The Wolverine & Rogue Fanfiction Archive
Barely Legal Since 2000
This chapter is so sad but at the same time so romantic. For Marie it must be so hard to deal with Logan when he is thinking in Jean. That type of love, where you are totally and madly in love with someone and must to be there for him even if he doesn´t see how much he´s hurting you… well, it´s simply so sad. But I think it is a beautiful way to love someone. She wants him to be happy, or only the normal-badass-Logan, she wants him to forget all this pain because maybe then he´ll look at her and see the truth feelings she has.
I like a lot the part when she´s in the bar and he´s sooo drunk that doesn´t see her there. I can imagine it perfectly… the smoke, smelling the sour aroma of alcohol, the sadness, the pain of watching him saying that he loves you even when you can say that he´s thinking in other woman.
In the last half, when they´re in Marie´s apartment, in the bed… I like it, even if it´ll be a mistake later, I had done the same thing. I like how you´ve write that moment when she thinks “if I can´t have everything, at least I want one night, I want to feel loved physically.”
Angst and drama are always good, and the chapter is all this with little touches of sad romance.
Author's Response: This was the culmination of weeks of listening to the song that this chapter is named after. Sitting there at my computer desk, listening to music. *kicks it* stupid radio station.
She wants and loves him so much that she\'s really ready and willing to risk everything they have. Also, she\'s so overcom with what-if\'s and maybe\'s that sshe doesn\'t see the clues all around her. Silly Marie. Always making it harder on her self.
I\'m glad you liked this kick off. It was supposed to be a oneshot, but due to overwhelming response, it\'s abviously continued.
The first time that I read this fanfic I remember that I loved (and still love) the fact that Marie takes Logan´s jacket with her, and that she sleeps/wears it. That duality of run away of him and want to have a part of Logan with her is so beautiful. I really love this type of stories where they make a lot of mistakes and suffer until they know how the things really are. Like a path that is necessary to walk because if you don´t do it you will never understand your mistakes and what made you have that future-life in the end.
Other thing that I like about this chapter is the motel moment. When she´s in the bed after having a hot/sweet dream and hears the motorcycle. How scared she was because a part of her wanted to be found, but other part doesn´t know what she wants. Normally, when she runs away, he never found her until they both are ready to be together. I like that you made this difference. Logan is good following her, so it is more real if they cross other´s path.
Author's Response: Yeah. She wants to leave him, to save face, but she loves him too much to let him go.
She wants to run from him, but she wants to be found. You\'ll notice that she went to Canada, where he would untimately look for her, and she never really conceals her presence, but she makes him have to work for it. All of this is subconcious.
I *love* this chapter. I like a lot how Marie starts to understand everything. The fact that she believed that Logan only have Jean in mind and later she was discovering that the draw was her, not Jean.
The fact that in the end, after all these weeks running and wanting to hide of Logan, she made stops in a lot of places and do “stupid” things like the cheeseburger in the striptease club… is cute. She could have stop in a town and wait for him to found her, but she wanted to be found like if she hasn´t stop. Al least, in the beginning.
The attack of the man in the motel, and the eternal-knight-in-shinning-adamantium-Logan is so good. I sigh a big “awwwwwwwwww” when she says: “You smell so good, I’ve missed it so much. You coat barely smells like you anymore. It’s just really faint right here at the collar. Mostly it smells like me now.” She was so open right there, like if she was tired of hide her feelings, of running away, of everything. She only wanted to say “I missed you” and forgets everything.
Author's Response: The drawing was something that i had in mind at the beginning of the first chapter. Logan\'s feelings for her had been growing and morphing long before either of them realized.
Actually the trail in concidental. Because she realzies that if she just stops and waits, it\'ll be hard for him to find her. Because he\'d still be looking. So, while on her trek to a suitable place, she leave a pretty obviouly blatant trail. And she makes sure to do memorable things.
She\'s so very lost in her own actions that she forgets that there\'s a mean world all around her. It\'s part of who she is, and a long lasting effect of life at the mansion. She\'s forgotten the harsh realities that are out there. Luckily for her, Logan\'s just as eager to see her, and he hasn\'t forgotten the harsh world. I figure creeps are everywhere, you just have to know where to look.
Well… this will be the review of the quotes because there are sooo much phrases that I *must* to quote. You´ve my heart making triple-axels and double-mortals all the time.
(“I breathed him in like the elixir of life and it calmed me a little bit”) beautiful, simply.
(“You don’t do that, not with me,” he said pulling my face to his neck. He pulled off my coat, hoodie and gloves while I cried into his neck.) I hate you!! Because I read things like this, so cute, so sweet even when they´re simple and I go to my project-of-boyfriend and look at him like “¬¬ you´re not the Logan of the Rogan fanfics.”
(“I can hear your heartbeat.” There was awe in my voice when I spoke. I could feel him smile into my hair.) I *love* how you can write something normal like this and made me fall totally in love. I prefer when a normal phrase in a special context made my heart jump, than a fluff phrase with a lot of fluffy words.
You must be tired of me telling all the time “I love that” and “I like this” but it is what I feel. Even if it is the second time that I´ve read this fanfic, I´m so excited. Well, I´ve read it long time ago (*cough*I-want-more-soon*cough*) so I´ve forget a lot of things. It´s like reading it for the first time, except the fact that I remember half of the things that will be happening.
I´ve always liked a lot when they go to Logan´s cabin. Even if it is for a little time, the fact that they´re together and alone out there is so romantic. Who in her right mind will not want to be alone with Logan in a one-room cabin? For all I care he can take a shower in my living room, wake up in my kitchen-bedroom-everything-in-one and even cut his toenails in my carpet.
Author's Response: LOL. Wouldn\'t we all want Logan showering in the living room o.O.
I tried my best o convey the wide range of emotions that Rogue is having in this fic. She\'s just a jumbled box of shit at this point. She scared an confused and awed. And she\'s still dealing with the fact that he\'s here.
Leave your poor boyfriend alone. It\'s not his fault.
One more quote!!!!!!
He took my face in his hands and tilted my face up. “Marie,” he said looking into my eyes. “I fucked up. Big. It took you leaving for me to realize that I might actually lose you. It took me losing you to realize that you’re all I ever wanted.” He leaned close, and his lips met mine for the first time since that fateful night. “If you’ll have me, I want you to share everything that I am. I’m yours Marie, plain and simple. So yeah,” he grinned placing another kiss on the tip of my nose. “Put your stuff in the dresser.”
OMG! I HATE YOU MORE! I´m a crybaby and right now I´ve tears in my eyes. I *fucking* love this fanfic!! Logan isn´t the romantic guy, but when he say something like that my panties fall to the floor. This is your “good stuff”!!
The way you always surprise us with this fic is amazing! When you think that *maybe* you´re near of understand what is happening, it changes. That is sooo good!
. I WANT MORE LAST CALL!! What can I do to inspire your muse? Chocolate? Ice-cream? Naked Logan? Smut? Cookies? Porn? You ask, I´ll provide.
Author's Response: Reviews like thist are what inspire me to write more. It\'s more about what order I update in than it is about things getting updated. You really should look into Futures Unknown, because that\'s my baby of my rogan fics. But, if you want to move Last Call up on the udate list, that means pimp it to your friends and make them review. *evil author laughter* I\'m glad that you like my Non-romantic-but-he-really-cares Logan.
This *is* my favorite chapter. It was time that Marie says all the things that she has inside. It must to be so hard to see all those feelings (pity, sadness, need, hate…) in the face of the people and deal with it because you can´t ask for help because the person that can help you is the person who *need* your help. You write that part amazingly. I can feel her hate and her sadness, I can feel that exact moment when you need to say all those hateful things and you want to stop because they´re making your partner miserable but all the same time you don´t want to stop because you really need to say it all. So so good. Your angst stuff is good, girl.
The scene where she sends him flying into the tree was surprising. I´ve always love the drama post-touching, when she feels guilty and she is begin that he´s ok. This is like that, so I love it.
I remember how incredibly surprised I was when he say that she´s pregnant. MUAHAHAHA *evil laugh* Logan has good soldiers. One night and BOOM!
Author's Response: You think this is good angst. *pbbbt* You need to read The Truth. *grin*
LOL. Don\'t forget that Marie\'s got like a 5 day span. LOL
I love Maries uncontrollable powers. They\'re freaking amazing. And I tried to drop pregnancy hints all along the way.
I *hate* Emma with all my soul. She´s a stupid bitch, but I´m laughing my pajamas covered ass with the PVC thing. (Ok, this is in the next chapter…)
Well, this will be my first no-100%-hearts-flying review, but it´s not something bad. I´m only thinking about some things, you know… In the beginning, the fanfic was so angst and I understand that they need to progress and change and discover what they want and what to do to have it, but… I´m feeling like if this Logan isn’t the same of the beginning. I love the “fluff” and the fact that he´s there calming/loving her but I miss some little-moment when the fear/guilt is eating him alive. You know, looking at how he was with the Jean thing, and with Marie now in some type of possible danger or hurting, I´m expecting a Logan waking up in the middle of the night because he needs to see Marie sleeping (making sure that she´s ok) or late in the night thinking about everything. That type of moments that are totally-angsty-Logan.I think that when you are the type of person that have been touching the bottom of live because the guilty or the sadness, you *have* some moments when you can´t stop the need to drown yourself in that darkness. Maybe this is only my silly thinking, but I wanted to say it. *blush* I can´t believe that I´m saying you that I want them to suffer more… O__o
Marie impresses me. I like that she´s pissed off, tired and shows it. It´s like “I´m pregnant and I´ll not allow you to piss me off more! So shut the fuck up!” but at the same time she´s trying to be nice with the people who is good.
Author's Response: I get what you\'re saying, but this is all from Marie\'s POV. So we don\'t know what\'s going through Logan\'s head. Here\'s a tip though. After Marie\'s little explosion, he\'s being everything that he thinks she wants. Which is great and all, but eventually she\'ll blow up again. *grin*
Here we come with the bitch and her PVC-now-polyester-covered-ass. This “woman” is the second one in my list of hates after Jean (even if I like Jean in the fics where she´s like a big sis to Rogue). I can´t believe that they married her with Scott in the comics. *biting her own tongue*
Nice chapter. I´ve not read a lot of fanfic where they talk about the details of Rogue´s pregnancy. It´s always good when you read something new. :D
All this theory about the powers of a pregnant woman is so good. It´s so credible. I can´t wait for all the surprises that you can give us with this plot. Funny, dramatic, … you can write everything. I´ll say it once more. What can I offer to your muse? I can kidnap you that boy of Doom, I can tie him to your bed, I can be your loyal slave… *trembling bottom lip* Pleaseee moreeee Last Call…. *shining eyes*
Have I say that I hate Emma? No? My mistake. I HATE HER!!
Author's Response: I like both Jean and Emma. They are both amazing charactrs with wonderful plot development points and exciting ersonality traits. Plus they\'re a ton of fun. And they\'re both equally enjoyable when fully distracted by Scott.
Karl Urban, tied to my bed. I\'d have to find a good hiding place for him while the hubby is at home. *devious look* Remember what I said, pimp pimp pimp. Also, realistic happenings are one of my fall back points. If something isn\'t plausible or doesn\'t make any sense in a fic, it turns me off immediately and I can\'t take the story seriously. So. There you have it.
Nice fanfic!! I can´t wait for the next chapter.
Well, I really love the fanfics where they meet, but not exactly like the movieverse... a little different. And, that is really good!
Please, i want the next chapter soon! you´re so good!!
So sooo good!
I absolutly *love* your fanfic. The UST is amazing. This story is very good and the characters very real.
I hope that the next chapter comes soon. :D
Nice and funny story!
Aw, Logan is a little stupid and slow sometimes. He loves her, she loves him. Is it that hard? NO, logan, not hard. ¬¬
I can´t believe this is your first fanfic. It´s really good for a first one. My first fanfic was a mess and soooo bad! xD.
^__^ good job!
Author's Response: thank youuu :) \r\nand yeah Logan *is* a little slow sometimes ;) he\'s a man, what do we expect... ^^\r\noh and it was my first or one of my first X-Men fanfics, but I\'ve written other stuff before. messy, plothole-ridden, disastrous stuff haha
Yeah, it´s really sad, but I like it. Maybe because I can feel the feelings of Rogue, maybe because I can understand her... but, yeah. I like this story and the hope that you can find in the end.
You´re so good. Really, girl, your readers can feel their feelings so easily. That´s something really hard, but you can do it.
I must quote this phrase, because it´s so real...
" Just one more and she would feel better. Just one..."
So touching... so sad... so real.
I´ll search other story. :) I hope I can find something happy xDDD.
Oh, and I like the song!!
Well, the first thing I must to say is that i´m spanish and my english sucks, so please forget and forgive all me grammar mistakes.
Oh my... your fanfic is simply amazing. I´m really impressed. I have registered in the web because I want to write this review. I started your fic like 2 hours ago and... wow! It´s like read a VERY GOOD version of the movie.
In a lot of fanfics the writers don´t catch the essence of the characters, but in your I can feel the true Marie and Logan, and that "something" special between them.
I´ll read you until the end, and pleaseeee update this story soon because I have no more nails to bite and I´m starting with the finger xDD.
I want to quote a lot of phrase, because I´m feeling a lot of things all the time I read some special phrases, but there are so much...
Thank you, really, thank you for this amazing story. I´ll search more stories in your profile.
PLEASE GIVE ONE MORE CHAP! XD
awwwww *sad sigh*
I really liked you... ¬¬ but not now! (well, no, I still like you , but only because "Sweet troubled soul").
I was reading this, hoping that Logan was secretly in love with her. Yeah, I´m a fool, but I´ve hope hahaha.
How sad... poor Rogue. It´s so hard to love someone and to know that he "loves" someone else. And... wow! you´re so bad! I can´t imagine how hard must be to smell other woman in the shirt, or even worst, in the skin of that man.
bad bad girl! ¬¬
*searching a happy-end fanfic writen by you*
Author's Response: oh my gosh, I had totally forgotten I even wrote this fic (yeah I block out painful memories lol)...it really is sad :( \r\nbut there\'s plenty happier stuff on here, don\'t worry ^^ (and ahh please go read them quickly so you can stop hating me, lol)
I love your fanfic.
I see it everyday in fanfiction, but I don´t know why I never read it. Today, I was so bored and well... here I´m asking myself why the hell I was so stupid. The fic is SO SO good!
Poor Rogue, it must be so hard. I only find a little something that doesn´t look very real for me. Rogue was raped, but it´s like nothing happens. I think I miss more emocional pain, more tears... It was so "easy" for her to have sex with havok. Sorry, I hope I don´t sound like a bitchy reviewer.
Really, I love everything. You´re so good. A very talented writer. The story is so real, the characters have the same personality.
I CAN´T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!
It´s so cute (in a strange way) the relationship between Victor and Rogue. I love it. It´s so different, but so real. I can perfectly imagine Victor like that. After all, he´s Logan´s bro. Isn´t he?
And that jealous Logan. *evil laugh* thanks for that! I´m tired of poor-little-rogue-because-she-must-see-logan-and-his-large-sex-live. I wanted this. Rogue with some men sniffing around her, and Logan jealous.
PLEASE, UPDATE IT SOON!
I´m sorry about my sucking-english. I´m spanish.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the feedback. I am really glad to see that you decided to read this little fic. The whole thing with Rogue is that she\'s slowly healing. She hasn\'t let go of what has happened with the rape yet, but she\'s on her way. She\'s still kind of running from it. There will be more on it later, though. She will have to confront what she has had to go through. The whole thing with havok is that, even though she went to him easily, it will ultimately be essential in her healing process once she gets to that point. She\'s already touched on it to some extent, but, for the most part, she\'s trying to push the whole experience away and ignore it.\r\n\r\nWith the relationship between Victor and Rogue, it\'s something that I\'ve always wanted to try. The three mutant (Rogue, Sabretooth, Logan) are so similar to me. Their personalities and how none of them hold back. Seeing as how Logan and Victor already have the hate/hate relationship, it just makes since that Rogue would be the one to bond with both men. But, no, I have made it a point from the beginning that the two feral men are not brothers. But, they do have a past together.\r\n\r\nWith Rogue and Logan, she needs to know that he\'s not her only option, which was why I decided on the Havok/Rogue pairing. \r\n\r\nThanks for the review. The next chapter will be up soon!
Oh, I love this fanfiction!!!
I like the hate-love between marie and logan. It´s so hot!
I can´t wait for the next chapter!!
I must say that I´ve been reading your fanfic since the first chapter, but english isn´t my first language so it´s a little hard for me to write reviews. I´m sorry, I write ff and I know how it feels when someone read your work but don´t write a comment.
I say this because I want to make you understand how much I love your fanfic. Normally I feel so shy about my reviews and my english (i´m good reading it, but to write it is a little hard).
You´re so good! I really can´t wait more!!! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR YOUR NICE WORK!! This chapter was so... HOT!
OMG! love you girl!
Author's Response: THANK YOU!! The fact that you took the time to write such an awesome review absolutely made my day! I\'m so glad you like the story. I\'m having a lot of fun creating this world for Logan and Marie to play in and I\'m very happy to know that others are enjoying it as well. I\'m working very hard on the next chapter and I hope it lives up to everyone\'s expectations. Thanks again!
I can´t believe how hot is this fanfic!!! Normally, i don´t read a lot of dark-ff, but this one is really good!
I can´t wait for the next chapter, and of course I´ll send you more reviews in every one of them.
English isn´t my first language, but I hope I can write good reviews for you, because "OMG" YOU ´RE SO GOOD!!!
This Logan is so wild, and I love it. But in some parts i feel sadness... Rogue is so innocent, so scared, ... But well, I like the relationship between them.
HOT HOT HOTTTT *Lee sings* ~
Good luck with this story!! :)
Author's Response: Thank you for the wonderful feedback, let me know what you think of him in chapter 5. He is up to some interesting stuff there.
xDD I´m still laughing with your "chapter end notes"...
Well, the fanfic is so damn good. A little short (I´m a perv, I always want more xD), but really good.
Mmmm... I want Logan!!!
Hot, funny and nice. You´ve made a very very good job!! I hope I can read more smut like that...
I *love* your fanfic. It´s so good. Are you thinking in a sequel or a second chapter or something like that? I know, surely not, but a reader must try.
Really, you´ve an amazing plot here. I´m sure that a lot of readers will love if you write more of this hot story.
Thanks for this moment of absolutly Rogan bliss.
You´ve read my review!! and you´ve write a "second" chapter!!!!! I´m soooooooooooooooooo happy!!!
Really, this fanfic is very good. I´m a horny girl, I love nc17!!!! Thank you so much!!! I hope this will be a long serie.
OMG!!! I was so thrilled when I saw the "author´s notes" I wanted to scream "I´M THAT REVIEWER!!! *evil laugh*
***SORRY, DUPLICATED REVIEW BECAUSE IT WAS INCOMPLETE ***
Oh!!! This one is yours too!!! xD I´m feeling very stalker-like now.
I read this one some time ago (even if I didn´t remember it until I was reading it tonight). I´m not sure if i left a review since I have started to leave them recently. (shy about my english.I can read and traslate english-spanish easily, but I suck at writting in english :P)
Well, first of all I love how the titles are so perfect for each chapter. I loved how you used science words.
I´m in a hurry so I can´t leave a long review as I wish, but... well!! This fanfic was beautiful, very good and I liked all that "Oh...OH! So all this is because I love her!". hahaha. It´s nice to see Logan like that, scared and confused because his own feelings.
love love love!!! You´re officially my fav Rogan writter!!!
Author's Response: Girl, believe me: I have never been so happy to be stalked. Feel free to do it as much as you like. :~) You are fantastic, and your english is about as good as anyone else\'s here. Thank you so much.
here I am once more. This is the best fanfic I ever read. And believe me, that´s saying something. (I have read all the ff.net ones and the 80% of the fanfics here).
I love how you never make it look as if it was easy for Marie to heal. I mean, even in dark themed fanfics they heal and become a new "happy" person after some chapters. But in yours she´s marked for everything, even in the end. I loved that. You´re very very good at writting realistic fanfics.
Sorry for not leaving reviews in each chapter. I read this one on my phone (and I didn´t want to stop even if I had to take a bus, or walk in the street. lol. I think a car almost ran over me but I was soooo into the fanfic that I didn´t mind it. xD)
I have to words to say you how much I loved this fanfic. This goes to my TOP10. Hell, it goes to my TOP3!!
Author's Response: Hello! This review was like the cherry-and the whip cream-and the caramel syrup- on my day. Ive waited forever for someone to say that. Thank you. >hugs< Im glad you liked it, and that you didn\'t get by a car.
Oh!! I´m loving this fanfic!
The characters are totally real. Normally people change something and they´re out-of-character. But here they´re the Marie and Logan from the movie, and I love that.
The plot is interesting, and I´m truly intrigued by the first part and how they came to that. Very very good job!! I will keep reading and reviewing!!
Author's Response: Ohmygod! Thank you so much. I love when people think I do the characters right. It makes my day. I hope you continue to enjoy/review.
I love misunderstandings like this. And I´m a bitch, but I love to see them suffer like this. Bring the Angst, I love it!!
Author's Response: Thankyouthankyouthankyouthankyou! Its great that you like angst, cuz this fic is chocobox full of it.
More reviews for you because I´m loving this. I wanted to send you 1 review for chapter, but I´m sooo into the reading that I don´t even want to stop to review. ahahaha Sorry!
I will just say that I´m loving this story and how you´re writting it.
Author's Response: >hugs tightly< Im grateful for any review you give. Gracias.