oooooo..... You need to update. Like today. Right now. Hell, five minutes ago.... Please!?!?!?!?!?

Ok... that's out of my system. You know, I've always pereferred the stronger, loner angsty Rogue. The one who sees what she wants, knows how to get it, but things are just too complicated for her to be able to do anything about it. She has to go about things the long way and make due with what she has. The Rogue that resents being looked at a treated like a child. The Rogue like that is admirable. Even when working for the wrong team.

As for Logan, I like the tenderness you are using for him, the need to make himself into something more(Not better because there was nothing wrong with him in the first place as long as you over look the entire Jean fiasco). I love how he's more in tune with himself and still has the same gruffness.

Pretty much, all I am trying to say is I love the story so far and you are doing a great job. Update soon, please.

Author's Response: Thanks for the detailed review, I\'m happy you\'re enjoying the story. I definitely wanted to explore the characters in this, I figured on a bitter Rogue after X3 who was smart enough to turn that pain into something productive and less self-pitying and a Logan who was struggling with defining himself, because X3 was just brutal and you\'re absolutely right, that I\'m trying to show, despite their problems Rogue never thought there was anything wrong with him, even if we all think the whole Jean thing was ugh! lol

I have a painful feeling that this is going to end soon...

They way Mysitque used her was horrendous. Her own child. But, at the same time, you can't help but wonder what was really in that diary. What secrets Rogue could have learned. Maybe even some hope that she might find. Then again, I see your point. It's not always a good thing to know what's going to happen. I can see how it would be debilitating. Think of the fear that comes along with knowing exactly what's going to happen next.

Keep it up!

Author's Response: Painful feeling? You should get that looked at. It will be up to you as the reader in the end whether or not you think Rogue makes the best choices for herself. I think the diaries play a different role in whoevers hands they are in.

I can't wait to see who you are going to get to next. I've missed this story a lot and I love the way you're characters grow in each chapter! And I really liked how you had John talking to 'Marie' and Bobby not even realize who it was.

Author's Response: Thanks, glad you liked it. I promise I won\'t take this long between updates again ;)

Ok, first, I think we have all had that kind of morning where nothing went right. I know I have.

And I love the way he kept egging her on with his eyes. But the way she pointed him out to everyone was classic. Can't wait to find out what happened between L and his grandparents, though.

On to the next chapter!!!!

Author's Response: heh, thanks for the review! you\'re right. we al have those mornings. i figured she would be no exception.

Ok, first, great short. Very angsty. makes you really feel for Logan.

Next: Love the sneak peek. Can't wait to see what you do for it. Not sure how the title is going to work, though, but it looks like it's going to be a good one when you get it all up. And I hope you don't make to many changes to what you just gave us. :)

Author's Response: Hmm, the title? what about it? I\'m having reservations about it too, it feels too revealing but what did you find wrong about it? and thanks for the lovely review

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!! :D Good read for long nights at work doing nothing! If I have to stare at this stupid monitor all night, I want to at least be looking at something good!

Author's Response: lol i\'m glad i\'m distracting you from work :)

This was one of the songs played at the wake after my father passed away. It's always been one of my favorites and it's the one I chose for him. It's very special to me and I am very proud of the way you used it. You've done it justice.

Huh!!!! When are you going to up date!!!! Soon, please!!! This is soooo good, i'm constantly putting off writing my story to check for your update!!!!!!

Author's Response: Please don\'t delay your story on my account! I really am working on it, honest! Please bear with me and I\'ll get you something soon. I\'m so glad you like it that much!!

Ok... just one little question... WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE?!?!?!?! I feel like i've been waiting forever for this! Soon, please!

This was so good, i just wish they were longer.

Author's Response: They are getting longer who knows I just let them go where they want

Nice fight with Deadpool, loved how it was Kitty who beat up Jean, but, as much as I get a kick out of Scooter hiding behind Jean and then running with his tail between his legs, I was really hoping for his pound of flesh. I guess I will have to keep reading. Keep up the great work!!!!

Author's Response: meh, i have someone MUCH more interesting for the next fight. i hate Scott, always have, he\'s not worth the effort. i like making him a wussy jerk LOL!

Can't wait for the nxt chapter!!! Hope for more Rogue!!!

'folded like a cheap hooker when punched in the gut by a fat guy with sores on his face' great line!!!! Can't wait until the next chapter comes up! And soooooooooooo happy that I didn't have to wait until tomorrow for this little part.

Author's Response: that line is actually one Joey from Friends said in an episode once. isn\'t is bizarre?