Hell, he’d even started to avoid Scott.

You have my undying love for that line. Made me all sorts of giggly happy.

~Mia

I am completely hooked into this story. It is amazing. The only downside I have found with it is the tendency for your characters to say GD. But your writing is excellent the plot is devastatingly twisty, the angst is purposeful and the chase is addictive and thrilling. Thank you for this glorious chunk of distraction.

~Mia

Holy crap I love all this fighting. So damn much. Thank you.

~Mia

Oh my goodness. Thank you. That was an apallingly beautiful chapter. Just, overwhelmingly so. I loved the justice of it. Just the right touch of sin and deep guilt and pain and redemption..

~Mia

This is touching and tragic and so damn beautiful. I love your self centered Jean. I love that Cyke trusts her implicitly. I love that Chuck isn't perfect. I also love that you haven't yet turned them into full stop evil paragons. I love that she whispered her name. I love that Logan wished he could trade his fuzzy nights with her nightmare riddled ones. I love that golf is not a sport and that Jean has less than no tact and that he calls her baby and that they need to get the hell out of that place.

Thank you for the beautiful mess. It's quite moving.

~Mia

Author's Response: Ohmygod. Thank you for the uber-kind review. It\'s very moving itself.

Cliches often become what they are because they are damned good and useful and effective. Your cliche usage is beautiful. My goodness, you do keep Charles' insanity carefully under wraps don't you. I found it amusing that such a breathing contradiction was questioning Logan's sanity. Wow. This was an amazing chapter. I loved the violence passionately. I wished it could last longer, but I'm sick like that. You did yourself proud, Baby. Just absolutely excellent writing. Please more? I'm afraid that I don't do the asphyxiated look well. DOn't make me hold my breath please?

Thank you, again, for this. Made my day.

~Mia

Author's Response: This review made my day. >hugs tightly< Thanks alot. I\'ll try to get the final chapter up this weekend.

Holy shitty shit shit shit shitty shit! Thank you for a bit of genuine joyful hot messiness. You just made my day! It is absolutley fantastic. Thank you.

~Mia

Author's Response: glad you enjoyed it, mia...

My dear Hobbitses,

Under pain of a torturous and most unpleasant death, I implore you to finish the hell out of this thing.

Unless, of course, you don't resond well to threats in your fanmail. In that case, I am not above matching the beast and nightcrawler in their prefered shades of blue if holding my breath will get me more of your glorious, possibly British, insanely appealing humour.

First chapter? Almost better than Wolverine and X1 combined. Definitely better than X3. I want to send this to the powers that be in Hollywood and force them to hire you as script consultant and head planner of all future things that pertain to Wolverine. Because that was brutally beautiful. Thank you. Made my fricking day.

~Mia

Seriously, reviews are better than crack and cheaper than men.

I'd have reversed that, really.

My goodness, you glorious bit of Hobbit. You have a way with violence that makes me want to marry you. Glad to have you at the reigns of Rogan. Thank you so much for the blood and the throat slitting and the pissed off Logan and the pervy 'Tooth and every damn wonderful thing. You make my brain itch from trying to will more of your words onto the screen. Why Isn't. It. Fucking. Working? Dammit.

~Mia

My goodness, your way with descriptives just.. they leave me with few of my own. The kicking the shin part strikes home for me. The first time my Mom met my Dad's sister, her nephew ran up, kicked her in the shin as hard as hell and ran off while his mother smiled indulgently and said, "Boys. Whatcha gonna do." Seriously.

Well, not British. Hmm, got the right continent though that's not saying much huh. Still, I love reading those minor tells of yours. Actually adds to the fun, in my opinion.

YOU TIED THIS IN WITH IRONMAN? Do you even KNOW how hard you rock right now? Thank you so fecking much my wonderful Hoblette.

~Mia

Oh my wonderful hobbit. I would invent a device that would allow me to reach through the computer and kiss you for this chapter. But I am outrageously underfunded and inadequately educated for such a task. I love all the twistiness, though I'd have made the readers twist in the wind about I boy's motives for a chapter more or so. I was expecting, for just a moment, that it would be WOlverine's cell coming up on his screen.

You make me deliriously happy with your writing. Thank you.

~Mia

Author's Response: well, there\'s more twistiness from tony. just keep tuning in. but i digress... thanks again for the reviews, glad you\'re enjoying it still... hobbits away, hey!