dawn)

Wow, almost speechless here. Wanna see Xavier get what he's got coming to him, wanna see this vamp dude get his too. Hope you're going to let L/M retain their humanity, it really wouldn't be right, after all they've gone through and done, to just let them fade away from their former selves.
What's with Erik showing up? Thought he was dead? Is he coming to help? Help who? I hope he's on L/M's side, it wouldn't do for him to go helping anyone else.

Please!! Keep 'em coming! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Erik had a very handy little lady didn't he? Mystique can be anyone she wants to be especially when it suits her purpose, like bringing down the person who killed her only friend? And our two heroes? You'll have to wait and see what happens, the day has just started and it's not the worst of it yet. There's more pain to come....

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Date: 05/07/2007 12:21:02 PM Title: Chapter 35 - Veritas Parit Odium (Truth Begets Hatred)

oooo-ooooo-weeeee-oooooo!! Oh yeah! It's getting deep in here, I'm lovin' it!
Don't know what to think about the vamp dude, tho. Seems a little 'out there' even for a universe with super psychics, mega telekenetics, life zapping skin and adamantium coated skeletons. But I'm with ya, Jo! I know you'll wrap it all up in a nice, neat little package for us!

Author's Response: There was once an assasin in the old Wolverine Comics who was a 'vampire' of sorts; I'm just using the old comics as a resource. Logan knows him from *before* theres a lot of 'weirdness' out there still in the Universe. I'm just adding my bit to the weirdness, although the way it's goin it's going to be a 'battle royal' what with the kids trying to get away, The Brotherhood coming, the soliders on the way and Emma's group trying to help. SO who's *your* money on? Thanks for coming with me on this ride honey!

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Date: 05/06/2007 7:21:20 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Vivida Vis Animi (The Vigour of Genius)

Oh, Jo! Are you getting as excited as the rest of us for this little dance to come to an end? I noticed an awful lot of typos in this chappie. That's not like you, is your mind going faster than your fingers can keep up with? Slow it down some and concentrate, sweetie. We'll wait for ya, maybe not patiently ;o) but we want it to be good too!!

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/06/2007 10:02:40 AM Title: Chapter 34 - Vivida Vis Animi (The Vigour of Genius)

Hmmm very interesting secretary... very interesting chapter!

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Date: 05/06/2007 5:58:29 AM Title: Chapter 33 - Ex Voto (The Vow)

As I said before. This is like watching the door to Hades fall open and all the demons run out into the night.

This is the darkest hour for them. It's time to decide what they are and what are they ready to do.

It's sad to see all the treason and broken hurts as a result of it. But also the ignite of either hope to make it better or fury to battle against it.

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Date: 05/06/2007 3:54:43 AM Title: Chapter 33 - Ex Voto (The Vow)

Charles always the puppet master...

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Date: 05/06/2007 3:14:06 AM Title: Chapter 33 - Ex Voto (The Vow)

I adore this chapter. The whole story has been an enjoyment, though I particularly liked the section in the wilds of Canada over winter. This chapter is meaty, almost poetic in parts, and the paragraph about Logan going out camping when all the women got hormonal is just grand!

Author's Response: Heck wouldn't you if your nose could pick up everything in there? LOL! I would, I'm glad your enjoying the story I'm trying to get it as 'real' as possible, the confusion, the upset and the 'what do we do now?' aspects. I'm happy that seems to be working, thanks for the comment hon!

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Date: 05/05/2007 9:04:35 PM Title: Chapter 33 - Ex Voto (The Vow)

Wow….just, whoa…I’m so surprised that ‘Ro just hasn’t completely just lost it. Totally cracked. So much stuff to absorb and process about a man she truly cared for and believed to be a force for good for mutant-kind. And not just ‘regular’ stuff; like a little sumpin’ sumpin’ on the side or some friendly embezzlement. But really bad, manipulative, murderous stuff that no amount of apologies or penance can forgive. I feel so sorry for them all; for what Xavier has done to them, with them and now the trauma of all these truths coming to light. Your writing is very strong and moving, Jo, I adore how you draw me in and make me crazy!

Author's Response: Thanks hon! I always thought Ororo's emotional stability has been in question mainly because of the way she was found. Being a street kid who was abused for many years in Cairo has left deep scars and in the comic books she could have seen Xavier 'kill' using his mind in her home city of Cairo. (Uncanny X-Men I think) Underneath all their powers they're still *human* trying to live a semi normal life. But we all know at what cost now. Thanks for commenting hon, glad your enjoying the ride.

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Date: 05/04/2007 1:19:28 PM Title: Chapter 32 - Ex Mero Motu (From ones own free will)

Wow what a chapter!

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Date: 05/04/2007 8:50:39 AM Title: Chapter 32 - Ex Mero Motu (From ones own free will)

Wow, powerful images and words. The 'beast' is loose and so lost in its madness it's vulnerable for anyone.

This is boiling down, wanting to shot out like magma.

And talking about prices, if Judas got thirty silver coins and paid with his soul...what will have Xavier to pay with?

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/04/2007 8:14:47 AM Title: Chapter 32 - Ex Mero Motu (From ones own free will)

Whoa!
But, I'm slightly confused...I completely get Xavier's need for Jean to help shore up his own abilities. Especially with the internal struggle going on between the darkness and his conscience. But it seems like an opposing reaction for Jean's exclamation to have unleashed his dark side. Shouldn't her discovering all that he's been up to, and her riling against it (and him), have caused the utter distruction of his darker side when he finally found Scott, and by extension, her?

I guess the one good thing that can come from his destructive actions is that commando force from the last chapter 'should' fall to this murderous mental rampage. Shouldn't it??

And also, how sad that even the world's most powerful telepath can't or won't see past the surface level of things. Yes, he may have had a hand in the creation of the Wolverine, but to never have seen beyond that, to still see and think of Logan as just "an animal, a monster" is so very, very sad. But then, I guess it's that very thing, the inability to see those around you as (fellow) human beings, and not just things to be used as a means to an end, that leads one down this road to manipulation, narcissism, megalomania.



Author's Response: Hiya ct_xfan, I'll try to clear up the confusion.... When Charles found Scott he was trying to locate him, trying to use his mind's echoes to get in. Jean's powers are so much stronger than his have ever been now. But the danger is this, she *knows* everything that Scott knew, she has the information about everything he'd ever done while she was there. All the manipulation, all the things he'd done, all the late night conversations about how he should handle her as a lover. She's found out exactly who Charles *is* and what he needed her for. When she shouted NO at him it wasn't his dark side (subconscious) reaching out to Scott it was his conciousness. This is why he's been damaged the way he has and what it'll mean for the rest of them. The force that's on it's way hasn't been killed, Charles's mind struck out blindly, he didn't kill them but some other poor soliders did. An finally the way he'd been using people, Charles had always been fighting for a *race*, individuals don't matter to people like that. We all do it, our own leaders do it but here it's like Cro-Magnon versus Neanderthal. One will come out on top and Charles is backing mutants in his own way. Otherwise why would he have given Marie to Logan or Kitty to Peiter? You gotta give them something to fight for haven't you? Hope that clears a few points up hon. Jo

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