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Once upon a time, there was this really overlong and convoluted AU how-they-met fic. It wasn't finished. Now it is.

So here it is from the beginning.

Rated: Mature
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Drama
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 32
Wordcount: 81127 - Hits: 303043
Complete?: Yes - Published: 01/17/2010 - Last Updated: 07/02/2010
Reviewer: MoonlightStorm Signed
Date: 01/21/2010 Title: Chapter 7: Gird Me With Strength

Oh man, I love your Marie so much. This chapter was great.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I\'m glad you\'re enjoying the little monster. It goes on...

Reviewer: MoonlightStorm Signed
Date: 01/21/2010 Title: Chapter 8: Cruel As The Grave

This story's just getting better and better. Can't wait for more! :D

Reviewer: MoonlightStorm Signed
Date: 01/22/2010 Title: Chapter 9: A Good And Broad Land

I get so excited when I see an update for this fic in my email! Great job, loved this chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you! More coming soon, very soon.

Reviewer: MoonlightStorm Signed
Date: 01/23/2010 Title: Chapter 10: The Night Is Long

Ooooh, fantastic! Jean did a a great job here. Can't wait for the next part. :D

Reviewer: MoonlightStorm Signed
Date: 01/24/2010 Title: Chapter 11: Yet He Bore The Sins Of Many

Awwww. :( More please!

Reviewer: MoonlightStorm Signed
Date: 01/25/2010 Title: Chapter 12: Claiming To Be Wise

Aww, poor Marie! I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: MoonlightStorm Signed
Date: 01/26/2010 Title: Chapter 13: Call Me Mara

Love it! Looking forward to the next update.

Reviewer: MoonlightStorm Signed
Date: 01/26/2010 Title: Chapter 14: Worthless Physicians Are You All

I love this fic so, so much. :D I can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: MoonlightStorm Signed
Date: 01/28/2010 Title: Chapter 16: My Father's Mansion

Aaaaaaaaah. DDDD: This chapter was so good! And now I need the next one, please. :)

Reviewer: MoonlightStorm Signed
Date: 01/29/2010 Title: Chapter 18: When The Bow Is In The Clouds

Loved it!

Author's Response: Thank you!!

Reviewer: MoonlightStorm Signed
Date: 01/31/2010 Title: Chapter 19: Tarry Till I Come

Eeee, this is exciting! Logan's back. :DDD I'm dying for the next chapter now.

Author's Response: Funny you should phrase it that way. All right, more coming up.

Reviewer: MoonlightStorm Signed
Date: 01/31/2010 Title: Chapter 20: Strive To Enter

DDDDDDDDDD: I WAS AFRAID OF THIS. After that chapter in Marie's head. DDDD: I... I hope you fix it somehow? Either way, SO AMAZING. Reaaally looking forward to the next update!

Author's Response: Next update is here; though it may not have all the answers you await, it does have some.

Reviewer: MoonlightStorm Signed
Date: 02/01/2010 Title: Chapter 21: A Vision In The Temple

Soooo good! I really liked Julia in this, and of course Logan was fantastic. :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I\'m usually not that into original characters, but Julia was rather fun to imagine.

Reviewer: MoonlightStorm Signed
Date: 02/02/2010 Title: Chapter 22: Behold, A Pale Horse

You fixed it! :DDD This was maybe my favorite chapter so far, I don't even know. I can't wait for the next part!

Author's Response: Well, I\'m working on fixing it. There\'s still a ways to go. ;) But more will be coming soon!

Reviewer: MoonlightStorm Signed
Date: 02/03/2010 Title: Chapter 23: By His Wounds

Sooo good! I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you!!! Await no longer.

Reviewer: MoonlightStorm Signed
Date: 02/04/2010 Title: Chapter 24: Strength Out Of Weakness

You made me like Scott! I'm looking forward to the next bit. :)

Author's Response: Go me! ;) Next bit coming up.

Reviewer: MoonlightStorm Signed
Date: 02/04/2010 Title: Chapter 25: This Present Time

How do you make this fic so AWESOME? I think I have a new favorite chapter. :D

Reviewer: MoonlightStorm Signed
Date: 02/05/2010 Title: Chapter 26: The Conviction Of Things Not Seen

Ooooh, this was great. I loved seeing his POV.

Author's Response: Thank you! I\'m glad you liked it.

Reviewer: MoonlightStorm Signed
Date: 02/07/2010 Title: Chapter 27: Many Waters

Ooooh, a knock. :DDD This chapter was really great, loved it!

Author's Response: Thank you! Now there\'s more...

Reviewer: MoonlightStorm Signed
Date: 02/07/2010 Title: Chapter 28: If I Make My Bed In Sheol

Awwwwww. Just awwww. :DDD Each chapter keeps topping my previous favorite chapter.

Author's Response: Awwww, back atcha. Thank you!

Reviewer: MoonlightStorm Signed
Date: 02/08/2010 Title: Chapter 29: Bear Witness To The Light

Awwwwwwww. :( I didn't see this coming at all! I figured it was just how hurt she was, too. I loved it, can't wait for more!

Author's Response: I aim to keep you guessing, at least a little bit. ;) More up now!

Reviewer: MoonlightStorm Signed
Date: 02/09/2010 Title: Chapter 30: A Voice Is Heard In Ramah

Sooo good! I liked seeing her POV here, it was fun. And the scene between Logan and Scott was great. :D

Author's Response: Thank you! So glad you liked it.

Reviewer: MoonlightStorm Signed
Date: 02/14/2010 Title: Chapter 31: When I Awake

Omg, that last sentence made me grin. This chapter was so good! I loved it, absolutely can't wait for more!

Reviewer: MoonlightStorm Signed
Date: 07/03/2010 Title: Chapter 32: A New Thing On Earth

Okay, so seeing that the last chapter was up may have prompted me to go back and reread the whole thing. I still love it. :) And the last two lines are absolutely perfect for an ending.

Author's Response: I had to reread it about thirty times myself just to make sure I wasn\'t making drastic continuity errors, but I apologize for making others do so. Thank you. Thank you from the bottom of my heart for lasting through the whole epic.

"She's got this whole untouchable thing going on. You'd think it would turn men off, but it doesn't. It works like bees to pollen, and she knows it."

A bet between would-be lovers spirals into a dangerous game of lust, betrayal, and deception. Yes, this is Cruel Intentions...Rogan style.


Rated: NC-17
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Adult
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 9
Wordcount: 24692 - Hits: 62959
Complete?: Yes - Published: 01/26/2010 - Last Updated: 02/09/2013
Reviewer: MoonlightStorm Signed
Date: 03/24/2010 Title: Chapter 3: Tuesday

Great! Can't wait for the next part.