Yes I get the feeking that Logan would not be at all happy about someoone implying he hurt his girls and I have to say Porn-Smurf still gives me a giggle.

It's been a long strange trip, but I'm so glad I took it with you, and I'll be sad to see it end.

Loved this! More please!

Author's Response: Thank you--more very soon!

Oh, you can't leave it there.......Logan and Marie so deserve a happy ending....Pleeeeease?

Author's Response: Im afraid thats as happy as I can give them. The rest is up to your imagination. But, if that doesnt work, here is how I see it: Logan goes back to Marie, takes her from the mansion, and they spend the rest of their days making up for lost time.

I loved it! More please!

My new absolute favorite story!

Author's Response: Wow, thank you very much!

Yes, Please update soon! There are so many WIPs that seem to have stalled I almost wish the site wouldn't allow any stoties that aren't finished.

Author's Response: I know the feeling. At the same time, if I hadn\'t posted this as a WIP, it probably never would have made it past the first chapter, so please let that reassure you. I\'ve already gone sixteen chapters past what I thought I could with this one!

I have been finding that Lady Gaga's Bad Romance is just the perfect soundtrack to this storyline, did this song inspire you?

Author's Response: Haha, not at all, sorry; although I\'m quite interested in Lady Gaga as a performance artist, I don\'t listen to her songs that often. That said, after reading this comment, I just listened to the song--and yeah, I can see how it would be fun, too! (Though my favorite of hers is \"Paparazzi.\") But generally, I listen to the songs that inspired the chapter titles and are mentioned in the chapter notes; typically on repeat. So after the last chapter, I\'m STILL listening to The Antlers\' \"Wake.\" Uplifting! ...not. ;)

Every chapter is better than the last. I swear my heart is breaking for Logan, Remy and Rogue.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading! And thank you for your heartbreak... it is much appreciated by this writer.

I think this story is progressing wonderfully. Please continue.

I think you're absolutely right, the slow and gradual building of their relationship is much more realistic and such fun to read! Can't wait to see where this ride takes us.

Ok, I would really like to help, but I don't want to come across sounding really critical. The reason I , personally lost interest, was because the story after the first few chapters seemed to really lose focus and also began seeming not very believable, as in it seemed more like events that might have happened in real life with names and a few details changed. I always hesitate to criticize an author's work because I know how hard the creative process is, but some stories begin to read like one big Mary Sue, if that makes any sense, I hope something I have written helps you and that you take it in the spirit it was intended. Please keep writing.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the feedback. That makes a lot of sence actually, and I didn\'t find it offensive at all. I appreciate your comment. Thanks

I think you did very well. I couldn't help but laugh right along with Rogue when Remy asked his question.