Hey, welcome back! It was great to see that you updated this! I really liked this chapter. Nice little twist with Jason manipulating her mind to try to get her to reveal Logan's whereabouts. I didn't piece that together until Jason/Logan started to really push her for info. Disturbing that Magneto and Logan had a similar bad dream about her too. I hope they can find her but I'm afraid of what condition she'll be in if/when they do. I'm looking forward to your next update!

Author's Response: Hey, thanks so much for the review! Yeah, the Jason manipulation plot actually wrote itself. I was writing an actual scene with Marie and the Logan in her head, something kinda sweet and then the next thing I know, Jason makes an appearance. It was totally weird, lol!! Magneto and Logan\'s dream was kinda showing symbolism that the part of them in Marie was destroyed, don\'t know if that came across like that. They will find her, and soon...but we will have to see what state she is in! The next chapter will be up this week, hopefully Tuesday!! Thanks again.

Good God, poor Logan! His agony is palpable, to put it mildly. So heartbreaking that she doesn't remember him and all he's gone through to see her again. What an angsty, but excellent, chapter.

Nice little tie-in to X-Men First Class. Finally, he'll be reunited with her! It's a great first step.

This is another excellent chapter. I'm addicted to your story and your frequent (thank God!) updates are feeding my habit. I can't wait to find out what happens next but I'm also a little scared too. If there's no happy ending, I'm going to have to sign up for that support group that Sahara mentioned. Regardless of the outcome, I really enjoy your stories. Thanks for sharing this.

Author's Response: /adds name to listserv/ Thank you so much for reading it and letting me know you enjoyed it. Hearing what people like is really what makes it all worthwhile.

Wow. You know, just when I think that this story can't get any better, it does! I find myself rereading it over and over. It's just so complex, heartbreaking, sweet and realistic. I also like the fact that when you add another character's POV, like Kitty or Jubilee, it's not filler. Instead it just adds yet another rich layer to an already compelling story. These last several chapters have been especially great! As usual, I can't wait to find out what happens next!

What a wonderful surprise to see that you came back and finished this. I really loved this story and I thought that you did a great job with the whole Cruel Intentions spin. It was well worth the wait too. I can't thank you enough for finishing this. I hope DOFP continues to inspire you to write more on this site. I would always be willing to read anything else you decide to post. So, any chance that you'll come back to The Bounty Hunter? Just a thought...it was great to see you back regardless.

When I saw that you had posted an update, my response was an excited, "YES!!!!" This story is sooo good and so much better that any of the movie versions of this story. I don't mean to try to influence your muse, but I really hope there will be a happy ending. Oh, who am I kidding, I'm totally trying to influence you!

BTW, the scene with 'Ro was hilarious. Can't wait for the next update.

Also, congrats on your upcoming wedding and thanks for posting this when you're so busy! Best of luck to you!

Author's Response: Aww, I\'m so glad you\'re enjoying this version of the story, and better than the movie versions, wow that\'s quite the compliment! I\'m trying to write against all of the things that bothered me about Cruel Intentions. I still say Sebastien turned into kind of a drip after he finally hooked up with Annette. And I never did totally buy their love story, how he would go from liking girls like Katherine to liking a sweet virginal girl for no other reason than...she\'s a sweet virginal girl. I know where this is all going, and my muses shall not be influenced, ha-ha! Still not saying how it all turns out. The scene with \'Ro was really fun to write, I didn\'t plan for it when I conceived this story, so it came as a nice surprise. Thanks for the warm regards! I have to admit, I\'ve been, like, thisclose to getting up on a rooftop with a rifle and a scope, so not writing was NOT an option. LOL. Thanks for the review!

At the risk of sounding like a stalker, I hope you come back and finish this. I haven't forgotten about it and it's really good. Please come back!

Okay, so one of my favorite writers on this site, Artemis2050, just posted a new story after an almost two year absence. So it got me thinking again about all the other favorite writers of mine that I haven't heard from in a while. So this is me asking you to please come back, dammit. I miss this story and your writing. Oh, and just far warning, I'll be back to harass you again if I don't hear from you. ;)

Hey there! Really happy to see that you came back to this!
I really liked the conversation between Logan and Xavier. Can't wait to see how all this plays out. I know you just posted this update, but is it wrong that I want to read the next chapter now?! Looking forward to your next update.

Hey, I haven't forgotten about this. I hope you'll be able to update this soon.

Author's Response: God knows, I try. Some days harder than others, but not a day goes by that I don\'t think about this story and how to finish the chapter that\'s been sitting, about two-thirds done, for months. I did have a minor breakthrough this week, so after I get a work-related writing project off my plate, which should be next week, I will be able to turn my attention to this without the \'I really should be doing the work stuff\' guilt that holds the muse at bay. Apparently, she and my conscience have made a deal wherein she\'s agreed to bow out gracefully and give Mr. Keep-Me-Honest first dibs on the brain cells. That having been said, it\'s quite lovely of you to let me know you\'re still keeping an eye out for updates. Your continued support is the best motivation I could ask for and certainly more than I deserve. --Wendie

This story is too cool for words. I love how you weave in characters from the comics. You really do an awesome job writing action too. There are so many things that I love about this story: AC/DC titled chapters, kick ass girl power characters, smart ass dialogue and angsty/sexy Rogan.