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Both pieces are just so very sad :( . You did a really beautiful job telling your story. I still want to read more. I hope you're working on something new.
One chapter down and I'm so excited about your story!! I like this character you've created, seems like she's going to be an interesting addition to your story. And I feel like you've captured Logan's dual nature pretty well in this bit too. Good job, can't wait to read more (I might read slowly, this seems like it's going to be good and I'd hate to rush it, lol)
Author's Response: Honey I thank you for reading it in the first place, thanks for sharing what you think of it with me and I hope you enjoy the rest of the story arc. Have fun reading honey and thanks again for commenting, Hugs Jo.
If this story made me think one thing it was this >> Logan's a jerk face!!! Grrr!!!
I think you did your characterizations really well. And even your internal dialogue is good, funny, accurate to the character, not overly 'flowery' or self pitying. It was good. And Logan is still a jerk face.
WOW. You have an amazing talent here. I really hope that you write more stories and post them here. Your characters were so good, and the moments they shared were so unique. I loved the moment in the diner where Logan moves his hand without thinking. It was so tragic. I really want to see you continue writing stories in this alt universe that you've set up. I want to see what happens next. If they resolve their feelings. What happens now that Rogue has absorbed Sabertooth. What happens to Logan's memories?!?! ACK! Please continue writing.
Your story is entertaining and your last scene made me laugh. I can totally picture it. I hope you continue soon!
Wow, super update. I really hope you've got some more coming up fast. I'm loving your fic!
Very cute, I sure wouldn't complain if you felt like adding a chapter 2 to the mix ;)
I like half naked Logan regardless of what he's doing. Glad you picked up the story again. Keep it up!
Well you need to update this immediately. I also need to know the nature of Rogue and Logan's relationship because you've done a great job of keeping it borderline. Don't keep us in the dark long!
Ack, evilness! How many reviews would it take to motivate you to finish your story in a week? Cuz I'll stay up all night reviewing and re-reviewing if you like. I like the plot twist here, neat idea with the MRA. And Logan loves Marie... awwwww. Well we knew that anyway but awwww. I'm kinda curious as to why she hasn't propositioned Wolvie yet... since he's just taking her lead. Interesting dynamic you have set up... please update and include many Logan/Rogue scenes :)
Post more now!!! That was awesome, and so sad. I don't think I've read too many fics that actually deal with a scene like that last one. Actually bringing human fear and hate out in a scene. It was well done, not too dramatic. I cant wait to see Logan flip out.
Damn evil of you I say. Hope the next one comes out asap! And please tell me that Logan brings up the arousal thing with her...
Great update, good plot development in this chapter. You're doing a good job at not rushing things, you're letting the story actually happen instead of getting to the juicy parts. That said, I'm dying to see some juicy parts between Logan and Rogue... I guess good things happen when you wait... but it sure is hard waiting lol. I'm kinda curious about Rogue's thoughts/feelings towards Logan. So far you've made it abundantly clear that he's waiting for the green light.. and you've hinted at the fact that she's turned on by him, but where is her head at? How come she's never spoken to him about how she feels? (assuming she feels the same).
Well this is definately an interesting twist having her Dad call in. I enjoyed the chapter and it got me all angry and riled up at several points, but I do have one criticism to make for it. It does seem a little out of character that Logan would allow himself to go through the crap that they asked him to in the interview. And I can't see Rogue sitting through it either. I could see both of them calling the guy out and walking off stage. What might help the believablity is a little internal dialogue to let us know what Rogue and Logan are thinking while in this situation that keeps them in their chairs and talking, instead of walking off and demanding another interview.
But ps... You made me shout angry words at the talk show host... damn j----
oooo... interesting mood shift in this chapter. So I take it we're going to get to see Logan and Marie getting closer to stepping over the lines during their short exile. I liked the cold shower at the end... very cute.
I also thought you did a good job in the last chapter of having the Professor explain Logan's actions in the interview. It was a smart idea of how to tie up loose ends.
Hope you update again soon!
I thought the chapter was really cute. It doesn't always need to be explicit to be good. I hope you keep up with this series ;)
Woah... I think this just won my award, "Best Fic of Rogue Gaining Control". I'm speechless, I don't even know where to begin to compliment. This is fantastic.
Author's Response: Heee! Thanks! :oD I think you just made my evening *g*
Amazing beginning. It's got that epic feeling to it. I'm really looking forward to your updates!
Author's Response: *g* Thanks! :oD You don\'t have to wait long for the next update - it\'s already up :o)
Lol! Your story makes me giggle all over the place. I love the idea of Rogue and Mystique kicking ass together. They're my two fav fems. And the call from Logan at the end is just priceless and hysterical. Can't wait till next week!
Author's Response: Rogue & Mystique are so much fun to write together! Glad you\'re enjoying them. And Logan :oD There\'ll definitely be more of Logan *g*\r\n
I don't know if I can handle these weekly updates... I hope next week gets here fast.
Author's Response: Sorry! There might be a couple of weeks where I can post more than once - but usually it\'s just a case of life getting in the way of fic. Most annoying! Glad you\'re enjoying it though :o)
Oh no! What a way to end a chapter. How the hell did he find her anyway! And the solo sex scene... laugh out loud funny. Can't wait for the update, the long awaited Logan/Rogue conversation. I hope she keeps it together.
Author's Response: \"How the hell did he find her anyway!\" ...Ahhh - these things, they will be revealed *g*\r\nGlad you\'re enjoying it.
Each chapter just gets better and better. You're really good at writing Rogue's internal thoughts. They make me laugh. Especially the drunken ones. I hope Logan is in the next chapter again, and that he didn't just ditch Rogue cuz he's angry. Although I do like angry Logan.... Can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: Ahhhh if only Logan could ditch Rogue... the Logan!muse in my head is convinced that if that was the case, his life would be so much simpler *g*. And yet....\r\n
Oh.My.God.
How crushing was that chapter. I love this Rogue. And Logan's a jackass... which is exactly what you expect from him, lol. Great little sexual tension thing at the end there. I can't even say what my favourite part was, the whole thing was great.
Author's Response: Lol yeah - Logan can be a stubborn idiot at times. It\'s all the adamantium they poured into his brain... *g* Glad you\'re enjoying it!
Well dammit.. it's not fair to hold the next chapter hostage like that.
Author's Response: I\'ll set it free next weekend. Promise!
Oh shit.. poor Rogue. I knew something was going to go wrong this time. Can't wait for the next update! Is Mystique gonna ditch our girl?? Is Logan gonna save the day... who knows...
Author's Response: I should have added a \'dun dun daaaaa\' at the end *g*. I\'ll update soon. Promise!