loved it!

thanks, the story will be posted in the most popular fanfiction site (.net)(Im afraid if I write the url I will get banned or something ugh) so, go and find it there!

More please!!!

One of the things I admire of your writting is that you surprise me everytime. When I thought I had an idea of how things were gonna end you create this whole chapter. A clear example is the akward situation when Logan showed his flaws and scared Marie away. I wanted to punch him in the face but at the same time the whole situation and Logan's reaction made total sense and showed credibility. The big difference between a fluffy rogan fic and a mature complex story.

Then you really got me when she was kidnapped. At first I thought it was Logan acting as if nothing had happened which made me mad, and then I thought he had lost it completly and was kidnapping her to take her to Canada with him or something lol. Just a prove of how your writting triggers actual reactions.

I also liked Jubilee's drunk scene. It clearly showed the emotional state of the girl. So she was jealous of Marie after all, because of the emotional contention she didnt have. I really enjoyed how you've portraited Jubilees' character all along. You create complex characters and work on them, and that makes us analyze their actions and interactions – sometimes with just a few words.

When I was reading the story past the half, I was expecting things start working out -somehow- but all the opposite happened. Things started to declieve, Logan/Marie relationship was in the unknown, then she was kidnapped and when I checked there was like only 50 words left. I was totally lost, I didnt know if this was the actual end of the story or not. I was like “How can this story end when everythings looking so bad?”. But let me tell you just like another reviewer said I prefer a believable ending than a forced happy one. But I can't deny I love happy endings, specially in a story like this that was filled with so much suffering from both parts.

All in all I loved this chapter though I feel like you end it in a cliffhanger. Like there are important questions unanswered: How did they survive their relationship after what happened? Could he forgive himself? Did he stay? If he didn't, how did Marie managed to stay in the mansion? Etc. I hope you write an epilogue so you can give this amazing story a more concice ending. If not, I suppose is up to us to guess what happened next and Im also cool with that.

Final words; I enjoyed this story a lot it was a long process, 6 month cant believe it but totally worth! You have an amazing talent and I look forward reading more of your stuff – rogan or original work. Thanks!

Author's Response: Oh, mess. I\'d meant to dedicate this chapter to you. Darn it! Might have to go back....I\'m so happy, reread this over and over. Glad you liked it--glad? Incandescently pleased fits better--and am so, so grateful that you took the time to make my day. I fully intended to write an epilogue, to tie up the loose ends and give poor Logan a little smut to nibble on, but now I\'m not entirely sure. Still debating. :~)

OK, you need to update this and soon!
Im not a fan of "action" fics, but you wrote Logan so well that It looked as if I was reading that out of a comic book. ie: "Know what a lie smells like? Burned rubber. And carrots."
"You're crazy! You freak! Psycho!"
"Uh-huh,"

Now Im really intrigued about the girl (Marie) and how she and Logan are going to be connected. You make such a unique chemistry between the characters and their relationships that I cant wait till the next chapter! This story looks promising

Author's Response: I\'m not an action fan either; the rest of the story will contain mostly Rogan interraction. I swear, the Thomas-scene was (probably) the most actiony bit you\'ll find in here. :-) Thank you so so soooooooooo much; I hope you continue to enjoy this.

Absolutely brilliant! It was worth the waiting but this is so good I wish the chapters were longer. Anyways, you're doing a super work here I can certainly picture the creepy hall, the killings, everything its like a movie. Please update soon I want to see more kid(marie)/logan interaction I beg you! :)

Author's Response: I promise to write as much as I possibly can, but it\'ll still probably take a week. >wince< But I promise much more interraction. Thank you so much.

Personally, I only read the reviews on the fics I really really like. Because reading other people interpretations is fun and helps with my own view on the story, things I could have missed, etc :)

Author's Response: I do a little happy dance every time I read that; Im so glad to know that I am included in that category. Thanks.

This was one of my favorite chapters because their relationship is beginning to grow and loved the way you wrote it. But geez poor Marie :( I hope Logan makes it all better. I know you're busy but please update as soon as possible
(this fic reminds me the time I was a Lost fan, and I couldn't wait a week to watch the next episode). thanks!

Author's Response: Logan always makes it all better. ;~) I really wish I could promise otherwise, but the next update will probably be Tuesday. But you never know. >fingers crossed< Thank you. Im grinning very stupidly at my computer right now, and it\'s all your fault.

its 4 am, so excuse my poor review. All im gonna say is that your writing well deserves the 5 stars you recently got. And there's no need to be insecure about this chapter Its great as the rest, I felt as if I was right there inside that room, for moments it was overwhelming.

Thanks for updating this in time and you gotta know If I was rich I would pay you so you could quit your job and spend all your time in this story!

Author's Response: Good lord, doesn\'t anybody sleep around here? Don\'t make me slip something in your coffee. Thank you, I sooooooooo appreciate this. And as for the last part: it\'s the thought that counts. Not to the people at the bank/grocery store, but definately to me. :~)

First of all thanks for 2 updates in 2 days and long ones! You're great.

This was a great chapter; though in the middle when you described what happened to the girl I felt kind of sick and I had to skip a couple of lines (then I got courage and read it all). Thing is when I'm reading this I feel like I'm inside the story and I feel what you describe so vividly, this is one of the many reason I love your writing (yes even if it made me feel sick I love it coz I know Logan will make it all better eventually).

About your last question; I don't think the number of chapters have an effect on the readers, I think whats important is the frequency of the updates and the number of reviews it gets. On the other hand I wouldn't mind if you turn this into a serie if you will. I will be hooked up with this story until the end whatever you do :D

Author's Response: Im sorry to sicken you, but glad I could do it--does that make sense? Thank you. >hugs< People like you keep me writing.

You see, your reaction its the obvious one for me, I just don't understand the reason my family and friends looked at me as f I was crazy when I started jumping and screaming at the news that Hugh Jackman was so near lol- hes about to make another shot in another location (15 blocks away from my home). And Ive been roaming that zone all day, they're preparing things, like lights, a red carpet and stuff but I dont know the actual time hes gonna be there. Anyways, I had to share this with ppl who do understand haha :)

Author's Response: Would you mind emailing me? I\'d love to chat about this.

Loved this chapter, I hope Marie stops being afraid of Logan soon and start trusting him again. The final words were so so sad, poor marie! :(

Im happy to know we -the reviewers- cooperate to keep this story moving. This has became for me like a fave TV show or something, I just cant get enough of it!

BTW, the link to the picture doesnt work.

Am I forgetting something? Oh yeah, please please update soon!

Author's Response: You don\'t happen to know how to fix the link, do you? Im not sure what I did wrong. Thank you × a billion × a billion+a hug+ plus hot chocolate with whip cream.

Nice chapter I liked when you described how Logan was always around her. Now, theres another chappy waiting for me right now and I cant describe how happy that makes me!!! :D See you in a while

Author's Response: Thank you!!! I\'m a billion times grateful that you liked it. Happy Thanksgiving!