This was overwhelmingly wonderful to read. Just horrific enough that I want to peel the skin off of "His" face. But not so horrifying that I want to boil it and make him eat it. Yet. Thank you in my own roundabout creepy little way.

~Mia

Author's Response: Well, you might wanna put a pot of water on the stove because things dont get much lighter in chapter six. Thank you. Im very grateful for your creepitude.

Thank you for the retribution violence and for the promised violence to come. It was a gorious (pun intended) beautiful mess. I am extremely oddly relieved to know what happened, sort of. Even though it was worse than what I had thought. The mutation pull is also relieving and extremely encouraging. I was slightly thrown by the description of a bottle cap ring in her foot. Did she step on the rim of a broken bottle trying to get away? Was it forcefully inserted?

Thank you for all of this. Late or not.

~Mia

Author's Response: Thankyouthankyouthankyouthankyou. That really means a lot to me. (And she stepped on it. I might clarify that later).

The link didn't work. This chapter just felt like a sad little necessary sigh along the storyline. I want to slap the clerk lady though. Although, come to think of it, it's probably a good thing she doesn't have enough morals to act on her suspicions and call the cops like any other decent human being. Your story is rather shy of those, isn't it? Hell, the hero in this story, as wonderfully unlawful good as he may be, would definitely NOT describe himself in the decent human being category, would he?

~Mia

Author's Response: Well, golly gosh darnitt. >stamps foot< Don\'t worry, Im fairly certain if I glare hard enough the link will fix itself. Thank you+a hug+tiramisu.

Thank you. Despite the vanilla, the lack of bleeding and screaming fits, this had me on edge the whole time. Thank you.

~Mia

Author's Response: Aaaaw!! Thank you!

De nada, querida.

~Mia

I'd ask Santa, but he's been ignoring me since I started sending him all those lists begging for Hugh Jackman.

That fat bastard has been ignoring me for the same reason. I mean really, it's not like I wouldn't share or anything. Eventually. For bragging purposes. You understand, I'm sure.

~Mia

Author's Response: I\'m sure we could figure out some kind of joint-custody thing. I mean, a girl\'s gotta sleep, right?

Holy hell, I love this thing.

~Mia

Want more. This is so interesting.

~Mia

I love it. I really do. Thank you for a fight conversation that is actually realistic and not just some fabricated Days of Our Lives crapola.

~Mia

This one needs a food warning. I'm still sweeping um sandwich bits from my keyboard due to Pete's dance lesson extraordinaire. Thank you so much. Wonderful sense of humour. Thank you so very much. This was a really fun read tonight.

~Mia

It's just as well that they were interrupted. Rogue is clearly on her menstrual cycle. No woman that is that close to a Logan induced orgasm should ever resort to being that publicly bitchy about something so trivial. Especially not when he's even rationally explaining things and...shirtless and growly and stuff.

Um...if Rogue isn't having him tonight...do you mind if I borrow him for a bit. I swear I won't wear out his mutation...this time.

Surprisingly, I loved his ex. She is insightful and bold and not a bitchy bimbo. No wonder Rogue felt like second fiddle. Kind of. Still think she overreacted a smidgen.

~Mia

They better name one of their kids after me, made me howl with laughter. Even if it's a girl made me wake up my daughter from a dead sleep on accident. Damn but I have missed your sense of humour.

~Mia

Your story has some real potential and I can see the raw talent you have. But your issues with spelling, grammar and flow make it like reading code. Sometimes it is clear, at other times your intent must be sorted out to understand what you just read. You really, really need a beta. If you actually want one, I'd be interested. You have a lot of potential with this story.