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Wow... holy crap.. This was amazing. Amazing. Not a pretty story, but not all are, but it ends happly enough and though things arn't perfect they seem truthful. I don't know how to explain it. I absolutly LOVED your writing style, the lush details that you put into every scene captivating the eye. Gods above.
I have to say the 2nd person point of veiw I don't like. I pretty much never read stories with it, but you made it classy and it fit so well that I can't say that I would put it any other way. You can be sure that I'll be re-reading this in the future! O___O; I'm still reeling a bit from finishing it...
Anyway, what a wonderful job! -clap clap-
Oh. My. God. XDDD This was great! I love the ending especially, "I've got legs up to my neck!" Oh gods... It's wonderful. This is exactly how Jean should always act. XDD Total win
Dude, O___O I love the way you spaced the words, the pattern is amazing! Haha, You amaze me!
Awww, I really liked it :3 It's really sweet~
How did this one escape me?! I was so disapointed that Home was all that was out of this series and then suddenly I found a new part! SCORE! GOLD MINE >3
"I suppose you are F.I.N.E. If anyone here is Freaked out, Insecure, Neurotic and Emotional" - I give you 10 bonus points for Ocean 11 reference XD Total win~
I love how strong Marie is in this fic >3 she's no whinny angsty teenager but a grown capable woman. Haha, and Logan's comment on himself and 'boundaries' XDDD just too much.. You can not just simply contain the Wolverine! XD
I just have to take a step back and give you a standing ovasion. Symmetry brought me to tears, laugh out loud, shout with anger, not forgetting throwing up with the sickly sweetness that just poors out of Logan's and Rouge's relationship and then want to cry for the same reason knowing it will never last( for if it did where would the story go? ). It is an AMAZING story and I could probably write a paper on all of my favorate parts, but I'm lazy and it's kinda late here, so... >>; I'd just like to say kudos dude kudos.
XDDD I love the guy's reaction to Scott's motercycle~! That was histarical! And a very nice touch incoperating all the cannon names and ideas into the parallel universe! I love Scott's and Logan's friendship in this. It's so endeering to see them, vunrable yet strong, and.. God. I just could keep going on.
O___o; This is the second fanfic that I have seen that uses Crash and Burn in it... Never listened to it before now, but I'm seeing it used alot in R/L fanfiction Oo; huh... But y'know the more I listen to it the more aproprate it becomes..
And speaking of songs, a can absolutly see why you chose If That's What It Takes. It feels like you molded your fanfiction around the song, or the song was molded around the fanfiction. O___O; I feel awed. It's just such a perfect fit, and seems like it refers back to when Logan and Rouge were getting into bed together, both so unsure but so needing.
Haha, kinda writing this as I go, cuz otherwise I'd forget everything I wanted to say. Notice there is a THIRD song. Man, what are you trying to do make me cry?!
T___T Gods above. Poor freggin Logan. T____T everything is going so well, he's found the woman of his dreams, scratch that SUPASSING his dreams and then of course everything can't just go hunky dory and they ride off into the sunset to live happy ever after. No. He has to go get stabbed in the crotch. Damn. T___T haha, though I must say, Logan in anyworld is not one to put up with any nonsense (You're not commin to me so i'm commin to you)
O___O; Okay, I must admit, I wasn't expecting that ending though I guess I should have. Haha Logan's just too macho. He needs to get over it and get it together with Marie already! XD Well, I guess I'll see what happens in PART 2 >3
Just when I was dispairing what to read next, this comes along. Perfect length, perfect angst, perfect humor. I love it~! 8D
Haha, well for denying so venomously any relation of the parallel universe in the last part to his own world, this little Wolive is acting an AWFUL lot like the Wolive in the other unierse.
Haha, Logan just rushes into things without giving anything five seconds of thought. Y'know I think he would get alot less hurt alot less often if he tried to use that brain of his. He's not stupid, he just seems not to want to thing about anything. XD He's just not going to be able to escape Marie's grasp >333 Go Marie GO GO! I BELIVE IN YOU~! XDD
Heheh, YEY~ New chapter~ I want to see what Wolvie is going to do really bad T^T not to mention Rouge getting control of Sabortooth in her mind... if that happens..DUN DUN DUuUUUUuuuuN...haha..
Anyway~ Great chapter~
Author's Response: Thanks. I don\'t know anymore than you, otherwise I\'d share. :)
INTENSE! Haha, Loved it~ as usual :3
I absolutly love the speed your updating at and can't wait till the next chapter~
Author's Response: Bout four or five more chapters left I figure so I\'m just as eager to finish it as you. :)
OM NOM NOM! Great Chapter~ Can't wait till you finish! Feel sorry for poor Rouge soon to have to deal with Sabortooth in her head X___X that'll suck... Wonder how Wolvie will react?
If he'll ever tell her his name or what.
Haha, Poor Theo just can't get any respect can he? Everyone keeps ignoring him.. of course it would probably help if he said something other than "Get away from the bars! D3
Well anyway, can't wait till you update~
Author's Response: Thanks. I can\'t wait till I update either. I promise I haven\'t forgotten about this fic, its just hard to sit down and get in the mind set of writing for it during school insanity. lol, I love Theo. I have to -remind- myself to make him say that. ;)
Oh gods. That was INTENSE O___O
Amazingly well written! I loved the entire thing~ You really made Logan and Rouge pop out of the page and become very realistic and the settings that they were in seemed... God. Wow. That was so wonderful O___O
"Red." The eyes snapped open, startled. "Clothes?" -haha, wouldn't be suprised if I saw her snapping her fingers infrount of Jean's face. XD I liek.
"There is a war comming" -- OH ho! Xavier! Oh HO! We hear this line comming from so many people throughout the movie's but never form Xavier's mouth, even in the comic's he's more the one 'Let's stop everyone from making a war. Go team Go!' Huh, I like how you included it, really caught my eye that did.
"Scott was--well, being Scott-like. " - An award for perfect description anyone? XD
Y'know the only problem I have with this story so far is that I'm having a hard time sorting out the order that it goes in x_x It feels like "Always Remembered" is the first one and this would be one of the later ones but... x_x Aw crap. I donno, I'm just going to wing it.
{Shit, Jamie, give me some credit here.} - Haha, oh Jamie. You sound like the perfect Wolvie fangirl, and a R/L shipper too from the looks of thing >3 haha.
Alright. Well, I finished everything.. Do you think it would help to beg for you to continue this? Cuz if it will, I will! Haha, It's such a good series too~ I'd love to see more.. though if you can't I understand... I guess.. T___T
haha, Well anyway, Loved it while it lasted~ :3
" "You threatened them." Marie stared at the ceiling. "This is what happens when I go on vacation." " - Oh my god. Haha, wonder what the world would be like if this kinda thing was natural for people who went of vacations XD. I think one Logan is enough for the world... though it's certainly not enough for us fans -wink wink-
:::Jean, I would suggest you have a long discussion with Scott before he meets with Logan tomorrow.:: -Oh man, even when he's not going after Jean, Scott and Logan... what a pair huh? XDD I can just feel the tones the proff is giving Jean XD I love it~
""You need to practice keeping your temper." " -Uhhh, yeah. Get back to you on that XD Logan and Pataince have been having this little feude lately, it's too bad to see that they are still hell bent on keeping away from eachother.
Yey~ 3 down 1 to go~
:D I like it alot! Such a great friendship fic, though from the way it looks it'll turn into a romance one pretty soon >3
Hnnn, I wonder if they'll ever get to Xavier's or if Logan will continue to be over proticetive and keep her safe >3. It would be interesting to see a variation on the X1 movie beginning for Marie and Wolvie (I know, I know, alot of people do these, but their just so fun~)
""Logan, look around. It's--"
"Snow." " - okay I have to admit, this sceen made me lawl. Hardcore style. I live in Texas so I really shouldn't be talking since I would probably have Rouge's reaction x10 since we get out of school if we get ONE INCH of snow/ice, but still XDD
" "She's a kid."
A significant look down at Marie before looking at him. He looked down too, at the leather-covered hand, fingers barely touching his jeans.
"You just keep telling yourself that, darlin'." " -Second favorate scene XDD I love it~ It's so perfect! I really think that is how Marie and Logan's relationship is, and I can't wait to see how Marie is going to change that. You can FEEL the plots running through her head throughout the story >3 Go Marie, GO!
Ummmm, that's about it I think... Oh, yeah! Update? Soon? Please? T___T
XD What a great story! And I absolutly love the ending (Totally feel for Jubes here, I am exactly like that (no chick flicks or those upsetting shows on TV. Nosir!)Heheh, I vote for Wolvie >3 You go dude!
Haha, I liked the nice incertion of the OC too. I don't mind OC's at all as long as the story doesn't revolve around them and their not Mary Sueish.. And you did a really good job of making them a key character without taking away from all the origionals! Haha, and Rouge's nice kid explination of Reproduction.. Bet Logan would like to give her a few lessons on that >3.
Anyway, Totally loved the story~ Nicely done~
Wow.. what an interesting take on the X-men tv show. Nice job in incoperating the orgional plot too >3. Haha, and I love Logan's name for Ginny XD too perfect.
It's kinda bittersweet finish, because of the sad ending, well happy but sad. But that's how the episode went sooo... T__T It's beautiful.
Awwww... Tenticles weren't what I was expecting XD. Anyway, I like it, it seems appropriate for the two of them >3 Though I'm a bit sad at the ending... ending. I would like more but T^T bunnies strike the unsespecting very visiously...
Haha anyway....tenticles...
Awwww, This is absolutly adorable~ I love the alternating voices, especailly at the beginning when they were thinking the same thing... absolutly heartrending! Haha, I hope you update soon because it's such a sweet story..
Author's Response: Thanks! I\'ll try to get the story out as soon as I can. :D
MAN! Warm and fuzzy feelings are overwelming me... *g* -squee-
Haha, victory! When you put 'completed' on this one I was so disappointed, but >3 Look's like Logan liked this story~ I love Logan's little snips to Storm at the end of both chapters.. Was reading it on a school computer in the library and I literally bursed out laughing and earned some quite strange looks XD. Can't wait for Logan to get a little fun too~
Author's Response: I better warn you in advance. Regardless of the fact that these two chapters have been itsy bitsy sexual in nature, this one won\'t be getting a happy smut ending.
Awww, I like it... It's so sweet...
Author's Response: *G* Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it!
Damn, this is so sad... T^T Hope you update soon... it's such a good story! I just have know what's going to happen next T^T
Author's Response: And now you know! Thanks so much for reading and commenting.\r\n
-pout- I dun like your inner voice... because this chapter is very welcome and very good, teehee >3
Author's Response: Oh, but the little voices are so persuasive sometimes....*eg*\r\n\r\nThank you!