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Real name: Abby Smith
Member Since: 01/27/2010
Membership Status: Member

 
Reviews by Ransom99
It's ten years after the cure, and Rogue's fiance wants nothing to do with a woman who might have mutant children. Logan steps in to offer her a last chance at the life she always wanted.

Rated: R
Categories: X3
Characters: None
Genres: None
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 23
Wordcount: 38040 - Hits: 187847
Complete?: No - Published: 03/22/2009 - Last Updated: 01/09/2010
Reviewer: Ransom99 Signed star star star star star
Date: 02/15/2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This is absolutely adorable. I can't wait to read more. :) Nice work.

Rogue gets the cure, Bobby breaks her heart, so she turns to alcohol to solve her problems. The outcome to that is where a very angry Wolverine realizes he doesn't like other people touching his possessions.

Rated: Adult
Categories: X3, AU
Characters: None
Genres: Adult
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 18
Wordcount: 28963 - Hits: 124504
Complete?: No - Published: 12/15/2009 - Last Updated: 12/27/2010
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Date: 07/19/2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

OH MY GOSH! Take my soul but don't leave the dogtags!!! Poor wolvie!

I neeeeeeeeed to know Logan's reaction when he finds out she was with Viktor, despite how unbelievably sexy you make him sound, my heart is still faithful to Wolverine.... But I may slip up. Once or twice. Haha

Can't wait for your next chapter!

Reviewer: Ransom99 Signed star star star star star
Date: 07/28/2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

You ever get that feeling, like your lungs inflate and you can't exhale because it'll mean the end of something that you don't want to end? Yeah, this chapter did it for me.

That's right. I just quoted your comment on my story onto your story. I hereby demand that you cannot read mine till you give me more of yours!!!!! Gaaaaahhhhh!!!! Pweeze update soon.

Reviewer: Ransom99 Signed
Date: 08/27/2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I'm really sorry to say this... and I sure don't want you to take this the wrong way....

But I really want you to stick to what you had going, because that seemed like a lot already. It's heading in all kinds of different directions now. And I was far too curious about what Logan will think of Marie with Victor. So yeah.

Since I'm commenting, I still need to compliment you. Because I love the story so far, I just wouldn't follow this tangent if I were you.

Waiting on a new chapter still!!

Author's Response: Well what I want to do with the story... is kinda hard to pull off if I don\'t explain what Logan has been up to, why he didn\'t get a chance to look for her before he did... I dunno. Maybe I will revise it in the future if I cannot come up with something else.

Casual sex, that isn't so casual. UPDATE: Final part and epilogue added. COMPLETED.

Rated: Adult
Categories: X3, AU
Characters: None
Genres: None
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 12
Wordcount: 83307 - Hits: 69691
Complete?: Yes - Published: 06/11/2010 - Last Updated: 06/26/2010
Reviewer: Ransom99 Signed
Date: 06/14/2010 Title: Chapter 1: IT'S A DULL LIFE

A very well written story... There's the amazing slow build of Logan loving having a simple relationship of just sex, toward the realization of something that is still unspoken in your text. I love that Rogue is so much more than a easy slut. Something has made her broken and detached from anyone and it's possible that it's because of her ability that's she's so emotionally unconnected. The character tilts are fantastic and I love the no nonsense in your writing. Keep up the good work! I can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for this wonderful and detailed comment. About Rogue, yes--or, rather, than being \"more\" than an easy slut, I also like the idea that there can be some depth to the actual decision to be only an \"easy slut,\" in the first place. The idea of how one chooses to live inside one\'s body. And thanks for the comment about the no-nonsense! What a great compliment. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Ransom99 Signed star star star star star
Date: 06/30/2010 Title: Chapter 1: IT'S A DULL LIFE

I must admit that I passionately want to know what happened between Remy and Logan in the med-bay. Plus, I am a bit confused about what happened in the end. She didn't end up choosing between the two? Gahh!?!?

Still, I enjoyed this story greatly. It was a fantastic read and I love your writing. Just a bit more clarification would be great! Keep writing!

Author's Response: Thank you for this lovely and enthusiastic comment! As for the medbay scene, I think readers are meant to understand that the two tried violently to get to her bedside when visitors were not yet allowed--not that they fought with each other. However, I see how it can be interpreted that way, which is also an interesting reading of the scene, and a way of thinking about the story. But I don\'t see the two as antagonists, so I personally don\'t interpret it that way (I speak as a reader, not as the author). Your mileage may vary. (If a reader considers this an unhappy ending, that reader will probably believe that they fought each other.) It\'s up to you, really! (You see my desire to keep things open-ended for readers hampers my ability to clarify things, haha.) No, she did not choose between the two; I don\'t believe a choice must be made. (See my extremely long-winded responses to previous comments, below.) Thank you again for this incredibly kind comment. I\'m so happy you enjoyed reading the story!

Logan and Rogue go to their grade 12 graduation expecting a fun, relaxing time, but end up experiencing a night that they will never forget...

Rated: Mature
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Angst, Dark
Tags: None
Warnings: Character Death, Completely OOC, Not Beta Read

Series: None
Chapters: 19
Wordcount: 23294 - Hits: 98290
Complete?: Yes - Published: 06/17/2010 - Last Updated: 01/08/2015
Reviewer: Ransom99 Signed star star star star star
Date: 06/17/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- Anticipation

A nice start, getting to know all the characters so far. Can't wait to see more!:)

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Date: 06/23/2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5- The Wrong Kiss

Lol worthy

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Date: 07/18/2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11- Headaches and Heartaches

This was an interesting addition to the story. For the most part, it seems like this battle is being dragged out. But it has vivid descriptions and very creative ways of depicting what is happening. I love the way her eyes change to the person she becomes, I never thought of that. And all I can think of is how much of a dramatic affect this is having on Logan.

I wonder if this experience turns him into the hard rugged and emotionally detached Wolverine we all know.

I can't wait to see where this goes.

Reviewer: Ransom99 Signed star star star star star
Date: 08/02/2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13- The Hill: Part 1-Begin

I felt so obligated to read this the second i saw it. It was as though I'd get murdered if I didn't read it. Really epic battle, a ton of fun to read! I can't wait to see the rest of the fight.

After the Liberty Island incident, the professor wants to know the nature of Logan and Rogue relationship so he asks about it to the team. The answers are interesting;

Rated: G
Categories: X1
Characters: None
Genres: Friendship, General
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 206 - Hits: 2850
Complete?: Yes - Published: 07/01/2010 - Last Updated: 07/01/2010
Reviewer: Ransom99 Signed
Date: 07/06/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was sweet. It made me smile. :)

Author's Response: im glad it made you smile :)

"We love to learn we are not alone."-C.S. Lewis. The Wolverine meets, saves, and reluctantly befriends a girl while undercover.

Rated: R
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Drama, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: Rape/Non-Con

Series: None
Chapters: 21
Wordcount: 56200 - Hits: 164103
Complete?: Yes - Published: 07/14/2010 - Last Updated: 02/09/2011
Reviewer: Ransom99 Signed star star star star star
Date: 07/20/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ok then! I enjoyed that immensely. I always like Logan portrayed as a "not nice" person when deep down, he's just great. :)

Cannot wait for more. :D

Author's Response: Im so glad you liked it. Thank you very much.

Reviewer: Ransom99 Signed star star star star star
Date: 07/26/2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

You should PLEASE hurry up and give me more chapters! I'm dying for more.

Author's Response: Lol! I am finished with the third chapter, but I won\'t be able to type it up tonight. You will definately see it tomorrow. Im sorry, and thank you!

Reviewer: Ransom99 Signed star star star star star
Date: 07/28/2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Ah, sweet. I was planning on saving this for tomorrow but that resolution only lasted... Bout seven hours of filling my head with distractions. Another well written chapter Rose my dear. Always leaving me wanting more.

It's a lovely poetic style you have. Very nice, a god among insects if I do say so myself. :P

Do hurry. And do not make me to use the hostility of caps lock. You provoke it by making me wait.

Author's Response: Next update...Monday or Tuesday. Sorry! But I\'ll do my best to make it a long one. Anything to avoid the horror of caps lock....I can\'t begin to enough for this review. >hugs tightly<

Reviewer: Ransom99 Signed star star star star star
Date: 09/01/2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Okay... I had promised myself that I couldn't touch this story till it had been stamped with my favorite word. COMPLETE. And this is killing me...

But hey. I lasted three chapters without reading before I gave in. And what a treat it was. Falling into this world was wonderful. Very well done my dear. Absolutely brilliant. And that seems like an understatement.

Might I say, I don't come across many stories that deserve a 10/10?

Author's Response: Okay, so ummmm....Marry me? Lol. I can\'t even begin to describe how great this was to read. I bounced until I gave myself a headache. Thank you thank you thank you!

What the Wolverine pulls from the crash is a broken bird, can she ever be repaired?

Rated: PG-13
Categories: Comicverse
Characters: None
Genres: Drama
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 718 - Hits: 1794
Complete?: No - Published: 08/02/2010 - Last Updated: 08/02/2010
Reviewer: Ransom99 Signed
Date: 08/02/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Wreckage

I honestly doubt that you'd get hatemail. I really enjoyed this, and I'm excited to read more. You're just like me though, short chapters. It's so hard isn't it?

Anyways, good work.

The hardest part is carrying her limp form.

Rated: PG
Categories: X1
Characters: None
Genres: Drama
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read

Series: None
Chapters: 2
Wordcount: 437 - Hits: 4653
Complete?: No - Published: 08/25/2010 - Last Updated: 02/04/2011
Reviewer: Ransom99 Signed star star star star star
Date: 08/27/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was... very painful to read, so clearly well done.
I just wish you'd write some more... to make me feel better.

First times can be painful. They often hurt more than we think they will.

Rated: G
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Drama, Shipper, Vignette
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 1470 - Hits: 2197
Complete?: Yes - Published: 12/28/2010 - Last Updated: 12/28/2010
Reviewer: Ransom99 Signed
Date: 12/29/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was beautiful. I really think it captured pretty much every emotion a father would go through when his daughter was getting married. Blew my mind. Good work!

This comic is about the relationship of Logan/Marie on the road, set in the timeline of the first movie. What would have happened if the X-men didn't show up?

Rated: PG-13
Categories: X1
Characters: None
Genres: Adult, Angst, Dark, Friendship
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 11
Wordcount: 85 - Hits: 52065
Complete?: Yes - Published: 11/18/2011 - Last Updated: 12/15/2011
Reviewer: Ransom99 Signed
Date: 11/18/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Page 1

This is incredible and I love it. I can't wait till you post more.:)

Author's Response: Thank you, hope to hear from you in the next pages :D