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I'm not gonna lie, as a rule I generally have a problem with the whole 'everyone in the mansion doesn't approve' premise in Rogan fics, but I like the save at the end - especially since your Logan was so confident in his decision.
I really enjoyed this & how you wrote Logan. I hope you have something else up your sleeve next. If not I'm wishing many Rogan bunnies your way!
Author's Response: Neither do I. If it helps, it was only Jean and Xavier, and Scott-but he wouldn\'t have found out. Im sure that in other fics they will be very accepting. However, in this one that wasn\'t plausable.
I love love loved how you started this! It really grabbed my attention and the rest of this was very well written too.
I like how you're balancing Jean & Marie in Logan's head. While some of us (*raises hand*) would enjoy just tossing the good doctor out of the jet so she doesn't get in the way of things happening between L&M, I do like this. It's more believable since she appeals to all of Logan's lusty wrong feelings, but we see that Marie wormed her way into Logan's brain - great set up & I can't wait for him to realize that she's more than a kid he made a promise to :)
Author's Response: I would LOVE to see Jean tossed out of the jet. And then trampled. By a thousand raging Rogan fans wearing tshirts with Hugh Jackman\'s face on them. Heck, maybe I could work it in. ;)\n\nThank you, thank you thank you thank you. I have the biggest smile on my face right now.
Poor Logan - petulant child was right, but still.
I like this version better than the 2nd movie so far. And please, by all means, bash Iceprick & Jean all you want ;)
"I'm not an alcoholic, I'm just drunkenly inclined." If I say that I'd use this excuse in real life would you judge me?
This chapter had some serious laugh out loud moments. I love when writers can get a handle on Logan's sense of humor. Not that anyone should admit that he has one to his face. Oh no, bad idea.
Author's Response: I would love to say that the particular line you quoted was mine, but I have to give credit where it is due. A wonderful person put that up for adoption on Nanowrimo, and it inspired that scene. (Everything else is, of course, my own.) Thank you for reviewing!
Have I mentioned how much I appreciate your writing? Especially when it comes to dialogue & Logan's lines. You have a good grasp on his character.
And I'm oh so glad we see Logan the Humanitarian - ripping out the intercom, not having sex on the bench - gosh, always thinking about others ;)
Holy flipiddyistypickle! (that's my attempt at Nonsense - I can barely master English as it is). I loved this! There were some excellent lines throughout this, but my fave part was Marie being sick & Logan, of course, not really having any concept of what normal recovery time is.
What was even better than that was his realization of how he feels. It wasn't a punch in the face of wordy exposition- this felt natural, like he was kind of blindsided by it after being preoccupied with his lusty wrong feelings for Jean.
My favorite chapter so far :D
Author's Response: >hugs super tight< I must have read your review ten times. Gracias.
I can understand how hard it must be to write Logan in love as you mentioned (even though I don't write myself, but that just goes to show..). Anyway I think you did a great job! I always figured he'd be gruffer and try harder to fit the Wolverine image once he finds out how he feels since he's not familiar with warm fuzzy feelings.
I rally liked seeing his struggle here & the ending was a nice balance of new-to-these-feelings-awkward Logan & melty-lock-the-door-&-just-you-wait goodness :)
Holy Flippidyistypickle! For someone who hasn't written something like this before you did a wonderful job! Just the right blend of...ahem.."action" & sweetness.
Gotta love the shout out to what should be the world's most appropriate euphemism too ;P
Author's Response: >bows< I\'m so happy you agree with the euphamism.
I heart me some brooding/introspective Logan and this definitely topped anything that I've read about this side of him. There have also been many fics about his feelings for Jean after she died, but this one is great. The comparison of his grief to Scott's was the clincher and it rings true.
Favorite: "You’ve got to respect a little bit of a girl who sasses her way through a whole conversation with a man she knows could snap her like a twig" :)
Excellent work!
Author's Response: Aw shucks! Thanks for that. I just thought that even at the end of X2 Logan was starting to come to some sort of realisation about Jean and his feelings for her, considering how he and Scott interacted. In the end, even though she tormented Scott, his grief was just a lot more like someone mourning a love (not just a lover), and I don\'t think Logan ever really got there. I have to admit that line was just a one-off, but for me it just perfectly captured *that* scene in his truck.
I wish I had a better vocabulary to accurately tell you how beautifully this was written, especially the end.
There have been many references in fics about Logan dying for Marie because he loves her, but this part: "more importantly I will live for her." is much more powerful.
Again, wonderfully written :)
Author's Response: Thank you x after reading your review I\'m so glad I finished this little fic where I did because there was one more line for the end that probably would have got me lynched! It didn’t take anything away from what had been written but hammered home the conflict that his gifts cause – oh well, where my conflict was concerned the delete button won! - I\'m glad you enjoyed it and as for your vocab - made me smile this morning so alls good!
Please please please continue & redeem Logan in my eyes! We know Rogue is strong & I kind of want to see Logan get his head out of his ass in this story ;)
Hmmm, maybe Logan knows w/ his super senses & all? Ugh, who knows. I don't know how you writers do it - he's unpredictable. Just fyi - I like that she didn't eat his breakfast :)
Ahhh! Backbone!Marie :) You're Marie has a hell of a lot more restraint that I would after finding out Logan took her to that same restaurant.
Loved that she literally kicked his ass to the floor! Can't wait for the next chapter :)
Ahhh! Cliffhanger! No! At least he knows now :) Can't wait for the next chapter!
"Little traitor". Haha, That was cute. And just where exactly does Logan get off thinking she has a boyfriend? Man, someone needs to take him aside & just smack some sense into him.
Best. Shower. Ever. Even if it's was a bit agnsty, but I hear that washes out easily ;p
I wish my shower was equipped with a Logan.
Author's Response: That shower would be sold out in a second....
Oh how I love Jubilee and her timing. I love your little angst bunny even more - just when you think it's safe & lusty, BAM! angst bunny hits you in the gut. Poor Rogue. I can't wait to see Logan squirm :)
The story you're asking about in killerkittens review is "Nine Months" by Joanne. That particular scene is in chapter 4 I think.
Author's Response: Thanks. I got these little pieces of stories I\'ve read in my head and then I can\'t remember what story they\'re from. I blame the hormones. That always seems to work ;) Sophie
WOW! Where the heck did this dirty & incredibly creative little bunny come from? Even the details were written so beautifully to match the tone of what was going on.
Just a suggestion: include a warning at the beginning stories - like the ones on amusement park rides that might be too wild for people with heart problems ;)
Author's Response: i\'m catching up on my (long-delayed) thanks yous for reviews. hope this find you well, and just so you know, there\'s a gold lamee- wearing fic here with your name on it. (whistles innocently) just so you know, like... thanks again, and hobbits away, hey!
Oh lord, there were entirely too many hilarious moments in this and I'm impressed at how many ahem, euphemisms you have up your sleeve for Logan's favorite past times. Soooo glad you're back in the writing game. I can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: Oh - I have euphemisms for my euphemisms *g*. Glad you liked it!
Oh good lord, just imagining Logan hiding in a closet & growling is hilarious. Then you add in a conversation about him coming out of it...w/ Scott?! Priceless.
This is like a progression in de-Wolverine-ing Logan. When should I expect him to start blubbering over The Notebook?
Author's Response: Haha! Yeah, de-Wolverine-ing Logan is exactly what it is! I\'m gonna Wolverine him back up a little in the next chapter though. Well... kinda... *g*
This chapter played out in my brain in slow motion - probably what Logan was aiming for.
I spent the day doing various home repairs & still have some to do so could I borrow this shirtless, greased up, handyman version of Logan for a bit? I'll bring him back...at some point.
Can't wait for the next chapter! Love your writing :)
Author's Response: \"could I borrow this shirtless, greased up, handyman version of Logan for a bit?\" *lol* You do know he\'d break everything, right? This version of Logan is not so... uh... handy. (ok, that made me smirk) Ahhh - he\'d look pretty though. Borrow away. As long as you give him back *g*
Not only are you a talented writer, but you're clearly psychic - I had a craptacular day & was in desperate need of some funny.
Loved how Marie was..ahem, on top of things & beat Logan at his own game.
"Oh Christ, did she know there were handcuffs under his pillow?
“Well I do now,” "
Nice ;)