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If Marie were human, would her life be better? Possibly, but not in this story, baby!

Rated: R
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Drama
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 19038 - Hits: 3584
Complete?: Yes - Published: 05/04/2008 - Last Updated: 05/04/2008
Reviewer: askita Signed star star star star star
Date: 09/21/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Lost Souls

great!

Once upon a time there was a princess named Rogue ...

Rated: PG-13
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 37774 - Hits: 2993
Complete?: Yes - Published: 05/04/2008 - Last Updated: 05/04/2008
Reviewer: askita Signed star star star star star
Date: 09/14/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Past Forward

I loved this, it was so great!

Logan notices some odd happenings at the mansion.

Rated: PG-13
Categories: X1
Characters: None
Genres: Foof
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 3491 - Hits: 2873
Complete?: Yes - Published: 05/04/2008 - Last Updated: 05/04/2008
Reviewer: askita Signed
Date: 09/02/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Trouble Comes in Threes

I laughed soo hard. After Logan staterd listening at the door, I had to stop and potty break to make sure I didn't piss my pants. Hilarious!

He couldn't do anything about it..or so he thought.

Rated: G
Categories: X1, AU
Characters: None
Genres: Drabble
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 105 - Hits: 1950
Complete?: Yes - Published: 05/21/2008 - Last Updated: 05/21/2008
Reviewer: askita Signed star star star star star
Date: 11/01/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really liked this, great job!

“Marie. I’m Marie.”

Rated: R
Categories: X1
Characters: None
Genres: Angst
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 7
Wordcount: 5357 - Hits: 38603
Complete?: No - Published: 05/25/2008 - Last Updated: 10/24/2008
Reviewer: askita Signed star star star star star
Date: 10/29/2008 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

This is wonderful! Just great! I can't wait for the rest, and you aren't leaving the cahpters with horrible Cliffhangers that keep me up at night! Please, update soon!

Logan and Rogue have been captured.

Rated: PG-13
Categories: X3
Characters: None
Genres: Dark
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 7
Wordcount: 5324 - Hits: 25786
Complete?: Yes - Published: 06/01/2008 - Last Updated: 06/02/2008
Reviewer: askita Signed star star star star star
Date: 09/22/2008 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

maybe I'm a bit sadistic, but I love the logan and marie get captured and tortured and find love and darkness and crap stories. I liked this one too. *grin* wish we had more though! great job!

Author's Response: I love reading the dark and the really really dark ones too so if you are sadistic your not on your own!! This was my first attempt at writing this type of fic though so I\'m glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for taking the time to review x

Rogue and Logan and some birthday nice-ness. Written for The Big 3-0! Challenge.

Rated: G
Categories: X2
Characters: None
Genres: Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 1104 - Hits: 1670
Complete?: Yes - Published: 06/11/2008 - Last Updated: 06/11/2008
Reviewer: askita Signed
Date: 08/25/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

very cute

Sequel to One of those mornings. Marie comes face to face with Bobby and must deal with the aftermath of her and Logans actions.

Rated: PG-13
Categories: X3
Characters: None
Genres: Drama
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 1248 - Hits: 2333
Complete?: Yes - Published: 07/12/2008 - Last Updated: 07/12/2008
Reviewer: askita Signed
Date: 09/03/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

is great, and humor without really trying. like "Now he's mute" that had me gaffawing out loud. LOL, great stuff, you're getting Mare down pretty good. *grins*

Logan faces his worst fear.

Rated: PG
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Humor
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 888 - Hits: 2538
Complete?: Yes - Published: 08/27/2008 - Last Updated: 08/27/2008
Reviewer: askita Signed
Date: 08/30/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

great job!

Author's Response: Thanks.

Rogue returns to her past.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Adult, Angst, Dark, Drama
Tags: None
Warnings: Rape/Non-Con

Series: None
Chapters: 3
Wordcount: 10307 - Hits: 14290
Complete?: No - Published: 09/16/2008 - Last Updated: 05/17/2009
Reviewer: askita Signed
Date: 03/29/2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

OH My GOD! this is awesome. I don't know why you ever stopped writing it. Please, if you have any humanity left in you, write more!

Author's Response: Thanks for the lovely review! :)

Reviewer: askita Signed
Date: 05/20/2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

This is great! Absoutely wonderful! I want so so so so muh more. *grins* Keep it up, I'm glad you decided to write more of it.

Logan and Rogue go to see rodeo. Things happen.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 11
Wordcount: 9554 - Hits: 75332
Complete?: Yes - Published: 09/19/2008 - Last Updated: 09/19/2008
Reviewer: askita Signed
Date: 10/06/2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I loved loved loved this story! It's so awesome!!

Femslash. Age issues. Threesome, then shippery goodness. "The Logan-in-Rogue’s-head hybrid is turning me on more than Logan ever did."

Rated: NC-17
Categories: X1
Characters: None
Genres: PWP
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 10058 - Hits: 4046
Complete?: Yes - Published: 09/21/2008 - Last Updated: 09/21/2008
Reviewer: askita Signed
Date: 09/22/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Dreaming the Same Dream

wow, just wow... so hot then sweet... great fic!

Reviewer: askita Signed
Date: 09/22/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Dreaming the Same Dream

wow, just wow... so hot then sweet... great fic!

Sometimes it takes somebody else to point out the obvious

Rated: PG
Categories: X3, AU
Characters: None
Genres: Humor
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: What To Expect
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 770 - Hits: 2935
Complete?: Yes - Published: 11/11/2008 - Last Updated: 11/11/2008
Reviewer: askita Signed
Date: 01/08/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Adorable. *giggles*

retired featured story An Alterverse version of our favorite couple. Inspired, sorta, by Terri Berri's "Naked Animal Guy."

Rated: NC-17
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 12508 - Hits: 7579
Complete?: Yes - Published: 11/24/2008 - Last Updated: 11/24/2008
Reviewer: askita Signed
Date: 11/28/2008 Title: Chapter 1: The Lab

I loved it! But I def want a more shippery ending. Which calls for follow up. In detail. Great job!

It’s been a few years since X2 and things happened and not everyone’s where they expected to be. Logan’s world is opened up when he’s asked to help assist in the transportation of a special package.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: X2, X-Men Evolution
Characters: None
Genres: Drama
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 37
Wordcount: 57811 - Hits: 285996
Complete?: Yes - Published: 12/27/2008 - Last Updated: 01/28/2009
Reviewer: askita Signed star star star star star
Date: 01/22/2009 Title: Chapter 30: ‘An apple a day keeps the doctor away but a trained assassin, the doctor’s on the clock’

WOW. I feel the need to point out that I read the first 5 chapters drunk, and failed to realize this was an angst fic. Second, I should also point out, that I had to read until the end of Chapter 25, before I could justify myself going to sleep. Third, OMG! This is great! I absoutely love it! Keep it coming, please oh please oh please. *grins* Usually I stay away from WIP's cause they're tortureous, and sometimes they never get finished and I end up heartbroken. But I hope you won't prove me right. *grins* Great Job! More please!

Author's Response: Well I think its only fair you started reading the fic that way, I mean Logan was pretty intoxicated the first two ;) Thanks for your enthusiasm though about the story its very much appreciated.

Reviewer: askita Signed star star star star star
Date: 01/22/2009 Title: Chapter 31: ‘Rev my engine, ignore the false start’

Wow, great job. I want to say a lot of things, but they would all come out wrong, and that tends to happen to me. Hoping this has a really really good ending, and they can works shit out eventually. Are you trying to make me cry? Greaat Job!

Reviewer: askita Signed star star star star star
Date: 01/23/2009 Title: Chapter 32: ‘Reality has a habit of seeping in’

Ohhh, I want more Logan/Marie interaction, but I'm sure that everyone else feels that way. Great insight into Rogue's powers. An I'm thinking that I'll like Stacy if she shows up anymore. She sounds like can be very useful!

Reviewer: askita Signed star star star star star
Date: 01/24/2009 Title: Chapter 33: ‘The drinks are a plenty but the smiles are still a few’

You mean we're finally gonna get some story out of her, I thought she was gonna hold out until the very end. *grins* Great job, keep it coming!

Reviewer: askita Signed
Date: 01/27/2009 Title: Chapter 35: ‘If one door closes another shall open’

I"m so glad I was right about my X-23 thoughts. *grins* And I wish we could see Pyro and Logan meet up somewhere. Great stuff so far, keep it coming!

Reviewer: askita Signed
Date: 01/28/2009 Title: Chapter 36: ‘Front porch confessions’

Loved it! Can't wait to see how her powers turn out, and I don't think the X-men are gonna stay out of this for long. *grins* great Job!

Reviewer: askita Signed star star star star star
Date: 01/28/2009 Title: Chapter 37: ‘Time heals these wounds but the scars won’t be forgotten’

Awww... I still want to see Pyro get what's coming to him. Great Work!

Forced to confront his past, a past he no longer wants, Scott's back in New York. However, trouble has followed and the X-men are about to find out that his loyalties lay with the woman he loves - and the life he built.

Rated: R
Categories: X2, AU
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Adult, Angst
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 3
Wordcount: 4499 - Hits: 12392
Complete?: No - Published: 01/01/2009 - Last Updated: 03/23/2012
Reviewer: askita Signed
Date: 12/04/2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Seriously. This is amazing. My so totally perfect kind of fic. Although I wish they'd let Logan in on the game and he'd grow a little bit more like his feral awesome self. I'm not comfy with Scott and Vic being more Alpha than Logan. And I know that Rogue has a backbone. *Grins* Basically, keep going so that you can get to my favorite parts!

Author's Response: lol - yes both Rogue and Logan are kick-ass...and they will be true to character soon. I just wanted to give Scott a bit of a backbone before I start torturing him :) Thanks for the feedback! Its greatly appreciated and well taken care of!

Classic girl meets boy. Mostly movieverse, but some things have switched around a little.
R to NC-17 (eventually!)
Mostly Marie POV, but with some snippets of Logan along the way.

Rated: R
Categories: X2, AU
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Adult, Angst, Drama
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 19
Wordcount: 41045 - Hits: 157619
Complete?: No - Published: 02/03/2009 - Last Updated: 11/24/2013
Reviewer: askita Signed
Date: 02/03/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Lost and Lonely Girl

I really like this, it's great and I can't wait for more. You've got me wondering about what she'll be doing, and if you going to make her legal when they meet. *hmmmmm* Great job! Can't wait for more!