So funny. I love the air of confusion that you were able to infuse into the words. Keep going!

Okay. I'm shaking right now. I want to know what the hell is going on so bad. The most potent part of this though, to me anyway, was the segment about Mystique in the beginning. This part of it made me really feel for her and made me want to cry because of how messed up life can be.

"About Raven loves Charles and Charles loves Erik and Erik doesn't know how to love but can only come when she wears Charles' face."

:( This was so sad but so good at the same time. Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: So glad you picked up on that. For me, that\'s the saddest bit too. Because she has the burden of knowledge - there are only three people who know what it\'s REALLY all about between the Brotherhood and the Xmen, and Raven\'s the only one who appreciates its fully. I really enjoyed First Class and that glimpse of all their possibilities and the people they were before ... I didn\'t want it to take over here, but all of a sudden THAT was my Mystique, you know?

Oh my god. This made me cry. The entire story was so well written and I love the old, slightly different feeling that the flow of the text has. It's been refreshing to read something so different and I will miss this world as well. Thank you for creating it for us.

Author's Response: I mean didn\'t mean to make you cry! But I\'m glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the review. Hobbits away, hey!

I feel for Logan and Stray so much in this fic. Their confusion and struggles really leap off the screen and into my head. I always love seeing this on the most recent page.

Damn. I really really want to know about this Moonlight Key business.

I love this story and always enjoy seeing it on the most recent page. I am always in such a hurry to find out what happens that I tend to skip sentences on accident the first time through and have to reread the chapter to make sure I didn't miss anything. Not that that is a hardship mind you because you're writing it superb.

Beautiful chapter. The feelings and imagery that I got from it were super intense. You, my dear, are talented as hell. And, though I always want more of this story, the shorter chapter didn't feel awkward at all, like they sometimes can. It followed a great arc and was a good, and necessary, step back from plot and into contemplation/character development. It worked very well!

Author's Response: Thank you! I\'m so glad the chapter came off well. And \'talented as hell\' is like, the coolest compliment I\'ve ever gotten as a writer. Hope you enjoy the rest of the story, as I am very much enjoying both of yours :)

That bellboy has no idea how close to death he was standing. And thinking the growling was a cold. Hahaha. Either he was hoping that that was what it was or he is just that stupid. I'm going with the latter.

I really wanted Marie to try to delve into Rogue here and see if she could remember how to drive the stick, but I totally understand why she didn't go there yet. Great update.

Author's Response: Yeah. I actually came about *this* close to having Wolverine pummel the poor guy and then proceed to teach his mate a lesson she\'d never forget . . . but alas, that will have to be a redux or something :). I\'m glad you\'re liking the story so far. Marie is definitely going to start dealing with those repressed memories once she gets back to the mansion, hopefully with some interesting and entertaining results :).

So good! I'm loving this story and am always waiting eagerly for what's coming next.

Author's Response: Thanks! I\'m glad you\'re liking the story, and sorry that updates have slowed since the start of the semester. Boo =(

Every time I see something from you on the most recent page I do a little happy dance because I know I'm in for an awesome ride. This looks very promising and I can't wait to find out what happens.

Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much! I was so excited to see your fic up and running again. :-D I can promise Rogan interaction in the next few chapters at least...

"Where was he? What the fuck war was this?" I really, really loved this line. It just stuck something in me as kinda funny but sad too. I love the confusion that it tells of.

Besides that, another great chapter. I love this story and Logan's ability to actually reason through things even when he's pissed off to the high heavens. Great characterization over all.

Author's Response: I\'m glad you liked that line, especially since I wasted like an hour Googling to figure out where helicopters were deployed in the Korean war. I am not a huge fan of Origins, but the opening war-montage I thought was really well done, and I can imagine choppers being a pretty visceral trigger for someone who has been through all of that, even if he\'s lost half of it to adamantium-bullet amnesia.

Ohhh... So good to see this. I love how you can see the fear that Rogue was feeling when Shaw was in her space. And I hate him. I don't even know what he's really done yet and I still hate him. I hope Logan eats him for breakfast.

Author's Response: Yeah, Sebastian Shaw is pretty creepy, isn\'t he? Hopefully he will get his just desserts. ;-) Thanks for reviewing!

I love this chapter and the fact that he won her, though we all know she wasn't going to be going with someone else. And I'm so stoked that she's showing her backbone. I'm slightly concerned for her mental state at the moment though, unless she's a really good actress. And that's what I'm hoping. Great read!

Author's Response: I\'m so glad you liked it. Hope your fears for her mental state were assuaged by the next chapter. :-)

Jubes and her big mouth are at it again. Don't get me wrong, I love the girl, but there have been many times when her input was not needed in the slightest.

Great chapter! Sorry I haven't been able to review lately. Know that I'm still reading and loving every word while eagerly awaiting more. (BTW: RL sucks)

Author's Response: Yeah, Jubes. Her brain is a few seconds behind her mouth, but then again who would expect Wolverine to have had an on-mission hookup, especially with Marie as she was when Jubes met her. Sorry about the RL suck, I\'m glad to know you\'re still reading!