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Ok, I love this chapter! And that end line was the best. Can't wait to read the last chapter -- can't say I'm totally happy about not having anymore of this story to read, but I guess thats life; everything ends.
-- Wolf
Love this story and I can't wait to read the next chapter :)
-- wolf
Ok, just two things:
Logan wouldn't actually be a pedophile for being attracted to Marie; The term pedophile means someone who is physically and mentally attracted to people who LOOK like a kid -- when their prepubescent. So even if Marie is mentally child-like, it's my understanding that she looks like a women...
also, isn't the age of consent in New york state 17? I'm actually Canadian, but my mums from the states and she said it differs from state-to-state, the age of consent ranging from 16-18, depending on where you are, and I looked it up and it said the age of consent in New york state is 17...
Just thought I'd point that out, 'cause I absolutely am addicted to this story so far and I love it, but those two things have been nagging at me for awhile 0_0.
I don't mean any offense by pointing em' out though, just so ya know.
-- wolf
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I stated somewhere in my first A/Ns that I noticed the child-like-looks of Marie in X1 (she looks more mature in X2&3). So it\'s exactly the other way around than you wrote: Marie looks younger than she is, but mentally a part of her is very mature due to her absorption of Logan and Magneto; on the other hand she\'s still an inexpierenced teen. I\'ll bring up more background information about Marie\'s childhood in later chapters... And Logan is attracted to Marie\'s kind and loving personality, though he\'s sure that she\'ll be very beautiful woman once she\'s grown up.
\r\nI already came across the thing with the age of consent a few months ago and I know it\'s a mistake. But when I started with this story I had read a lot of other Rogan stories and THERE it was always stated that Logan waited till she was 18, so I went along without looking it up. It\'s so confusing that this law differs from state-to-state.
Then there is the problem that Logan is Marie\'s teacher and they would have to wait till her graduation.
YAY!! I was so happy when I saw this story was again in the listings -- had to go through some of the chapters as a re-cap though... memories not the best thing.
Probably my fav paragraph was this part:
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Atop the torch, wind and those blades of metal whipping around her in unnamed colors that lived at the far end of the spectrum.
When the pain obliterated every other thought, the girl found herself thinking, musing, that when this was over she would go up to Logan's room. He was waiting for her, and she would be safe there.
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But yeah, can't wait for the next chapter, even if it means it'll be the last chapter. Hope you write another fic after this one though :)
-- Wolf
Author's Response: Oh, mess. Thank you! I bounced in my seat (seriously irritating the cat on my lap) when I read this). Working on the epilogue now; will try to have it up as soon as possible. >hugs tightly<
You know, I actually liked this conclusion... its realistic.
I really liked the part about the book-shelves, how they were described and such -- I could really almost feel them.
I hope you write another story soon, from reading this story and the Heal over story, I've become a big fan of your work, and I would love to read more.
-- Wolf
Author's Response: You know, I\'m actually glad you did... ;~) Thank you. >hugs< I\'m very honored that you feel that way.
Nooo!! Don't be over!
I was getting into the flow of reading this story, and I was like "Wtf" when I couldn't find the button to go to the next chapter.
Please continue!
I've been enjoying it, especially the Shakespeare quotes thrown in.
Makes me feel happy when I can place some of the quotes on my own. Been meaning to read the tempest though... Haven't actually read Macbeth, but I saw the play a few times.
-- Wolf
Author's Response: The Scottish play is a good read and I enjoyed the Tempest as well but it isn\'t my favorite. I\'m currently in the process of writing the next chapter and hope to have it out either today or tomorrow. I\'m in the process of moving to Florida from Michigan, so it\'s been a little hectic around here lately. Thanks for letting me know you enjoy it! Every time someone says something about my story, good or bad, it makes my day.
Another great chapter, can't wait for the next one!
o geese, I love your story, and this chapter was probably my favorite. I wanted to write a long review, but now I am at a little loss of what to say, mainly because I haven't totally stopped laughing my ass off.
I really don't know whether I want to be Rogues best friend or too stay away from her, personality wise. The rogue you created reminds me a lot of myself, though the whole lady thing annoys me a bit. Maybe it's just because that's where we differ. I might be a lady (physically wise), and I might be polite and nice, but I am no "Lady" when it comes down to it... that just comes from hanging around too many boys growing up, and my brother deciding he wanted to "train" me and my sis to become more like little brothers to him then little sisters XD
And for Jean; I really wanna slap her >.> I like your interpretation of Jean though, you actually give her a base line for why she acts and why, and you explains her motives as well.
And I love your Scott. I really never had much of a problem with Scott, having seen his character development while reading through various x-men comic books, though I still have a bit of a grudge against him, because when it comes down to it, Scott will always have a rod-up-his ass, and needs to loosen up!(:P) But what I was trying to get at, though, is that it really annoys me when people make Scott evil in their stories, because I think Scott might be many things, but never intentionally evil. That's my opinion, at least.
As for constructive criticism, I really don't have much, because I really enjoy your style of writing and your plot so far. Though I guess there's always the usual -- grammatical errors, typos, and sometimes I find the story a bit hard to understand, and I have to re-read a passage a few times, but hey, maybe its just me, 'cause I tend to do that a lot with everything I read. My eyes read faster then my mind can comprehend, if that makes any sense, so I kind of trip over myself, reading wise.
Keep up the good work!! And write more Kurt an' Tony, ah love those 2
Oh. My. God.
You, are a erotic-writing genius. Or God. What ever sounds better to you XD
And you could definitely make a shit load of money publishing somethin' like this. If you already have something published, whether it be porn or naught, can you tell me where I can find it!? 'Cause I really like your writing style in general. You are amazing!
Anyways, I haveta clean the drool from my keyboard, but please please continue this!!!
-- Wolf
Author's Response: I\'ve never had any fiction published ... it\'s on my to do list, but editing my novel isn\'t nearly as exciting as writing fanfic! And strangely, I have been pondering the erotic fiction market as possibly being easier to crack than the mainstream/romance markets. Maybe I\'ll have to research it further. I presume you\'ve found my other fics at WRFA; I also have a few more bits and pieces on my LJ (jaq-of-spades.livejournal.com) when I meddle in other fandoms. I\'ve written a Logan/Faith piece that I love and plan to upload soonish as part of my Fandom Multiverse. Feel free to friend me!
AH! I was getting so into it and it just ended... NO!! How this story isn't a one-shot, I wanna see what happens next! Please write more, and soon :D
-- Wolf
Wow. I like this story. I really wasn't so sure about reading it, but I took a chance and I think you really made a great plot by using that particular AU scenario. And I love how you write Hank! But then again, I always love Beast -- I was so happy when they made him a character in X3 XD
-- Wolf
Author's Response: Thank you for giving my humble little fic a chance...I think that is some of the best praise I could have recieved; that you were leary of the fic, but enjoy it anyway. So, thank you again, for giving me a chance.\r\n