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I love this. I love the idea that Logan would freak because of the past. I am glad you didn't brag it out though, Marie figured it out and they will work forward. The Smut from Marie's perspective will be excellent I am sure. I really like the way you have put together the structure of the chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks, alesia :)
I was just thinking about you and rereading The Target this morning. I really like this. It begs for a sequel but I see why you ended it where you did.
Author's Response: Aw, so sweet to know that people actually think my stories worth a re-read. I\'m glad you liked it!
I am simply here to echo what Sahaski, White Dove and others have said - it's hot, it's tender, it's worrying and it is compelling.
oh Wolverine is one sexy bastard isn't he? HOT!
Is wrong that I am not sure I care what happened to Logan??? (That's not true, I do but I think I am with Marie - Wolverine deserves his time too)
Author's Response: Thanks, Alesia :) I\'m enjoying Wolverine time too...
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I liked this chapter a lot. Logan cursing Ro for telling her story was pretty cute.
I don't know if you have done it on purpose but you have a very Carnivale (the series) feel to this. There is mystery and intrigue and something vaguely off in the distance you can't quite see. I love it. (But I am weird. :))
Oh man! Cliffhanger!! I wonder if Ororo shot Mistress Gold or Stray. Your descriptions are so vivid I could see the entire scene play out before my eyes. Excellent
I wanted to let you know how much I am loving the way you are growing the threat to them as well as the way you are bonding them together. I just hope the 'safe place' really is safe.
I read this once last night and again this morning. I don't know if you planned it or not but the cadence and language of this chapter fits its mood. It's smoky, dark and on the edge of scary but oddly comforting. I am highly intrigued as to what Ro is up to. She is obviously Logan's friend and a trusted one if she is in the cave. I am guessing that's Kurt but I can't help but wonder what Hank would be like.
So I had great fun with the vocabulary you chose for this chapter. I had to look up both cariad and termagant. I think cariad is my new favorite term of affection. I really enjoyed the tempo of this chapter. Logan and Stray's relationship progresses before our eyes and Logan does it out of instinct. I love playing "spot the X-men". I am assuming Gold is Phoenix being Red's twin and all. The entrance of Emma completely turns the story on its ear. I am looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: i had great fun with the insults and swear-words in this chapter, so i\'m glad my efforts were appreciated. (i like \"termagant but i have to say, my personal favorite was \"plague-bitch.\" love the word \"cariad,\" as well BTW so i\'m happy to have introduced you to it.)thanks for the review: i\'m used to writing a more worldly, tough chick Marie so i keep having to remind myself that Stray is quite young and innocent in this, and it\'s good to hear that her relationship with Logan is progressing well in spite of that. cheers, hobbits away, hey!
Ohh I love it. Lots and lots of information in this one. I love that Kitty wants to kill Emma. I like it alot!
Author's Response: glad you\'re enjoying it. and you gotta love a homicidal shadowcat!
beautiful, this entire chapter made me smile.
Author's Response: i;m glad to hear it love, thanks for the review. :-)
OOOOHHHH the plot thickens. I would bet Logan didn't take into account that Shaw might have an interest in Stray. I have to say I giggle about the word chatelaine. It my non-profit group it is the position that welcomes newcomers, see why it makes me giggle??? :)
Still loving it.
Author's Response: yeah, i see why it makes you giggle ;-P my best friend\'s a medieval history graduate and she told me that in norman areas a chatelaine was what the lord of the manor called his mistress: she was usually the woman he really loved but he had to marry his wife for dynastic reasons. and i agree, i don\'t think it computes in logan\'s brain that someone might try to become his rival. i mean, what kind of masochistic, suicidal guy would do that? (coughs, *Sebastian Shaw*) thanks for the review, glad you\'re still loving it. hope you like the next. H
well somebody had some help from Emma or Gold but somehow I don't think it was Shaw. Humm I wonder who that was and I wonder where Logan and Strya are going to sleep tomoorow night cause I bet it won't be seperate.
Author's Response: you bet your darndest they won\'t... and you\'re right, there\'s more to this than just shaw being a dick... the thick plottens!
Not a minute's peace for these two huh? You couldn't give them an afternoon or an hour or...well I am kidding I hope you know. I love the way you have of making Logan soft yet stern, knowledgable yet fearful, faithful yet awary.
I just have to say Gold better get hers. I am pretty sure you will let Kitty take care of Emmilaine. I have a feeling our little Mistress Kit has a plan to get her man back especailly if she just HAPPENED to be carry something like Dove's Heart for helping people oppressed by magic.
Author's Response: first of all, glad you like this version of logan. i was just saying to oracle13 that he\'s probably my favourite so far of all the versions i\'ve written and if he\'s as cool as your description makes him sound then i\'m very proud of myself. (*grins*) secondly, *of course* emmalaine, gold and shaw are all going to get theirs- and kitty is there to go buffy on their collective arses. but there\'s more going on than meets the eye, so stay tuned (most of your observations are spot on, that\'s all i\'m saying). thanks as ever for the review, hobbits away, hey!\r\noh, and there will be some peace for these two eventually. you just have to go through the trouble before you get to the smexy part :-P
Okay so I am not completely sure who just grabbed Stray. I love the idea that it was the Phoenix that wanted Logan or that Logan was interested in (at one time) and not Jean. The gold feathers were really cool and your descriptions of that enchanted were really compelling.
One question, was it Shaw who attacked Stray? That is who I thought it was but when Gold made the comment about her pet I started to wonder?
Author's Response: hey hun, glad you enjoyed the last chapter. i have this theory (completely film-cannon based) that the phoenix and the wolverine were the two really attracted to one another; two people\'s collective ids were trying to get it on rather than the whole love-that-spans-the-ages notion. If that\'s the case then it stands to reason that the phoenix would be interested in the wolverine- or in this story\'s case- his inner beast. as for who attacked stray, this chapter answers that very question- and hopefully poses some others. so i hope you enjoy it :-) oh, and don\'t worry. Logan\'s not far away...
woof, it is an intense chapter. the images are riviting.
Author's Response: *blushes* thanks so much love, i\'m glad you liked it. i hope the new chapter entertains too.
more detailed review will come later but I wanted to let you know I really enjoyed this chapter, it puts some pieces in place for me and has me on the edge of my seat for what is coming next.
Author's Response: hey love, just wanted to give a (belated) thanks for the review, hope you like the new chapter ;-)
Whoah, I don’t think this is going to end how anyone had it planned. Yeah, the Company of Miracles coming to the rescue. Logan is so sweet to not want have wanted this for Stray but really there wasn’t any choice. Stray letting him go, letting him die just wasn’t an option. The other interesting thing will be watching who ends up with the Phoenix inside or will it destroy them all? Humm?
Author's Response: you know i can\'t answer those questions yet love! but thanks for the beta and thanks for the review. hobbits away, hey!
BTW, just a quick note, I read and loved this chapter. I thought I had reviewed via my phone while on the train but it most have gotten lost. I loved how Gold really didn't understand that she was getting set up when she thought she was setting up others.
Hot damn, a new chapter! I love that Gold is getting what she wants and what she deserves all at the same time.
Author's Response: what can i say? the universe has to balance. glad you liked the chapter, thanks for the review. enjoyed your latest offering from \"everything,\" BTW. hobbits away, hey!
I think I left you a note on ff.net but in case I forgot, I think this chapter is crazy great. I don't know who Victor is other than Sabertooth and I don't think that is who you are using here but I can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Hey love, I meant to answer this earlier. Victor Latverius isn\'t Sabretooth, he\'s actually Otto Von Doom, the Fantastic Fours\' nemesis. I just got his name wrong the first few chapters and by the time I realised I was stuck with it. I believe the word I\'m looking for is *oops.* Thanks for the review though, glad you\'re enjoying the story.
The sleepy Logan is just toooo cute! If only he realized the depth of Marie's nightmares, the last absorption just one more horror. I have loved their time together. I am not sure I want them to get to the others.
Author's Response: Isn\'t sleepy Logan adorably sexy? I know a lot of people think he\'s a light sleeper and spends every night tossing and turning with nightmares, but I kind of think he has the capacity to hunker down like a grumpy bear if he feels comfortable enough ;). And I don\'t think anyone could pry his mate away if he fell asleep with her in his arms. And if it\'s any consolation, I wasn\'t sure I wanted them to get to the others either, LOL.