whew! I never would have figured from the chapter summary and the title what kind fic this was, I thought the title hinted at some kind of messy break up scene.

Seriously though, this story is deep and sad, i had a little trouble avoiding a light misting sensation with my eyes. It was a really good idea walking us through Logan's life with Marie and I love that you showed us how she dies and you don't make him this bitter bastard at the end, but someone forever altered. Really good read- gold star!

Scott tried his best to sound bored and only mildly irritated, but he was getting close to pissing himself. Where the hell was Jean? Where the hell was anybody? He was about to get sliced and diced just because Logan was horny; he could use a little backup.


best line of my life- no joke

P.S How am I the first review in nine years? Little insane considering the story-which by the way blew me so far outta the water, was so perfect that I can't even imagine a second chapter and I understand you warning everyone not to ask for one

Author's Response: LOL! I think you might be the first review BECAUSE it was written so long ago. It\'s been a while since I was active in the W/R fandom and my stories have been around since before there was an WRFA, for the most part. :) But thank you so much for reviewing it!

A-M-A-Z-I-N-G

this is fantastic! See its 4am where I am right now and I'm basically brain dead at this point b.c I can't sleep and this fic actually revived some of my consciousness so I know it must be fantastic! Seriously sweet story

had me sitting here literally reading frantically because you kept shooting back and fourth between the birthing scene and the pregnancy and I got so engrossed that I actually said out loud, half way through, "I'm just so worried about the baby"

Story sucked me in that much-totally spell bounding in that oh so adorable way

This Rogue is the epitome of damaged and the idea that Logan's love is what brings her back is seriously amazing- Bra-fucking-vo

Real Quick Observation- I'm literally baffled this story has been up here since 2007 and never been reviewed, and this isn't the first time I've come across a good story that went wanting for a review.

Great story though, LOVED the whole thing from top to bottom and I loved that neither Wolverine or Rogue were OOC- you hit the name on the head beautifully. Now if you'll excuse me I have to go add you to my favorite authors and proceed to read all of your works.

It is nothing short of plain crazy that no one has reviewed this story yet.... I'm literally sitting her with a 0.0 face on.

First I want to comment on the story, which is fantastic! There was literally not one little bit of it that I did not enjoy. I loved the opening, where you got a glimpse of Rogue and the junior X-men and I loved reading about the bar scene! What a great part! It literally made me feel like I was sitting at the bar with my friends having a night out- I have no idea how Logan riding a mechanical bull hasn't earned you a fan fiction award!

I love the way you set the two characters up an I love thrilling romp in the woods, and I think every girl whose sexually active out there or who prowls on the dating scene has sat in bed at least once and thought the same thing Rogue was thinking, about doing something sexually public for the man she loved and having it be the stupidest think ever. I really loved that part, but that's just pervey old me lol!

You are a spectacular writing with an uncanny ability to tap into the characters personalities, I felt like I was right there in the bar with them and it was all and all a great read! I can't wait to read more of your stuff!

Listen, I just added your story to my favorites, so now YOU HAVE to update it.... two more days and it'll be a full month since ur last update! U must! please u must! I'll give you cookies!!!


-- kk thanks

Author's Response: Eep! *You heard the girl, Ara. How about some quality time with the keyboard?* Ah, darn. You woke up Logie. I guess it\'s time to see what he wants to tell me. No promises, but I\'ll see if my muse is willing to cooperate. :)

hi, see I have this string over here and on the end of it is my sanity dangling precariously, so if you could update before I completely cut the cord- if you know what I mean and loose my mind- cause seriously I'm going crazy waiting for an update....

ahhhhhhhh!!! I cannot believe! CANNOT BELIEVE that you were surprised about receiving feedback for this story I mean its actually jut excellent!

Okay, the nitty gritty. Your Rogue is very damaged, not a little but a lot I mean the girl breaks down sobbing like every five minutes, but I do suppose that is the nature of Rogue.

I love the duality between these two characters, I love their heart ache and the cat and mouse game and I seriously love the last line of this chapter- great great ending right there. NOw as per instructions you simply will have to continue this or I will need to find and eliminate you ....well actually that doesn't guarantee me a chapter 5 so I shall find you and....force you into writing~ mwahahaha!!!

Seriously great works cookies and bean dip all round

Author's Response: Awww... Thanks for you kind words. *blushes* I tend to be very insecure about my writing. \r\n\r\nMarie really has some issues. She\'s working through what she has now, and there\'s a lot more to come. \r\n\r\nI\'m trying to give everyone a view into each of their minds. I don\'t want to jump over into Logan\'s POV, although it\'s very tempting. Maybe after I finish this. Don\'t worry, I\'m continuing, as soon as I write a chapter of Futures Unknown and get it posted. Hey, maybe you should head over there and tell me how you like it!\r\n\r\nThanks again for the review, I accept the cookies and bean dip (what a combo) and you won\'t need to kill me or force me to write, unless you want to come and babysit and clean the house so I can write. LOL :D