I really like this. There is so much intensity in it--and I like that. Plus, I like that they're a little withdrawn from each other, at least to this point.

And why don't men ever have to follow the same rules they set for women? I'm just wondering.

Yay! I loved this. It left behind all of the angst and confusion and just, well, let things happen. This makes total sense for Logan and Marie! And the writing was just . . . awesome!

I enjoyed the whole story very much! Very original and impressive.

Hilarious and hot. I loved every second of reading this, although I wanted to die of embarrassment for Marie at times.

I should say watch your grammar. There was nothing too distracting but there were some minor errors.

Thanks so much for sharing. This was awesome!

Hmmmm. I wonder if the girls will be able to read his actions or if THEY'LL just feel excluded by him. This could be tricky. I can't wait to see what you do with it!

Very interesting. I'm intrigued, both b this plot and by Logan's new stowaway. I'm looking forward to seeing where this takes us.

I be that last bit was the most fun Logan's had (without female company) in a long time! I wonder what Marie's reaction to Damask's conversation will be . . . will she feel slighted, overlooked on be just plain mad? And I hope she tries that bodystocking thing with Logan. ;0)

Okay, there is a sequel to this, right? Otherwise, that's just mean to end it on a cliffhanger like that! I'm looking . . . but will you fill me in, just in case?

Wow. This. Is. AMAZING.
I loved the Marie-as-Jubilee section. You have them both spot on. I kind of feel bad for Marie that Jubes let the cat so completely out of the bag, but I know Marie would have never told Logan how she felt about him on her own, so that was a good way to handle that situation. :)

Thanks so much for this; it is truly great writing. Although some parts of it made me squirm, shake my head and want to throw my laptop through the window, I'd eventually see that all the horrific stuff was necessary to the story. You've made me see a side of Logan that is very rarely seen in fanfiction. Usually, he's the protector, or the lover or the joke-ster. Once in awhile he'll go berserk, but never when it comes to Marie. With this story you've blended almost all of those sides of him (though the joke-ster is missing; he'd be out of place here). I truly got caught up in this story and I'm sure that it will haunt me. Thank you for sharing it.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for commenting on this, I\'m finally back for a while on here and I\'m returning the ompliments given, I know there are parts you wanted to scream at me and shout but the thing is it was needed, they both needed it and finally got what they needed.

This is so . . . beautifully depressing. And I thought Paperback Hero was a comedy. Although your depression leads got great writing, try not to get depressed too much. I won't be able to not read the writing and then I'll be depressed too. :0)

This was wonderful! I love reading your stories, because I never know what it's going to be. There's always some sort of angst, but the ending can be bitter, happy, harsh, depressing, brilliant, delightful--and sometimes more than one of those at the same time. I don't know how you do it, but your writing's always creative and extraordinary!