Bahaha. As always, I loved it. Lust-crazy Logan is just so good.

"His body suggests, 'Tree stump?'"
So. Good. hahaha.

Author's Response: Thank you. I\'m fairly fond of that myself. ;~D

I just stumbled upon this tonight, and read it all in one go. I can't wait for more!
Great story, I really really want to know what happens next

Author's Response: Thank you, I\'m so glad you feel that way. >hugs tightly<

Wow! I couldn't imagine doing all that work to get to a computer to write like you did - that's dedication. Thank you!
I don't want this to come to an end, please don't let it end! pleasepleaseplease.
Also, I'm a little slow, but I can't quite catch what the book part with Erik was about. =(
Though, as others have also mentioned, "It was hard to tell which of the two girls better handled their loneliness." That line? Killer. It really made Jubilee sound less like a jerk, and more like someone that needs a hug too.

Awesome writing, as always. *heart*
(you may have received two notifications for this, I deleted & re-posted to fix a typo)

Author's Response: I\'d worried that some people would be confused. Sorry! It\'s my fault making it clear enough. He dropped the book to startle Marie, try to activate her mutation. Thank you!!!! >hugs<

I'm curious about this skin scrub. Is there much to putting it together, or just a matter of mixing until the consistency is right? :)

Also, you don't have to ask, I'll always review. :D I've been checking back every day (sometimes a few times a day) even though I'm so busy studying! Thank you for making my last study night happier. *glomp* :D
Merry Christmas (or, Happy Holidays if you prefer) and thank you for the chapter! I'm super curious how it will end.

Author's Response: Oh, no. It\'s the simplest thing in the world. Just get a cup of sugar, add half as much vegetable oil as your sugar and stir until it has a nice consistency,and add whatever other ingredients are available. You\'re skin has never felt so smooth--its terrific. :~D And so is this review; its what I\'ll be reading any time the writer\'s block hits. Thank you!!!!!!

I know, I know! I'm so far behind in reading this. But I promise, it wasn't because I forgot. I had no computer! But alas! Now I'm yelling! Ah!
I really, really love how you ended it. Half (ok, probably more than half) of me really reeaalllyyy wanted them to end up "together" at the end. But the rest knew that would be rushing it. You managed to come up with an excellent mid-way point.

Of course, as always, I must praise your word use. It's like poetry, it's just so beautiful. I can't even list off all the lines that just ... radiated awesomeness. I can't even describe it.

Anyway, I'm rambling. Reading your stories is a great pleasure, and I'm always looking forward to something new from you -- and will definitely return to your finished works again and again.

*heart*

I quite liked this story, it was cute. :) There were a few things, I think, that could have made it even better though (however, I know I probably would have done them the way you did if I was writing).
I think for Logan's POV it would have been nicer to maybe have different memories, you know? And you did do that a little, but I think it would have been even better with a little new scene thrown in here or there to top it off.
The last chapter was good, especially for a first try, and I know I'd never be able to pull it off! But, I'm not sure, it still kinda felt like something was missing. Maybe the last line could be polished up to be similar in mood to the intro of the story. (Does that make sense?) Like, it was a first-person talking about how if their story was a book etc etc. Maybe referencing the life as a book idea in the end would make it feel like it fit. :)
However, all in all, I did like the story! I loved the 'I suck at summaries' thing. Good job!

Author's Response: Thank you for your comments, and I am glad you liked it. I have revised the \'Epilogue\' at the end of chapter 3 to a more first person view, and added another sentence onto the story. Let me know what you think, does that make it flow better?

So,Ijustreadthisstoryentirelyonmycellphone.At2am,inthemiddleofaheatwave.Why?Becausemythreaiyear-oldinsistsonsleepinginherewithme(andthefan)andI'mtooawaketosleep.
Ican'tevenbegintosayhowmuxhIenjoythisone!Somusterious,Ijustloveit:)here'shopingallthebesttoyou,lotsofinspirationandyummyLoganness!

Also,don'tmindanytyposorbadgrammar.TheboxloadedwonkyandIcan'tseewhatIamtyping!!
Anyway,yay!Awesomework,ofcourse!