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Before she could reach that fight bar in Canada, Rogue was taken in and raised by Mystique. Years later, she and Wolverine meet for the first time as fellow X-Men. Fate draws them together after a very unusual attack leaves Wolverine in a unique position to help. AU with movie/comicverse elements.

Rated: Adult
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Adult, Drama, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: Animal Death, Not Beta Read

Series: None
Chapters: 20
Wordcount: 68600 - Hits: 160530
Complete?: No - Published: 07/01/2011 - Last Updated: 10/23/2011
Reviewer: lily5 Signed star star star star star
Date: 09/05/2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I feel like this story is releasing pheromones in the air, leaving me dazzed.

Author's Response: Ha, I\'m glad you like the story! Thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: lily5 Signed star star star star half star
Date: 09/19/2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I loved how Logan reacted to the 'Alpha' bit and am delighted he finally got to hear those words he has been so heroically waiting for.

It is also great they are both finally on the same page. One thing less for me to worry about so I can more freely enjoy their handling of 'ferality' and what comes with it. (is that even a word...)

Anyway, thank you for the new chapter. It brightened my very weird weekend.

Author's Response: Glad to brighten your very weird weekend. I\'m guessing that means weird in a bad way? *curious* Anyhow, yes, there will still be complications, but I\'ve never been one to leave love interests angsty and brooding for too long. They\'re both grownups, and they\'ll soon be facing enough issues from outside sources that they hardly need to be at odds with each other on top of it all! (Okay, okay, they will still be at odds with each other and themselves quite a bit, but that just makes it fun, right?) P.S. Ferality=awesome new word.

Now COMPLETE! Logan goes undercover to investigate Sebastian Shaw after Jean disappears. He finds Rogue there, but what is her connection to Shaw, and can the two of them form an unlikely alliance? Of course they can, it's me! Pure Rogan, don't worry, Jean is just a plot device. ;-)

My usual, which means AU, with drama, action, angst, hot Rogan sex, and a happy ending. And I promise never to leave a story unfinished.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Adult, Angst, Drama, Friendship, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: Animal Death

Series: None
Chapters: 22
Wordcount: 49458 - Hits: 157641
Complete?: Yes - Published: 07/29/2011 - Last Updated: 11/14/2011
Reviewer: lily5 Signed star star star star star
Date: 10/17/2011 Title: Chapter 18: The Mark

Review....
Awesome? Totally awesome? I so loved her acceptance of his feral side.

Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much. I\'m glad you liked the feral acceptance part. It came out a little weirder than I expected, but I liked it in the end. :-)

Anna Marie D'Ancanto learns to live her life, free of the Rogue - and without the Wolverine. But will she realize, despite the many roads she takes, that Logan will always find his Marie?

Rated: NC-17
Categories: X-Men Origins Wolverine, X3, AU, Comicverse
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Adult, Angst, Drama, Songfic
Tags: None
Warnings: Rape/Non-Con

Series: None
Chapters: 68
Wordcount: 162787 - Hits: 509598
Complete?: No - Published: 08/12/2011 - Last Updated: 08/12/2011
Reviewer: lily5 Signed
Date: 09/09/2012 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68 Marie

Any chance of the Epilogue?

Scott starts noticing the once shy girl and her feminine forms moves in to his dreams. When Jean finds her once loyal suitor has his mind elsewhere she turns to the trusting Logan. But Wolverine does not like it when his property is poached upon and when Cyclops goes to far he realizes just how far he himself is willing to go.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: X1, X2
Characters: None
Genres: Adult
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read

Series: None
Chapters: 6
Wordcount: 4148 - Hits: 37443
Complete?: No - Published: 08/22/2011 - Last Updated: 09/29/2013
Reviewer: lily5 Signed star star star star
Date: 09/27/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I loved the image you started this part with. And that we found out how she feels about Wolverine.

Author's Response: Thank you! I suck at dialogue unless it is internal. Glad you like it!

Reviewer: lily5 Signed
Date: 09/27/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yeah, I personally find inner monologues easiest to write....

Author's Response: They really are :)

Reviewer: lily5 Signed
Date: 09/28/2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Logan absolutely deserved that. *evil snicker*

Author's Response: Haha He deserves much more. Ignorant is what he is :P

Marie D'Ancanto is an assassin and her target is James Logan Howlett aka The Wolverine.

Rated: PG-13
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Drama, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 10
Wordcount: 23804 - Hits: 55663
Complete?: Yes - Published: 09/08/2011 - Last Updated: 01/09/2012
Reviewer: lily5 Signed
Date: 09/17/2011 Title: Chapter 2: Meeting

Loved Logan's voice here. With just a touch of vulnerability...

Author's Response: Thanks, lily. I like Gruff Logan but I also think he\'s equal part Lovable Logan.

Reviewer: lily5 Signed star star star star
Date: 09/20/2011 Title: Chapter 3: Dinner

Head-turning AU. I'm fascinated with both of them, especially Logan who actually felt secure enough to outright own something. A bar, of course, but still....

Wonderful chapter, thank you.

Author's Response: Thank, you lily. I was worried that readers would get what I was trying to do and I\'m happy that it\'s coming across.

AU story. X-men Evolution with a little X-men the movie mixed in.
Professor X makes a personal request of Logan while he's away from the school, to find and bring home a former stundent of his by the name of Rogue. However, Rogue isn't alone when Logan finds her and he gets more than he bargains for.

Rated: R
Categories: AU, X-Men Evolution, X1
Characters: None
Genres: Adult, Drama, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read

Series: None
Chapters: 10
Wordcount: 19131 - Hits: 63123
Complete?: No - Published: 09/16/2011 - Last Updated: 05/27/2012
Reviewer: lily5 Signed
Date: 09/16/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well, I certainly got interested....

Author's Response: I\'m glad to know that the first chapter was able to grab your attention. I hope you continue to read. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: lily5 Signed
Date: 09/17/2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

In my view, Mary-Sue is usually an original, unrealistic character. Like a perfect female who knows elvish and swordmanship accidentally ending up in the Middle Earth in the arms of a beautiful unattached elf. I can't recall ever thinking that a canon character is a Mary-Sue, no matter how out of character.

I see nothing of that in your characters so far.... Logan feels a bit understated, but not one author's characterization is the same and you are just two chapters in so I see no reason to run away screaming.
Pity the children weren't feral, that would have been interesting.

Author's Response: Thanks Lily5 for taking the time to review. I\'m glad to know so far that my characters aren\'t what you would consider Mary-Sues. I can appreicate your view about Logan. To be honest, I have a hard time writing his character, so I tend to go in a out of character for him. You\'ll probably understand more once I\'ve posted more chapters. Neat idea about the kids, that would have been interesting. However I kind of like that they\'re not too. Thanks again.

Marie is at a lab. Logan ends up there too. What will happen when their world collide?

A series of 100 short scenes that tell their story. Back to Back POV.

Rated: R
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Dark, Drabble, Humor, Shipper, Vignette
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 27
Wordcount: 9270 - Hits: 150450
Complete?: No - Published: 09/20/2011 - Last Updated: 10/21/2015
Reviewer: lily5 Signed
Date: 09/21/2011 Title: Chapter 18: Backlash

Well, personally, I can't stand her.

Author's Response: I\'m sorry. Remember, this Jean is totally AU. She\'s madly in love with Scott, lol. *grin* Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: lily5 Signed
Date: 09/22/2011 Title: Chapter 1: A Cunning Plan

I'm afraid Jean was hate at first sight in the first movie. I simply love to detest her.

And I think even in canon she would peek into Rogue, right?

Author's Response: I honestly cannot remember. But Jean is totally trying to do her job, and protect everyone, and get a grip on someone she\'s pretty sure she\'s going to have to help in the long run. I love love/hate relationships. They\'re all kinds of dirty fun, lol.

Now complete! Rogue believes that isolation is the key to her mutation, but is she really as alone as she thinks? AU.

Rated: Mature
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Adult, Drama, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 35
Wordcount: 80407 - Hits: 281503
Complete?: Yes - Published: 07/05/2012 - Last Updated: 01/01/2013
Reviewer: lily5 Signed
Date: 10/28/2012 Title: Chapter 27: The Mistake

Yay!!!

Reviewer: lily5 Signed star star star star half star
Date: 08/24/2012 Title: Chapter 16: The Agreement

Logan musings are so painfully bitter-sweeet they make me ache.
Thank you for sharing the story with us.

Author's Response: Aw, thanks. I am always surprised by how much is going on in his head. I start writing, thinking it\'ll just be a paragraph or two, and then all of a sudden I have a big section. I think it makes sense, though. He doesn\'t say much out loud, but he\'s thinking through it all. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: lily5 Signed
Date: 08/25/2012 Title: Chapter 17: The Touch

It's so nice to see them slowly getting out of their shells. Not to mention swooningly sweet.

It strikes me as amusing that Logan comes off so easy and so well in boyfriend comparison. Not to disparage Logan, definitely no, but almost everyone could outshine Bobby.

Author's Response: Yeah, I felt bad trash-talking Bobby so much, but in truth, he was just a kid. He\'s probably grown since then, but at the time I can believe he was pretty much scared stupid of having the life sucked from him. I\'m trying hard not to make Logan unrealistically awesome, because he surely doesn\'t have much relationship experience, but his ability to say what he means has already been established, and I can see how that would be really reassuring to Marie. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: lily5 Signed
Date: 09/03/2012 Title: Chapter 19: The Nightmare

Eh, the lady went killing in front of the kid so he would have been traumatized either way.

Glad that Marie tackled the issue.

Reviewer: lily5 Signed star star star star half star
Date: 09/16/2012 Title: Chapter 20: The Bed

"You thought...that I was savin’ that for someone else?" scene was just what I hoped for.

Reviewer: lily5 Signed
Date: 10/08/2012 Title: Chapter 25: The Body

Ooooh, interesting developments.
Well, like the lady said - there's her mutation to (more then) even the odds.
And is it me or does the intruder sounds like Remy?

Reviewer: lily5 Signed
Date: 12/27/2012 Title: Chapter 32: The Arrival

“I thought Jeannie’s eyes were gonna pop out of her head.”
His brow furrowed. “Which one was she again?”

*thumbs up*

Reviewer: lily5 Signed
Date: 12/24/2012 Title: Chapter 31: The Affirmation

Sizzling and lovely.
I like that she's aware that outside world is one different, messy ball.

Marie returns to the mansion at the end of X3 after getting the cure. A conversation with Bobby leaves Marie feeling a little lost, so she turns to a friend she can always count on.



Rated: PG
Categories: X3
Characters: None
Genres: Friendship
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 5642 - Hits: 2247
Complete?: Yes - Published: 08/30/2012 - Last Updated: 08/30/2012
Reviewer: lily5 Signed
Date: 08/30/2012 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot

"Desperation brought me to you Logan, but friendship and love made me stay."

Something he really needed to hear.
Thanks for sharing, was nice to read.

Author's Response:

Awww... thank you so much! I love that line too. I\'m glad you enjoyed it :D

ONESHOT: Its all about the little gestures

Rated: G
Categories: X3, X1, X2
Characters: None
Genres: Drabble
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 999 - Hits: 1902
Complete?: Yes - Published: 09/11/2012 - Last Updated: 09/11/2012
Reviewer: lily5 Signed
Date: 09/16/2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ooooh, how do one knows it's love - he drools.

Author's Response: Lol The ultimate evidence of a mans affection is when he drools on you after all haha