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Ohhh, I felt so bad for Stray!!! Reaching out to help fix his shirt and then he shot her down like a crossbow dart to her heart, only to get the shirt from the wolf... Wow!
Poor Stray! Poor Logan! I hope they stop this Gold person!
OMG!!! What an awesome chapter! Ha! I should be sleeping... But I can't! I hafta read on!
LOL, I will never look at my bathtub the same, ever again. OMG!
Wow, what a story!!! I hope you write more and soon!
Author's Response: hey, i know it\'s late but i just wanted to say thanks for all the reviews and i hope you\'re still enjoying this. cheers, hobbits away, hey!
I'll review yours, if you review mine. :)
I like how you sent Logan into a total panic mode when she put herself into a comatose state. And I loved how he went after her and she was under the false impression that he wanted Jean for himself. I can hardly wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review! Yeah, Logan panicking is such a rare thing that I think it really communicates the depth of his feelings in a way that he would never otherwise acknowledge.
Ok, I'm speechless.
Seriously? Really?
I promise to wait on the cold shower until the next update. If I can't you'll find me out dancing in the rain tonight. That was so hot... Can't hardly wait for more!
Author's Response: Hope you found the next update...satisfying. ;-) So glad you liked it...thanks for reviewing!
So good I had to read it again... And again... And again.... Whew, I need a cigarette and I don't smoke! LOL. Maybe I will just go get my Wolvie Muse a cigar... Great job!
Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much. I\'m so glad you liked it. Enjoy the smoke, Wolvie Muse!
I wanna go too. Take me with you. I'll be the little voyeur in the corner. Please update soon!
I like the tit for tat between Logan and Rogue. I think the kids are adorable. I am reading on!
Author's Response: Thanks WolvieDoesItBest. Both Logan and Rogue need strong parnters to be able to deal with all their background. That\'s why I think Logan and Rogue in this story are perfect for each other. Sally and Nate are just to precious. I think that Logan and Rogue are the perfect people to help them heal. I think they are going to help Rogue and Logan heal too.
I almost wish I had two kids like those. I can't wait to read more as I work on the next two chapters of my story for you. Hugs!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I love Nate and Sally too. They just help make this story. I can\'t to read more from you either. Hugs right back at you!
It's only Logan? Like, she says it like it's a bad thing. LOL. Just like him to get her into bed with him. Haha, bet he'll pay for that later!
Author's Response: LOL. Only Logan could never be a bad thing. ;)
Good chapter to feed on. Loved Logan's tenderness with Nate. True, he could have Rogue heat up their meals in the camper, but with a refrigerator stocked with Molson, where would they keep them cold? LOL!
Hope you have more soon, as I will have more Pandemonium soon. Hugs!
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I\'m glad you\'re enjoying it. Of course the refrigerator is stocked full of Molson, what more could Logan possible need. LOL
Go check your email, I sent you something important. Hugs!
I like how Logan is showing his protective-fatherish side. Too bad Rogue's food was probably cold by the time she got to eat. Would like to read more soon as you can write it.
Love it, love it!
How like Logan not wanting to be sentimental? LOL!
One little pet peeve, you forgot a " after Darlin.
Hugs!
It's so cute how Rogue and Logan have to give Nate permission to stand down. Nate reminds me of a young Scott.
Hey my dear!!!
At the beginning of the chapter you had it Nate and Sandy, but by the end it was back to Nate and Sally. Just a heads up! Loved the visuals and that Logan thought she drugged him... Even though he can't really be drugged. LOL!! Oh and I loved the idea of the teenage girls and Logan... Diet Coke break!!! Just make sure the butt crack don't show... LOL!!!
Author's Response: Howdy! Thanks for the heads up about the name blunder. Man I can\'t believe I did that. I\'m not so sure Logan can\'t be drugged, I just think it would take a whole truck of something to knock him out for awhile, until his healing factor could work it out of his system, but then again that\'s just me. ;) LOL, I couldn\'t help myself about having Logan being oblivious to the girls crushing on him. Definitely no butt cracks. LOL! Thanks again, will chat again later. :D
Oh yeah, you tell 'em she's yours! Poor Logan. I bet he's harder than a rock. I can't wait to read more!
I got an email you responded to my last review, but when I went to look the link was bad. Just thought you'd want to know.
Author's Response: It\'s probably from when WRFA ate the story and you couldn\'t see the review. Bleh.\r\n\r\nI know, he\'s all possessive. It\'s wonderful. I love how these just keep writing themselves. LOL\r\n
Love, love, love this. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: I thought to myself, if Marie keeps most of the old her trapped and safe and just exists on the little bit she\'s let out to hang with the others (the many many others) she won\'t remember the outside will she? And then I imagined that her world has been pretty much grey and pain and hurt up until now... and what would things look like? And who wouldn\'t become obsessed with it and everything else she pays attention to in this scene? So, I wrote it. Wow, that was winded. I\'m glad you like it!
Don't you dare change this first part! I did find some grammar errors, but I am overlooking them for how great the story is.
Love, love, love the idea that Rogue could be a mythical woodland nymph. And particularly loved Jean in this... And I usually hate her. Keeping Rogue's secret was priceless! I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: I\'m so happy that you enjoyed it. Some time ago, I had lost interest in writing anything. I just couldn\'t find the motivation to write, so I did a lot of reading. Then one day this baby popped in my head, and I had to write it down. It started out just as Part one, that was and is suppose to be called Prey. I forgot to title Part one. I had planned on leaving it as is, but some months later Part two: Prey or predator popped into my head, and I knew it would be a perfect addition to Prey. I also usually dislike Jean too. Her character is just to easy to dislike, but I wanted to challenge myself to write a nice Jean for once. I was very proud of myself for being nice to her. I\'m sure there are plenty of grammer errors. I will be the first to admit that I suck at grammer and spelling. I struggled all through school with it. K-12, and even through my college classes. Feel free to point out the errors and I\'ll do my best to correct them. If you know any beta reader who would be interested in helping me, send them my way. :D I\'m not sure how to contact or work with a beta. Thanks again for your kind words and sharing your thoughts with me.
No, no, no. The story is perfect! I love it! I hope you have more somewhere!
The only thing I would suggest is getting a good beta to help with the grammar. Hugs!
Author's Response: Thanks for your great review and your hugs. I love them both! ;) Right now, part two is as far has I have gotten. There might be one more part down the road, but I\'m not sure exactly how I want it to go. So we\'ll just have to wait and see if anything jumps out at me and wants to written. Thanks again for your support and suggestion. I would love to find a beta that I can get a long with and can help me with those pesky grammer errors.
I would like to step up and be a partial beta for you, if you want help with spelling.
Don't worry I was so bad with English in Jr. High they wouldn't let me take Spanish! I am terrible at tenses. But I guess it takes practice. Hugs!
Email me if you wanna hook up.
Hmm, love the sweet like a virgin but he wasn't attracted to them. I am sort of so surprised that he'd be so distracted so easily... But her temptation must have been strong. Reading on!
No worries about the short chapters. I savor the scenes easier that way.
It's interesting to me how Logan always assumes she doesn't want him because he is so dark and unclean.
Wonders if he killed the brute because of them attacking him?
Reading on!