Please finish this story, it's one of my favorites and it's driving me insane...insaner...more insane?

OHMYGODOHMYGODOHMYGODOHMYGODOHMYGOD!!!!!!!!!!!!! >Breathes, pants, vein twitches in eyes<

Translation from CrazyRoganFan: Good job. I really enjoyed your story. Keep up the good work.

Oh. My God.

I sat down last night, thinking I'd chill, read a little fanfiction, watch tv....I started this at eight. Didn't go to bed til midnight. I COULD NOT put it down. It was briliant. Good job. Excellent writing, well-drawn characters, scenes that make you want to cringe in sympathy.
And I second the motion to have this written again from Logan's POV. That's an awesomeness you can't refuse. :)

Holy crap! This was shere brilliance! I can't begin to tell you how much I love your writing. Your characters are dead-on. Please write more, pretty please with cherries and cheesecake.

I thought this was fantastic, and I'd really like to read more. This would be a great as the beginning of a series!

Your writing is wonderful, however, the punctuation is a bit...awkward. Just run it through microsoft word's grammar check. But again, the story itself is great. I love AUs.

This is crazy good. I was tearing up in some places, especially when he was lying on top of her saying, "Marie...Marie..."

The shower scene was brilliant, so powerful and fun at the same time.
Sometimes your action and description seems a little hurried, but it works out well enough. I can't wait for an update.

Oh dear lord! I liked this even more than your dialouge-fic! Good job! I was surprised to see Bobby with Jean-not many writers do that. And omfg, she's such a slut! There are support groups for that kind of skankiness. But it was well written, even if that Logan/Jean sex makes me gag. I can't wait to see where this is going.

Author's Response: Thank you, you marvelous writer, you! I so know what you mean about the Logan/Jean smut. As I said in another response, my only comfort is knowing that it\'s JUST sex for sex sake, if you know what I mean. However, as I write Chapter 2, I\'m finding out that Wolvie has a talent for compartmentalizing when it comes to his baser needs, so apparently, it doesn\'t trip his gag reflex like it does ours! But in terms of his heart, well, it turns out it\'s totally free of Jean\'s fingerprints and it always was. I know where the story is going and have a rough map of the road I intend to take to get there, but some of the scenery along the way is surprising even me, so I\'m just as anxious as you are to see how it all turns out! Thank you again for this review *big, big hugs*. To be able to entertain and excite someone whose writing I admire as much as yours is a true blessing. --Wendie

Blllleegggglllcchhhh...I found myself making this sound through almost every Jean-POV-paragraph. Not because of the writing, of course! She's just one supercalifragilistic hobag. I love the parts with Rogue. Its a very nice concept, what Jean did to her-can't wait to see her and Wolverine interract. Please don't rush it though, this is going great.

Author's Response: You definitely win the Best Review Sound Effects trophy as well as the All-Time Most Creative Insulting Name for Jean award. I wish I had the words to express what your encouragement \'please don\'t rush it through\' means to me. I have such a tendency to want to hurry up and get to the punch line, but I will definitely take your advice to heart. Thank you, thank you, thank you, with a naked Logan on top--covered in whipped cream--and unable to whisper anything other than \'Your wish is my command, darlin\'\'. --Wendie

Might be going crazy-would love to see an update of this!! >smiles apologetically

Author's Response: I know just what you mean. I\'m going crazy, too, trying to get this one right and I\'m not having much luck. I am bound and determined to get it posted before I leave for vacation on June 5, but I\'ve also come down with pneumonia and bronchitis in the meanwhile. I can\'t decide which makes me feel worse, the lung troubles or the writer\'s block, but they\'re both kickin\' my ass! I kind of painted myself into a corner and am slowly working my way out. Hopefully, I\'ll be able to concentrate and get lots done while my kids are in school over the next few days. I swear, I write some every day, even if it\'s only a sentence or two. It\'s comin\', I promise! --Wendie

>glares< I'm not speaking to you. I'm not going to tell you that I went ape$hit when I received the update notification for this, or bounced a circuit around the living room. I'm not saying that this was worth the wait (and what a wait it was) and your skill has increased exponentially. I'm not going to comment on brutally honest and wonderfully handled The Scene was, or how nearly every line of which is worth quoting. Or how intriguing the fact that you made his dialogue sound so unlike him when it *wasn't* him, and that the voice of the real Logan is so spot-on. Not gonna say it.

You, sir, are getting the silent treatment. >gives schoolgirl *hmmph*<

Author's Response: Oh, dearest Rose, if this is the silent treatment, then feel free to clam up forever and ever. God knows I deserve it for taking-oh, lord, is it really?--eight months between chapters. I read this on my phone while sitting in my car waiting to pick my daughter up from school. I was getting strange looks from children as they passed me. Apparently, a 40-something woman can\'t sit in her own car and grin from ear to ear like the village idiot without drawing undue attention to herself. I must have read this a dozen times and every time I am more thrilled that Logan\'s dialogue in The Scene worked for you. Scenes like that are SO difficult--I just hate making him treat Rogue like that--so, I actually think the fact that it didn\'t sound like him was because I had to do something to allow myself to even type the damn words -- although at the time I had no idea that my cruise down that river in Egypt would actually turn out as well as it did...Anyway, THANK YOU! --Wendie

Wow. A story by Sahara. What a lovely surprise! *big wink* Great story, great title. Welcome to the dark side-here's your cookie. Can't wait to see more of your work.

Author's Response: Oh I know, aren\'t you shocked? You had no idea right? I\'m super duper glad you liked it. I don\'t think I would have posted if you had really taken my offer of sending me bridge pictures seriously (without the superimposed \"Huge Jackman\". And you\'re right, reviews are like crack. They\'re actually better than the s\'mores ice cream I\'m eating. Once the Sexy Cupcake plans are complete I\'ll send you The Thunder From Down Under with a big red bow & a sign that says \"THANK YOU\" :D

Good lord, how can this not have a hundred reviews attached to it?! I reread this last night and it is just as poignant and *right*. I can't wait to see if you create anything else....Btw, did I ever mention that "Full Circle" was my original title for the story? "Overlap" was a last-minute choice. Spooky...........

Author's Response: Aw, thanks! It\'s quite a compliment coming from you. I hadn\'t realized, but I think you used the phrase \"full circle\" somewhere in your notes/introduction for Overlap. I didn\'t realize until I re-read *your* story that that was probably where the title came from, it must have snagged in my subconscious. At the time, I just thought the title was appropriate given that it was written as an epilogue to your story, and also given how I tried to echo (i.e. \"steal\") many of your themes/scenes, I thought it felt appropriate, along with the double meaning of the little family circle I leave Rogan with in the end.

This fic is even better the second time around. You're angst writing is utterly fantabulous, so poetic and sharp. I can't wait to see what you'll create next. Hope your Monday improves!

Author's Response: My Monday *did* just improve! With your splendiferous review! And with the fact that my computer doesn\'t find a spelling error in the word splendiferous! Thank you for checking it out a second time and super thanks for going through it the first time. I wish it was like a roller coaster where you get your picture taken at the end so you\'d have a nifty souvenir. Except here you\'d get Wolverines....yeah....nice.