The Wolverine & Rogue Fanfiction Archive
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There's something about the color red that really brings out the 'amazing' in you. Loved this. Loved how you captured the idea that in a relationship, silence is anything but golden -- it's black as death. Good for Logan for never shutting up and never giving up, because that made all the difference. --Wendie
*pant*, *pant*, *pant* --OH, YES, OH GAAAWWWWD!
I'm with Corinne on this one -- 100 percent. You DO have a gift. I may have to make my husband read this one... --Wendie
This was lovely. Sad and lovely. I applaud your discipline in sticking to your chose style here. It works beautifully and provides the subtle hints along the way that prepare us for the gravestone--and his final departure--at the end. --Wendie
Ditto my review for your Logan POV piece. The romantic connection is there, whether you intended to write it or not. I suppose that's what the shrinks call 'projection'--me inflicting my beliefs about the characters onto your words--but, either way, I still liked the poem. --Wendie
OK, I swear that when I opened this story I was only interested in finding out what your hometown was. Had no intention of reading the whole thing. Well, you can see how that worked out. I LOVE the way you write these two characters. Absolutely love it--so real, so organic--nothing forced. You just disappear and let the two of them BE. It's wonderful. --Wendie
Author's Response: Oh, you found Battles, did you? Well, here\'s a little secret: It\'s one of my favorites. If I\'m allowed to have favorites. Thank you for visiting Brooklyn!
Oooohh...a very good game. --Wendie
Is there anything more delightful than Logan/Scott foof? Well, yes, there is YOUR Logan/Scott foof. I bow to the master. --Wendie
Some twists are more tasty than others...This one was SCRUMPTIOUS! *pant*, *pant*, *pant* --Wendie
'Dark' is something of an understatement when describing this amazing work. This is way past 'dark'; it's 'extra deep deep dark', like chocolate that's 80 percent cacao. Nothing sweet about it, but, nutritionally speaking, it's a near perfect food...Delicious! --Wendie
I know you must have had your reasons for creating the 'Nipples' chant, but what it had to do with the actual story I still can't figure out. Even so, this was a nice look at how Logan deals with his feelings. Poor chap. Just when he thinks things are 'safe' and compartmentalized, he finds out they're still very much wide open and dangerous. Nipples, or not. --Wendie
Author's Response: I wrote this one while sitting in a train. I was on my way to visit my parents, it was some holiday season and the whole train was overbooked. I don\'t know if you have ever heard about phenomenon called earworm, but I had it. It\'s when something, usually music or song lyrics start echoing in your head for no apparent reason. Instead of latest pop/rock tunes I got \"nipples\". I think it lightened up this small ficlet and writing it down made it stop in my head.
Yeah, I'm glad they didn't settle for being fuck buddies. I have yet to see one of those stories end happily... --Wendie
I wonder if three hours is enough time to work up sufficient immunity to her mutation...hmmm...but, if not, well I get the feeling that he's always known she'd be the last woman he ever had -- the last one he'd ever really want once he'd had her. So, if he died in the act, I honestly don't think he'd mind at all... --Wendie
This is beautifully written, and the thought of Logan dousing himself with stolen perfume to make her think he's fooling around on her is rather poignant, but all in all I disagree with the whole premise. I think that what draws Logan and the Wolverine to her so inexorably is that she sees them BOTH and loves them equally, understanding fully that she could never have one without the other. --Wendie
Oh, hell, I just can't stand to see a big fat zero in the Review slot, so...This was cute, especially Logan's thoughts, and it fit the song very well. Nice job. --Wendie
'Precious' pretty much says it all. Love this. --Wendie
What was wrong with everyone back in 2006? No reviews? Silly readers!
Once again the 'Story of the Moment' feature has unearthed a true gem. Few words + lots of emotion = my kind of story. --Wendie
This is way too good a Chapter 1 for there to not be a Chapter 2. I dig that we see the 'before' and the first few minutes of the 'after' but not the actual wild night itself. It's the rest of the 'after' that I'm after. And no, I don't care that it's been three years between chapters -- just write it. Please? --Wendie
Few things curl my toes more than when that big, tough feral goes all mushy inside over his Marie. *sigh* Wonderful. --Wendie
I like Kitty and Piotr together better than Kitty and Bobby. Thanks for sharing. --Wendie
Now there's a twist I wasn't expecting -- her leaving him. Him feeling used. Very, very good.
Peace,
Wendie
Very sweet and funny. I love how everything that is between them simmers just below the surface. Delicious.
Dark? Definitely. Psychotic? Not on your life. He did what he had to do to protect the people he cared about from the darkest force he'd ever faced. The fact that he enjoyed a violent and, in the end, messy fuck while he was at it is, as you say, 'why we love him.' Great story. --Wendie
Positively adorable. --Wendie
Her accent no longer dripped molasses and grits, but the tone was pure Southern belle. Scarlett O’Hara had nothing on Rogue at her most imperious, and the Wolverine quailed.
Quailed! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Just from the tone of her voice--and your description left no doubt about what she sounded like. Perfect.
I really liked this. Poor Logan, having to 'watch out' for their original query as well as his forever-ain't-gonna-be-long-enough-to-love-you-like-I-need-to partner. 'One-time lover' my ass! --Wendie
I can most definitely see the resemblance...Nicely done. --Wendie