Yasona Black [Contact]
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Member Since: 03/02/2007
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*waves sheepishly* It has been ages since I've been on here, but I'm back in a reading fanfiction mood. I've also been doing my best to review the fanfics that I do read, as I've always been horrible at reviewing.

I'm hoping I'll be able to get a couple one-shots up soon. I have a few ideas, but I don't know how worthwhile they are.
 
Reviews by Yasona Black
Marie doesn't need to do it.

Rated: R
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Dark
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 2506 - Hits: 1766
Complete?: Yes - Published: 04/26/2003 - Last Updated: 04/26/2003
Reviewer: Yasona Black Signed
Date: 07/07/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I loved this. Really loved this. It was dark, creepy, and twisted and I've always thought that Rogue's power could've easily gone such away. It has always seemed like something addicting.

I especially loved the little note at the end. It tied the whole thing together. Really nice job. :)

"The cute stops here!"

Rated: G
Categories: X2
Characters: None
Genres: Foof
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: Her little finger
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 1295 - Hits: 2900
Complete?: Yes - Published: 09/13/2007 - Last Updated: 09/13/2007
Reviewer: Yasona Black Signed
Date: 09/11/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Aww, that was adorable! It made me laugh.

Moral degeneracy followed intellectual degeneration.

Rated: PG-13
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 24
Wordcount: 47000 - Hits: 176598
Complete?: Yes - Published: 10/02/2007 - Last Updated: 07/01/2009
Reviewer: Yasona Black Signed
Date: 06/29/2009 Title: Chapter 20: Waste Side

The hardest thing about reading a WIP when there's already 19 (or 20 as it turned out) chapters, is that you finally reach a cliffie that you can't just shoot past. D:

This story is brilliant and I love the writing and the AU world that you've created. Can't wait for more!

Good luck and happy writing!

Author's Response: I apologize, if it helps the story won\'t end on a cliffhanger. Thank you! :D

The Mutant Situation is worsening, and is compounded by the escape of Eric Lenscherr from prison.

Rated: R
Categories: X1
Characters: None
Genres: Drama
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 18
Wordcount: 54402 - Hits: 89966
Complete?: No - Published: 05/04/2008 - Last Updated: 05/04/2008
Reviewer: Yasona Black Signed star star star star star
Date: 07/01/2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter Eighteen: Epilogue

In all due honesty, this is such a brilliant story. I can't figure out whether it's movie canon or comic canon, but I do know that it doesn't matter since you've meshed them so well together.

I'm assuming there is another story coming and I can't wait. :) Awesome job. Good luck and happy writing!

Sometimes we get the balance wrong. Life is not about knowing the answers, life is what happens while you're looking for them. And the bad decisions? The screw-ups? They're what keep it interesting.


Rated: Adult
Categories: X3
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Angst, Humor, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 31
Wordcount: 91223 - Hits: 317494
Complete?: Yes - Published: 08/31/2008 - Last Updated: 10/11/2009
Reviewer: Yasona Black Signed
Date: 03/30/2009 Title: Chapter 26: A new dawn, a new day

I rarely review on this site as I often forget that I have an account, but this chapter was hilarious and fun. I loved all the chapters before this; you have a wonderful skill of leaving the reader wanting more and more, but it is nice that you can do more than just the angst. You have (what seems to be) a well-rounded, well-fleshed story and it's amazing.

Nice job and good luck.

-Yasona

Author's Response: Hi, I\'m so sorry it\'s taken me an age to respond - I\'m usually much better than this! But I just wanted to say thank you for your wonderful review! I\'m really glad you\'re enjoying it :oD

Sometimes it takes somebody else to point out the obvious

Rated: PG
Categories: X3, AU
Characters: None
Genres: Humor
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: What To Expect
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 770 - Hits: 2925
Complete?: Yes - Published: 11/11/2008 - Last Updated: 11/11/2008
Reviewer: Yasona Black Signed
Date: 11/11/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That's so cute! I'd love to see more of this. We seem to have skipped all of the fluffy/angst our Rogan pair goes through and got to the afterwards part. (Can't have tons of sex without a baby...Well you can, but still...)

Author's Response: I appreciate the feedback; thanks for taking time to give some! I\'m new to this but doing the best I can. At least in my home, the really interesting and fun stuff started after we got past the initial hearts and flowers honeymoon phase. Nothing was more interesting than each of my pregnancies and what my poor sainted husband had to deal with. Figured Logan should have that kind of fun, too! *wink*

Wolverine, Wolverine, Wolverine, how… impotent you must feel trapped here while I make your girlfriend pay for spying on the Brotherhood.

Follows the events of Open Invitation (http://www.wolverineandrogue.com/wrfa/viewstory.php?sid=3321)

(For andthex-men's (http://community.livejournal.com/andthexmen/) Off-Season Fic Off #2)


Rated: R
Categories: Wolverine & the X-Men
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Drama
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 2907 - Hits: 4071
Complete?: Yes - Published: 04/26/2009 - Last Updated: 04/26/2009
Reviewer: Yasona Black Signed
Date: 07/01/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Captive Audience

Awww, Rogue saved herself and Logan. :) Very nice writing.

Rogue goes to take the cure and is set up in the process. Coming out of it, she forms a new family containing old foes and new friends alike...

Rated: Mature
Categories: X3, AU
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Dark
Tags: None
Warnings: Rape/Non-Con

Series: None
Chapters: 40
Wordcount: 95104 - Hits: 276638
Complete?: Yes - Published: 05/25/2009 - Last Updated: 02/07/2011
Reviewer: Yasona Black Signed
Date: 06/29/2009 Title: Chapter 3: a cage and no hope

This story seems very interesting and I'm curious about what will happen. As for this chapter, you wrote it very well. I do hope that you will continue doing so, as the after-effects are more difficult to write realistically. But I do think you're doing a good job. :)

Reviewer: Yasona Black Signed
Date: 07/19/2009 Title: Chapter 7: Rescue and Escape

This story is really good and so is the writing. It's very intriguing and I can't wait to read more. :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I owe a lot to my beta for the help.