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[Report This]Date: 02/23/2011 10:20:05 AM Title: Chapter 7
Now see this is why I friggin’ hate chapter reading – I’m whizzing along, thoroughly enjoying an excellent read and it stops.
Nothing.
No more.
Finished.
The end a.k.a. to be continued.
If you didn’t write it so damn well it wouldn’t be too bad.
But you do.
So there we are.
I’m pissed.
You’re laughing.
I want more.
You’ve got it but are going to enjoy withholding it.
Is it still considered rude to swear at people these days?
Excellent chapter top marks all round – well done x
Author's Response: *Hangs head in shame*. I'm sorry. Really. I take no sick pleasure out of keeping you all on edge. There's no laughing. Honest To Abs, I'm excited that you guys are so into it. It's a boost of confidence that makes me want to get back to writing & say "screw you social work research! Do yourself!". I know it's torturous, but I promise good, growly things. Just bear with me. Maybe, just maybe I'll be extra nice with updates in the near spring break filled future.
Date: 02/23/2011 4:11:57 AM Title: Chapter 7
Poor monster-bitten one. *pets you* I loved her little chat with Scott, it worked so well I could just see them facing off in the kitchen. The idea of Carol just lurking waiting for her chance felt perfectly right for this scenario, and its interesting how you've given that a physical manifestation (the sugar low thing.) That's not something I've seen before. I also enjoyed Rogue throwing down with Xavier; I love seeing his eminence get taken down a peg or six. And "wall-of-Wolverine". I laughed, laughed some more and then started staring into space, pondering the possibilities ....
Author's Response: The Closet Review Monster seems to be appeased. I printed out & tossed it the reviews & so far, so good. It also wants me to sent up a shrine to Hugh Jackman's abs. I'm not going to question it. Phew, I'm glad you liked lurking-Carol in this. I wasn't sure how that would go over. The low sugar thing - interesting in a good way? When I thought of a personality wrestling for control over Rogue & her body, that's what came to me. It's an odd, but visceral sensation if you've ever had it (which I don't recommend trying out - passing out leads to ouchies). I'm double glad you're digging the Rogue-Prof interaction - expect more de-pegging in the future. Yes, I've already gotten my hiking boots out - I'm gonna be alllll over that wall-o-Wolvie.
Date: 02/23/2011 4:07:20 AM Title: Chapter 7
Well, I for one am very curious to see where this all goes. I really enjoy the story and hope you will continue it.
And, I wouldn't mind seeing a wall-o-Wolverine in my kitchen. lol
Author's Response: I'm curious to see where it goes too! I will definitely continue it - I couldn't leave this alone even if I tried. And I have (for the sake of school). Who wouldn't want a wall-o-Wolverine? You can call me Little Miss Mountaineer!
Date: 02/23/2011 3:14:58 AM Title: Chapter 7
dun, dun, DUNNNNN! wicked excited to see what happens next so please update soon! love the sassy rogue, she rocked in telling off the professor!
Author's Response: I *knew* I forgot something! Should have put "dun, dun DUNNN" at the end of that chapter. I'm glad you like my Sassy!Rogue. It's going to get her into trouble one of these days....
Date: 02/22/2011 5:38:31 PM Title: Chapter 6
I am really enjoying this story. I think, think mind you, I know what Carol was up to and why Magneto did what he did to both Carol and Marie. The begrudged friendship occuring between Jubliee and Marie is really great. Jubilee's protection of Wolvister is also just adorable. I am looking forward to more.
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! And I appreciate you not sharing what your suspicions are. I'm guilty of that as a reviewer & now that I write, I'm not so sure I like that. It's 3am, I'm on ambien so this response isn't going to make sense, I'm terribly sorry. You like the pacing, too?! Not too droll?
[Report This]Date: 02/18/2011 8:41:54 PM Title: Chapter 6
I am enjoying this and I can't wait to find out what Carol is up to with the team and Rogue. I just know she was a double agent...Awesome story premise. Thank you for sharing.
Author's Response: Hmmm, is she or isn't she? You'll just have to stay tuned to find out! *cackles* *chokes* *coughs* *sputters* Ahem. Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 02/17/2011 9:08:04 PM Title: Chapter 6
The well-written, infinitely intriguing conversation between Jubilee and Marie almost, *almost* made up for the absence of a certain skillfully-crafted piece of man flesh (note: not an insult; nothing can be perfect without Logan, no matter how great it is--I find myself sighing frustratedly even while reading Shakespeare because of this).
There are too many quotable lines within the dialogue and, to quote a common phrase, I'd end up copying and pasting half the chapter. You draw a fascinating portrait of the Logan-jean-Scott-Carol love rectangle, especially of the latter and Mr. Smexypants. Very realistic, very....gritty. Just love it, such good background explanations without the sort of "and then...and then..." that causes the reader to glance at his watch.
Great way to start a morning.
Author's Response: I know, I should have just inserted an "elsewhere in the mansion...." scene where we shamelessly perved in on a Wolverine Workout Session. Completely out of context? Yes. Necessary? Most likely. I dropped the ball on that one. Believe me when I say I try to work him in as much as possible. And only believe me a little bit when I say that there was no pun intended for that previous sentence. SHAZAM! (It's the new ZING! Tell all your friends). Gritty, huh? I like that word a lot. Don't know if this deserves it, but I'll take it b/c I'm feeling greedy today. I'm glad you had a good start to your morning with this. Next time I'll try writing about "The Life And Times Of Wolverine's Wash Cloth" ;)
Date: 02/17/2011 1:06:14 PM Title: Chapter 6
Loved it. I was waiting for the explanation for The tension in the X Team. Thanks. And now, let's move on!
Author's Response: We will! There will be some moving on, but of course, this big ol' fracture splitting the main team will be the heart of the story, so we'll come back to it. Don't worry though, that issue may be the heart, be Logan is still The Body. I plan on...uh....ahem....*exploring* that too...... ;)
[Report This]Date: 02/17/2011 11:06:15 AM Title: Chapter 6
I really enjoyed all the gossip-juice! Very nice set-up, and you've played Jubes well. Rogue is growing into a nice 3-D, rounded person in her reactions as well.
One mildly irritated question, though: if you have 13 chaps written already, where are they?? Post them, already! (pretty please with honey on my knees?)
Author's Response: I'm glad you're liking my version of Jubilee. I don't want to make her the one-sided mall rat y'know? I like working in some of her stuff from the comics too like the dyscalculia. As I said with another reviewer, I don't mean to tease with the 13 chapters thing. I don't mean to dangle them over your heads and make you guys jump for a chapter - if that makes sense. I'm a big fan of the Fresh Eyes approach - I like being able to go back to a chapter & rework it, give my beta enough time to edit it, etc. after I've been away from a certain scene for a while. I've found it to be a huge help with how I write and controlling the stress of writing, too. I also like taking everyone's comments into account. I've worked in theories and filled in future plot holes in chapters that haven't been posted because of some feedback I've gotten so far. I hope this doesn't dissuade you from reading! I promise there's a method to my madness!
[Report This]Date: 02/17/2011 10:30:58 AM Title: Chapter 6
Wow! I was really glad to see another chapter up and since you say that you have 13 already written, maybe it won't be long before another is up? I still really have no clue where you're going with this, but that's a good thing. I hate stories where I can figure out the whole plot and ending by the end of the first chapter.
Author's Response: I hate stories like that too and I'm very happy and very flattered that you don't think this is one of them. Getting the next chapter up has to be worked around school. I'm going to be bombarded with papers, group projects, midterms, and developing my thesis in the next few weeks. So until I can get my very own adamantium-coated foxy feral mutant to threaten my professors into backing the hell off...school comes first. Big time frown. I'm glad you're still sticking with me on this though! Thanks for reading, rating, & reviewing :)
Date: 02/17/2011 5:59:33 AM Title: Chapter 6
Nice dialogue – love all the trust issues between them. Why *did* the brotherhood take her in when Mystique kept her away from most of it? Was there a plan for Carol/Rogue? Who was in on it? Want to know why Jubes seems to need to know now that it’s over and Carols out of the picture? Does she think Carol/Rogue is now going to try and split them up somehow? Is that the brotherhoods plan? How can anyone make Logan do anything he doesn’t want to? … looking forward to getting answers to the questions that this chapter raises and to seeing if these answers help Rogue sort out her head for herself rather than relying on the prof, all that and of course to some more interaction between our fav couple!!
All in all I don’t want much do i? great stuff keep it up x
Author's Response: Maybe I should have called this fic "Issues" b/c it seems like everyone in it will have one! I'm delighted that you have so many questions - I'm actually bouncing a little. This is why I'm glad I'm a little ahead of the story writing-wise so I can go through what's written & make sure questions like these are answered clearly. As for making Logan do something he doesn't want to - I wouldn't say he "doesn't want to". My answer to that is along the lines of what I proposed to doctorg in my response to her review - but I do have plans for writing/explaining that piece. Honest to The Abs, I don't think I've addressed one or two questions that you've raised though, so I have to make sure I ad those in. So really, I owe you. Maybe I can contract out hobbitsdoitbetter's Smex Garage from "Jitters"? How much time do you think you'd need? I'll see what the rental rates are & get back to you on that ;)
Date: 02/16/2011 11:53:13 PM Title: Chapter 1
What an interesting chapter. I liked the interaction between Jubes and Rogue, even if they didn't really trust each other.
I'm curious as to what happens from here.
Great chapter.
Author's Response: Ah yes, this fic will be riddled with trust issues. I've already signed every reviewer up for a free subscription, there are going to be so many issues. Glad you're along for the ride!
Date: 02/16/2011 10:45:12 PM Title: Chapter 6
Yay for new chapter! Very interesting with the drama, interested to see where that goes. Hard to imagine Logan getting manipulated what with his Super Sniffer and all, but I can see you selling it. Now, I think it's time for my bath....
Author's Response: I'm glad you have faith in me selling it (I've also got a basement full of wonderful stuff if you're interested). I am going to address why Logan acted on Carol's bulls-, but that's later on down the road. I'm operating on the theory that the information she gave him *technically* weren't lies. As you guys will come to see, all is not right in Scott/Jean-Land. I think Logan can still be manipulated even without his Super Sniffer - as seen in Origins, but parts of that were such a clusterf@$# that I shouldn't really count that. Sure he can sense lies, but what if there's a kernel of truth there? What if he *wants* to buy whatever Carol was selling?
[Report This]Date: 02/16/2011 10:29:34 PM Title: Chapter 6
Glad your back! And you keep teasing us by mentioning that you have 13 chappies waiting for us! Well played, madam, well played.
Author's Response: Glad to be back! Screw school! *Riots for 15 minutes* Aaaaand we're back. Sorry for the tease - I truly only mean to show you guys that I'm not stalled or abandoning this. No devious intentions here, I swear on the rock solid smexiness of Logan's abs.
Date: 01/31/2011 9:25:34 AM Title: Chapter 5
Sat down and read through this story this morning (sleep, who needs sleep?) and I am LOVING the AU world you have built here. The inner voice you have for Rogue is perfect. I love the little commentary she has going at various times.
Logan is also very well done. His initial anger at Rogue was believable, and in character; as is the way you are detailing him slowly coming around in regards to her. (Also, love how Jubilee is obviously his sidekick in this one. Nice little comic references all around.)
Lastly, for whatever reason, I just ADORE his reaction to learning that she is 21. I can really see the expression on his face there, and it's kind of hilarious :-)
Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: I love that you love all of those things! (See, I'm not picky). I plan on throwing out some more comic references here & there if it suits the plot. I wasn't too sure about the age-revealing thing. It's hard not to give too much away and step inside Logan's head, which the POV of this story has no business being in. But yes, I'm sure that at Marie's admission Logan's libido perked up & went "Oh yeah?", while his rational side went "Oh shit." Glad you're liking it!
Date: 01/28/2011 9:19:43 PM Title: Chapter 5
I just wanted to let you know I am really enjoying this. This Rogue is just amount the right mix of brass and shyness for her background. I think that Carol is really interesting as well first as the rightnous aggressor and now as the source of selective information. I think I know what she is hiding. It will be interesting to see I am correct. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you for dropping a line & letting me know what you think about things so far. I'm super happy you think Marie is balanced out in this. I'm also very curious about your theory ;)
Date: 01/28/2011 10:16:23 AM Title: Chapter 5
‘I can't promise regular updates’ :( ‘I've got nearly 12 chapters written’ :)
Love reading Marie’s thoughts no matter what tone they take - sarcastic, humour, inquisitive, questioning, confrontational etc. there’s a mix of everything and I’m glad you’re taking the time to really show the reader what it’s like and how it is to function as/be Marie. The confusion in remembering which parts are her, the guilt/usefulness at knowing what she shouldn’t, how hard it is just to be, let alone doing it where she is etc.
Nice to see an increase of interaction between the two of them in this chapter, look forward to more (yeah, yeah I know it’s gonna be a gradual thing but I look forward to it none the less!)
Like the way you’re giving us glimpses of her life before without jumping completely away from the story to cover it.
“It is a mistake to think that that little room has elastic walls and can distend to any extent. Depend upon it, there comes a time when, for every addition of knowledge, you forget something that you knew before.” Love this because instead of thinking that she’s gonna lose herself, if she really thought about it this is the way out for her – she just needs to learn how to separate what she wants to keep and what she doesn’t. Enter stage left the prof. and his wisdom in the brain dept.
Roll on the next instalment x
Author's Response: I know, bad me. I didn't want you guys to think I just up & ditched you! My muse likes to take a lot of time off, but luckily I sat on this story for so long before posting, I've got quite a nice chunk written, which comes in handy during the semester. I'm thrilled you love the mix and that you don't think I'm dawdling by drawing things out so we can see all of the facets - not just to Marie, but with quite a few other characters as well. Sometimes I have to actually remind myself to put some Rogan goodness in because I get so caught up in the plot involving other characters & I don't want to relegate Logan to be the one who "rescues" Marie out of every situation. Does that make sense? You have me bouncing: I'm over the moon happy that you liked the little quote I threw in. The scene was already written before I found it & I couldn't believe how well it fit. I'm very interested in your take on the matter, too. True, that choice could be a way out for her, but there's a whole host of other things Marie has to work through before she can make a call like that. And of course I'm going to throw all of those problems at her. Will the Prof be able to help her on this one? Hmmm, we'll see! ;)
[Report This]Date: 01/28/2011 3:06:22 AM Title: Chapter 5
I'm really enjoying the character interactions here. Thanks for writing!
Author's Response: And thanks for reading, rating, & reviewing!
Date: 01/28/2011 2:16:42 AM Title: Chapter 5
So, I just read all 5 chapters in one sitting and actually said "WHAT?!?!?!" aloud when there wasn't a "Next" button for me to push at the bottom of the page. lol
I so love this story. Poor Rogue, that girl just never catches a break.
And, I'd be spilling my soup too if I saw a half naked Logan walking into my kitchen. (Shhh.. don't tell my husband... lol)
Seriously, this is a wonderful story and I anxiously awaiting the rest!
Author's Response: Don't you hate when that happens ;p Don't worry, you're secret is safe here since we'd all have that same reaction, I'm sure. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 01/27/2011 9:21:29 PM Title: Chapter 5
hey hun, just wanted to say how much i enjoyed this chapter. liked what you did with introducing the junior x-men and thought you got Storm down well. Am really looking forward to the next chapter :-)
Author's Response: I don't know if the choice of tense was any better than the previous chapters, but I'm glad you liked this. The next chapter is already off to the beta! Thanks for reading & reviewing :)
[Report This]Date: 01/27/2011 9:18:43 PM Title: Chapter 5
Oh, and the final scene deserves a round of applause all on it's own (three cheers and a bowl of lotion for a *glistening* Logan). Adored the entire dialogue between Logan and Storm--who you do particularly well, by the way.
Am crazy in love with the lines,
“She is eighteen. You two have had this conversation before. In fact, you’ve had this conversation with just about everyone. Loudly, too. It’s her decision.”
And, "
Something pounds against the counter, either Logan’s fist or the beer he grabbed from the fridge.
And about a thousand others, but I know how much you just *hate* those long, over-adoring reviews. ;~D
Author's Response: Quotes! Quotes! Quotes! Why is it that I covet these so much? Three cheers & a bowl of lotion, huh? Is that for Logan's enjoyment? Because if we're going for ogle-worthy Logan, I'm thinking something that isn't as absorbent. Is there any way I can believably work in a bottle of massage oil to this story? Maybe a gratuitous scene of him doing some yard work & then cooling off with a a quick spray of the hose? Oh damn.....I just woke up the chained-in-the-closet-smut bunny again...why does it insist on using stuffed animals in the donation pile to *show* me what it wants me to write? *IT'S SO WRONG!!* I'm going to just re-read your review a hundred times to get smut bunny's reenactments out of my head.
[Report This]Date: 01/27/2011 9:10:55 PM Title: Chapter 5
Question: Do you think Chris Hansen will make an appearance in our plot to obtain a certain NOM-inspiring feral, and, if so, will Hugh Jackman be in the back room and, if so, approximately how many nanoseconds to you think it will take us to reduce Mr. Hansen to a goopy pile of once-limbs and fecal matter?
Anyway...Another incredible chapter from an incredible writer of a magnitude that will later be studied like fossilized evidence of the Cambrian Explosion by future extraterrestrial archeologists and/or dolphins (who will lead the food chain after the revolution).
This chapter was such a marvelous treat to wake up to. (I dropped our emails like a flatulantly-inclined date when I noticed the update). You have the most wonderful sense of humor, laugh-out-loud lines that the reader can never predict. Fantastic character inflections and traits so fresh but so fitting, as ever.
And I know I say this every time, but your Logan--besides being prime material for the wake-up-with-a-smile dreams--can't be more perfect, more in tune with the Wolverine we all want to sink our teeth into. You're unbelievable, and I can guarantee that we will all be chewing our fingernails waiting for more.
Author's Response: I don't think Chris Hansen will give us a problem. True story: he came into a bar I worked at while I was in college, a bartender recognized him & asked him to do his "why don't you have a seat" line & he was happy to oblige. Considering he probably gets that all the time, it was nice that he was cool about it. So I'm pretty sure he'd look the other way in our case - he'd be off the clock, y'know? On another note, I don't deserve this beautifully written review. I deeply appreciate every word, particularly the "fresh and fitting" ones. Delivering a dream-worthy Logan is the least I can do for you.
Date: 01/27/2011 8:12:56 PM Title: Chapter 5
Still loving it! Lots of great lines, but I'll pick one I particularly loved:
The goddess inclines her head and unlike so many of the nonverbal head gestures she had been given in the past few days, this is more of a “won’t you accompany me?” and less of a “hop to, underling.” Marie appreciates that now that she has experienced the difference.
Keep writing!
Author's Response: Thanks! I love when reviewers point out what they loved. And honestly, just the simple "keep writing!" was enough to brighten my day!
Date: 01/27/2011 3:26:42 PM Title: Chapter 5
I love it so far. Its really interesting and your view into Marie's mind is great.
The only complaint I have is about the tense you are using. Or rather the multiple ones. lol some times you are using present tense and sometimes past tense and it is a little distracting to me. Stories read a lot better in the past tense.
Author's Response: I'm glad you're liking it so far and I want to thank you for sticking with it despite my errors. I flipped back & forth between past & present tense all throughout the first 4 chapters & when that was pointed out to me I chose to continue the rest in present simply because there were certain scenes that I just couldn't write in past tense. It's been a really hard decision - one that I'm still flip flopping on, so if my next update takes longer it's due to my indecision in regard to tenses & any subsequent overhauling of the 5 chapters posted so far. Probably more than you wanted to know, sorry for the rambling. Thanks again for the review :)
[Report This]Date: 01/27/2011 10:01:30 AM Title: Chapter 5
Wonderful story so far! Can't help but agree with JaqofSpades, would like to see a little of Wolverine's thoughts. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: I could have been more liberal with Logan's reaction, but I feel like his glowering during the kitchen scene was enough. In this fic there won't be any explanation of his *thoughts* because it's centered around Marie. So she's going to have to be like the rest of us non-telepaths & guess what the Wolvster is thinking, which is going to be hard since the only emotion he's comfortable showing is anger. Thanks for sticking with this story and reviewing!