I loved this fic. So well written and so believable. I liked how you showed the miscommunication while it was happening, and how both of them were taking everything the wrong way. And I liked the ending as well. Very sweet story, I'm going to go see what else you have up your sleeve now.

Oooh, glad I found the update, but now I need more!!

I completely love this piece. I especially love the first chapter and your description of falling in love. It's awesome how the word 'Sideways' is now making me giddy and smiley. So perfectly written. Congrats.

Author's Response: Thank you *g* I love that it had the giddy smiley effect :o)

This whole series is fantastic. Two very enthusiastic thumbs up. I really like your writing style, you have a natural knack for telling a story. Your descriptions are great without being overwhelming and the plot had just the right amount of angst. Great!

A nice fluffy love piece you have here. One suggestion to improve your writing style would be to focus more on giving your characters a voice. You write from a writers perspective, as in, YOU are telling us a story, not letting a story unravel through the characters voices. Giving your characters a little more depth and emotion (not just telling us what they are feeling) would appeal to more readers. You are really good at descriptions and overall your style is really clean making it an easy read. Good luck in the future!

I kinda like your spin on things. Neat idea having Logan come back as Weapon X. And then Rogue taking his place. I like stories where Rogue is the experiment. She has so many possibilities.

One suggestion, you might consider expanding the ending to be a bit more drawn out and descriptive. It just seemed to end rather abruptly.

I love it when I read a piece that seems like it could totally fit into an XMen 4 scene. The interaction between the two is so right on. All of it. I could picture both of them acting exactly how you wrote them.

Super job!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I so want to move beyond X3. ;-)

*wimpers* Poor Rogue. It looks like things are never gonna be ok again. I hope you update again soon!

Whoo hoo! I was so happy you updated, and what a great ending!! All the right kinds of angst and gooey feelings... awww... group hugs! Seriously, I enjoyed it a lot.

Author's Response: Thanks for all the great comments--your responses have been much appreciated!

I really enjoyed your fic. You have a nice easy writing style and you actually attempted to have a plot around the shagging (that's a good thing, although we don't always insist on plots that make sense, lol).
I also thought it was kinda sweet that Rogue tried to protect Wolverine and how the relationship developed after that. Kinda sweet. Good job for your first fic!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the great review, and the plot development hints, lol!

Your story is very cute. It put a smile on my face. My only suggestion for you would be to experiment with how you narrate your story. In this story you have taken a more limited approach to writing internal thoughts and events. You did a great job with it, but it might be fun for you to try to expand on having characters experience the moment, and not just tell us about it. I'm not sure if that made sense. Feel free to ask me if you're confused! Thanks for sharing, again, very cute story.

I liked it. Short and sweet. Kinda totally sad btw. Interesting having Logan be Brotherhood and Rogue with the X-Men. I liked their dialogue back and forth as well. And of course the intros at the end (curtesy of the movie). Good job.

Wow, another good fic. You've got angst down great. I felt so bad for both of them in this one. But it's actually easier to believe this kind of 'love story' than one where everything is all rosey. I really enjoyed it. Keep it up!