Now COMPLETE!: A black-market ring dealing in mutants, and Logan and Marie. AU. My usual promises -- good grammar, smut, angst, action, drama, and a happy ending.
Rated: Mature
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Adult, Angst, Drama, PWP, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Wordcount: 56517 - Hits: 241985
Complete?: Yes - Published: 11/25/2011 - Last Updated: 05/24/2012
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Reviews by Emily Blackrose
Reviewer: Emily Blackrose Signed
Date: 04/24/2012 Title: Chapter 20: The Boat
Date: 04/24/2012 Title: Chapter 20: The Boat
Aw, crap. I hate when Erik does stuff like this. How you torture me, so!
Author's Response: Yeah, Erik is pretty devious, isn\'t he? :-) What does he have in mind, I wonder? Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Emily Blackrose Signed
Date: 04/24/2012 Title: Chapter 21: The Symphony
Date: 04/24/2012 Title: Chapter 21: The Symphony
SUCH an action-packed chapter. So many things going on!
I absolutely loved how you described the metal singing to her and the different tone each kind of metal had. I love the title chapter. =)
I really liked Marie's conversation with Owen. Not only is it foreshadowing the danger to come (is it foreshadowing when it's so obvious?), but reveals that despite how hard she tries to convince herself she doesn't care about anyone, she's leaving in order to protect them all. Really wonderful.
Author's Response: So glad you liked it! Owen is pretty creepy, isn\'t he? Yeah, poor Marie. I think she\'s being pushed away by both internal and external forces, but a lot of them definitely have to do with protecting Logan and the mansion.
Reviewer: Emily Blackrose Signed
Date: 04/24/2012 Title: Chapter 22: The Cell
Date: 04/24/2012 Title: Chapter 22: The Cell
Damn you, woman! I said no more capturing people! Just hope they get out soon. That's enough torture for one story. Not that I'm mad or anything. You're just torturing me with this story. See? I used torture in multiple ways. Aren't I witty?
Author's Response: Ha...got to have just a little more capture...just a little, pretty please? Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Emily Blackrose Signed
Date: 04/24/2012 Title: Chapter 23: The Present
Date: 04/24/2012 Title: Chapter 23: The Present
Seriously. I'm going to have to start swearing at you. There's really nothing else I can say but "curse you and your damnable story!"
Author's Response: :-) I\'ll take swears, as long as they\'re in review form. Thanks for taking the time!
Reviewer: Emily Blackrose Signed
Date: 04/24/2012 Title: Chapter 24: The Apology
Date: 04/24/2012 Title: Chapter 24: The Apology
Finally some progress in the right direction! By which I mean, less torture. =P But I realize it is important to the story so I won't reprimand you too severely. I'm very pleased that Marie has come to realizations about her actions and has embraced the truth. She's acknowledging what is important to her and accepting it. Lovely chapter.
Author's Response: :-) Yes, these characters really balked getting to a certain place in their relationship...but I think I\'m FINALLY getting them there. And having Marie realize she has to let her guard down and let Logan in is an important part of it. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Emily Blackrose Signed
Date: 05/20/2012 Title: Chapter 25: The Plan
Date: 05/20/2012 Title: Chapter 25: The Plan
I think the action was excellent. It felt fast-paced and exciting but was still easy to follow.
Author's Response: So glad you liked it! Thanks so much for reviewing. :-)