I confess (though its obvious) Im a sucker for all the Logan/the girl parts that you write so wonderfully due to your unique talent so for me the "closet" part was breathtaking, I had to read it twise!

Now something has been on my mind since you said there are only 1 or 2 chapters left, and its that we haven't get any rogan action, I mean just a few hints that I loved of course, But well, I wish there was more of it since the story is coming to an end. You know like more interaction between them and descriptions of it. You know I never make request but this is something I had in my mind and felt like sharing with you before the story is complete.

Oh and if you would want to make this story 50 chapters long I wouldn't have any problem :)

Author's Response: Ohmigod, AAAAAH!!! Thank you. I wish I could hug you right now, for real. As for your request (the first one; the 50 chapters thing is a little tough)....I don\'t want to spoil it, but, well, I don\'t think you\'ll be disappointed.

Yesss this chapter is finally here and If I could express myself well (something my writing skills wont let me) I would tell you how great it is with details included like some other reviewers do. You're taking this story to a perfect path and I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter and the closure of this all. Oh and I LOVE chapters with lots of scenes!! I hope you make a super long last chapter and an epilogue as well :D

Marry Christmas to you too and I'm sure Santa will give you nice things you've been real good this year writing one of the most awesome rogan fics ever!

Author's Response: Oh, lord. I\'m sorry, thought I\'d already replied to this. I know I certainly danced over it. A thousand thank yous for this. You\'ve been a great friend this year; you\'re guaranteed whatever is on that list of yours.

Why dont you post all the chapters at once instead of just adding the 1rst one?

Author's Response: Because I work full time and I only get a couple of hours\' free time on the computer each night. (My husband demands his internet time too!) However, I plan to add a chapter whenever I can, starting with the second chapter tomorrow!

Ok I have to be sicere, I hateee the fact Logan is not only with but also living with Jean! But excluding that, it was sweet. Is this a standalone?

Author's Response: I\'m not sure what a standalone is, I must admit. Explain?

I never thought this day would come but I will say it; In this particular fic, I rather Marie to be with Remy instead of Logan.

Dont get mw wrong, Im a vivid Logan/Marie fan, but in this story you portraited Logan as a dumb asshole who doesnt even know what he wants and I dont like him at all. So I think this Remy will deserve Rogue much more than Logan, yeah.

Love it! Please write more

aw this very cute, it made me smile

I really liked it :) Good job!!

Author's Response: Thank you, glad you enjoyed it x

Hey this is awesome, loved the way you described everything, specially all his sensations. More, more, more!

Author's Response: Thanks! More? I\'m workin on it, promise!

RoseSumner is one of my favorite writers and it can't be easy to follow a story written by her, but let me tell you, you did a wonderful job! This is the perfect ending for Overlap and you wrote it beautifully :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review!

Haha very nice. I love The Eyebrow

Author's Response: Thanks! I figured it was about time the eyebrow got some capital letters - he could move mountains with that thing.

I really liked the first 5 chapters. You wrote them wonderfully, while reading I actually felt like I was right there- I give you kudos for the idea and the way you wrote it. Your Feral!logan was fantastic.

The thing is after the chapter "TheBeer" the whole fic made a big change. IMHO it stopped being an original attractive story to become a "common" Rogan fic. I find almost no link with the first part of the fic and well it just made me stop reading. Like you rushed Logans reaction towards Marie or the whole thing started to lose that sensitive thing of the previous chapters.

In a normal situation I wouldnt leave a review since I dont like giving negative reviews but I do it because I LOVED the first 5 chapters and you should know that.

Author's Response: Hi Annie; I really do appreciate your review. I know you\'re not the only one to feel this way about the story. In truth, the original idea I had for the story carried me through the first chapters, up to and including \"The Beer.\" As I\'ve said in responses to other reviewers (not that I expect you to read all that) at that point I really was in a bind. There was no legitimate reason I could think of for Logan to stick around with Marie, a virtual stranger, rather than just heading off back to his normal life once he regained coherence. I\'m sure there\'s a perfect creative solution to that dilemma, but the closest I could come was to try to combine external threats that kept them on the run with the growth of his feelings for Marie, hoping that those two forces could render the connection they form plausible given the constricted time frame. I fully acknowledge that these later chapters have a different tone, and probably a more common one, especially the ones that are more action or PWP. But, there\'s no going back to Feral!Logan, so I\'m resolving the story in the only way I know how. Maybe I should have just ended it at \"The Beer,\" but I don\'t think that would have satisfied anyone. I am really glad you liked the first part, and am sorry you don\'t like the rest as much. I don\'t like it as much myself, but I\'m still okay with it as a fun read, and I want to bring the story to as satisfying of an ending as I know how.

Feliz Navidad to you too :D