This chapter was superb. I absolutely love your description of Logan in the cage (phew, has the temperature gone up in here?!) and I adore your incorporation of the X1 lines.

Also, great line: “Perfect polished skin, untouched, unmarked, dancing almost silently and always alone. I should have been more careful what I wished for.”

I'm hoping to finish the rest of this story this evening, life permitting...

“She packs a punch dude, a scary, dangerous-I didn’t know you could go down like that-punch!” – love that line.

“I may have to set the record straight with her later, make sure she realises he’s a complete dick.” – hahaha!

P.S. I agree that London is over-priced and cold, but boring it most certainly is not! ;-)

This story is wonderfully written and I love that you stay true to character. It’s exactly how I would expect Logan and Marie to handle the situation they find themselves in.

I especially liked this line from chapter three:

“I trust you,” I hear the words breathed into my hair, and I think those are the most profound, most loving, most respectful words this man could say to anyone.

So looking forward to more…

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I try really hard to stay in character, to the point of running the dialogue through my head and hearing it in their voices, to see if it sounds real enough. Magneto\'s voice comes clearest for me, and I enjoy writing him, so I should do that more.... and also question my personal ethics while I\'m at it.

Loved it! Jubes – great! But especially loved the Scott/Logan banter. This is right up my street...More please…X

Author's Response: Jubes is one of my all time favorite characters to write. :D Thanks!

I liked how you portrayed Logan, particularly in the middle chapters. Very sweet!

It's dark. And I like dark.

Can't wait for more...

Author's Response: Oops. I guess I should have put the category up, too... Fixing... :)

Great start! Your writing flows, making it so easy to read.

I can’t wait for the usual suspects to be introduced… :-)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! It makes writing it seem even more worthwhile. I work hard to make sure it reads well. There are 2 more chapters up for you to enjoy. I hope you do!

This is the best chapter yet! Mainly:

1. The way you portray Jubilee. “Logan's a guest. And seriously, babe,” she turned to Marie, “it wouldn't matter if he was 500 years old. The man is hot and you know it.”

2. Caleb. Great character. “I don’t know anything about anybody,” Caleb held up his hand to ward off any further questions. “If you think there might be something to talk about, you’d better ask somebody who knows something and that definitely isn't me.”

And as I’ve already mentioned in previous reviews, I love your portrayal of Logan.

Looking forward to Twist and Shout x

Author's Response: Thank you! I may have said it before, but I love Jubilee! She is so much fun to write. She can get away with saying and doing just about anything. Original characters can be anything I want them to be so without any constraints on them they are really fun to flesh out. I\'m so glad you liked it. This chapter took me a while to figure out for some reason so I\'m really glad you felt it was the best yet. Thanks again!

“Marie had closed her eyes, breathing in the intoxicating male scent that was pure Logan.”

Hot, hot, hot! Loved it! X

Author's Response: I\'m finding it\'s pretty easy to write Logan/Marie lovin\'. ;) You asked in response to a review I left if I found myself changing directions/scenarios while writing a chapter and I have to say a great big YES! I write lots of different ideas and then have to decide which direction I really want to go from there before I can figure out what I want to use for a final draft. At least I know I\'ve got lots of ideas for future stories! Thanks for reviewing!!

As ever, I so look forward to your updates. This story always makes me smile. Don't leave it so long for the next chapter...x

Author's Response: Thanks! I\'m working feverishly and the next chapter will (hopefully) be worth the wait!

That was so amazingly written I am stunned! Wow wow wow! And hot hot hot!

I agree with Logan – “Yep, it was definitely sex and not a fight that she needed.” Haha!

I’m truly sorry to hear about your hubby and so glad he’s getting better and you’re back to this. I was wondering where you were, I’ve been awaiting this update…

This was excellent! xx

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I\'m glad you liked it. This chapter seemed to almost write itself. I wasn\'t sure what was going to happen but Logan and Marie kind of just took over and that was it....the story was set. The next chapter\'s started already and hopefully will be up much much sooner than this one was!\r\n\r\nI kept telling my husband to hurry up and get better so I\'d have the time and energy to start writing again. Being what was essentially a single mom for a month gives me a whole new appreciation for women who do it all the time! Thanks for reviewing!

Love, love, love this. And...I love this!

I can’t breathe...!

Author's Response: :) Thank you, hope you are still reading, chpater 6 is up.