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I feel like this story is releasing pheromones in the air, leaving me dazzed.
Author's Response: Ha, I\'m glad you like the story! Thanks for reviewing :)
I loved how Logan reacted to the 'Alpha' bit and am delighted he finally got to hear those words he has been so heroically waiting for.
It is also great they are both finally on the same page. One thing less for me to worry about so I can more freely enjoy their handling of 'ferality' and what comes with it. (is that even a word...)
Anyway, thank you for the new chapter. It brightened my very weird weekend.
Author's Response: Glad to brighten your very weird weekend. I\'m guessing that means weird in a bad way? *curious* Anyhow, yes, there will still be complications, but I\'ve never been one to leave love interests angsty and brooding for too long. They\'re both grownups, and they\'ll soon be facing enough issues from outside sources that they hardly need to be at odds with each other on top of it all! (Okay, okay, they will still be at odds with each other and themselves quite a bit, but that just makes it fun, right?) P.S. Ferality=awesome new word.
Review....
Awesome? Totally awesome? I so loved her acceptance of his feral side.
Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much. I\'m glad you liked the feral acceptance part. It came out a little weirder than I expected, but I liked it in the end. :-)
Any chance of the Epilogue?
I loved the image you started this part with. And that we found out how she feels about Wolverine.
Author's Response: Thank you! I suck at dialogue unless it is internal. Glad you like it!
Yeah, I personally find inner monologues easiest to write....
Author's Response: They really are :)
Logan absolutely deserved that. *evil snicker*
Author's Response: Haha He deserves much more. Ignorant is what he is :P
Loved Logan's voice here. With just a touch of vulnerability...
Author's Response: Thanks, lily. I like Gruff Logan but I also think he\'s equal part Lovable Logan.
Head-turning AU. I'm fascinated with both of them, especially Logan who actually felt secure enough to outright own something. A bar, of course, but still....
Wonderful chapter, thank you.
Author's Response: Thank, you lily. I was worried that readers would get what I was trying to do and I\'m happy that it\'s coming across.
Well, I certainly got interested....
Author's Response: I\'m glad to know that the first chapter was able to grab your attention. I hope you continue to read. Thanks for reviewing!
In my view, Mary-Sue is usually an original, unrealistic character. Like a perfect female who knows elvish and swordmanship accidentally ending up in the Middle Earth in the arms of a beautiful unattached elf. I can't recall ever thinking that a canon character is a Mary-Sue, no matter how out of character.
I see nothing of that in your characters so far.... Logan feels a bit understated, but not one author's characterization is the same and you are just two chapters in so I see no reason to run away screaming.
Pity the children weren't feral, that would have been interesting.
Author's Response: Thanks Lily5 for taking the time to review. I\'m glad to know so far that my characters aren\'t what you would consider Mary-Sues. I can appreicate your view about Logan. To be honest, I have a hard time writing his character, so I tend to go in a out of character for him. You\'ll probably understand more once I\'ve posted more chapters. Neat idea about the kids, that would have been interesting. However I kind of like that they\'re not too. Thanks again.
Well, personally, I can't stand her.
Author's Response: I\'m sorry. Remember, this Jean is totally AU. She\'s madly in love with Scott, lol. *grin* Thanks for reading!
I'm afraid Jean was hate at first sight in the first movie. I simply love to detest her.
And I think even in canon she would peek into Rogue, right?
Author's Response: I honestly cannot remember. But Jean is totally trying to do her job, and protect everyone, and get a grip on someone she\'s pretty sure she\'s going to have to help in the long run. I love love/hate relationships. They\'re all kinds of dirty fun, lol.
Logan musings are so painfully bitter-sweeet they make me ache.
Thank you for sharing the story with us.
Author's Response: Aw, thanks. I am always surprised by how much is going on in his head. I start writing, thinking it\'ll just be a paragraph or two, and then all of a sudden I have a big section. I think it makes sense, though. He doesn\'t say much out loud, but he\'s thinking through it all. Thanks for reviewing!
It's so nice to see them slowly getting out of their shells. Not to mention swooningly sweet.
It strikes me as amusing that Logan comes off so easy and so well in boyfriend comparison. Not to disparage Logan, definitely no, but almost everyone could outshine Bobby.
Author's Response: Yeah, I felt bad trash-talking Bobby so much, but in truth, he was just a kid. He\'s probably grown since then, but at the time I can believe he was pretty much scared stupid of having the life sucked from him. I\'m trying hard not to make Logan unrealistically awesome, because he surely doesn\'t have much relationship experience, but his ability to say what he means has already been established, and I can see how that would be really reassuring to Marie. Thanks for reviewing!
Eh, the lady went killing in front of the kid so he would have been traumatized either way.
Glad that Marie tackled the issue.
"You thought...that I was savin’ that for someone else?" scene was just what I hoped for.
Ooooh, interesting developments.
Well, like the lady said - there's her mutation to (more then) even the odds.
And is it me or does the intruder sounds like Remy?
“I thought Jeannie’s eyes were gonna pop out of her head.”
His brow furrowed. “Which one was she again?”
*thumbs up*
Sizzling and lovely.
I like that she's aware that outside world is one different, messy ball.
Marie returns to the mansion at the end of X3 after getting the cure. A conversation with Bobby leaves Marie feeling a little lost, so she turns to a friend she can always count on.
"Desperation brought me to you Logan, but friendship and love made me stay."
Something he really needed to hear.
Thanks for sharing, was nice to read.
Author's Response:
Awww... thank you so much! I love that line too. I\'m glad you enjoyed it :D
Ooooh, how do one knows it's love - he drools.
Author's Response: Lol The ultimate evidence of a mans affection is when he drools on you after all haha