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Date: 06/05/2011 11:55:50 AM Title: Second Chance To Make A First Impression
Great beginning.
Date: 05/30/2009 9:26:38 PM Title: Second Chance To Make A First Impression
This is great! I'm off to read the rest you've got! I really enjoy what you're doing with this, and I'm eager to see what happens next. The best thinng for you right now, is a good beta. Find one of those, (you may already have one) and you're set. Use them to bounce ideas off of, run them through the paces and ask for their advice on things like words flow and plot. You're doing great, but even the best of us have room for improvment. Learn from yourself, and write for no one but yourself. *grins*
Date: 05/22/2009 10:50:11 AM Title: Second Chance To Make A First Impression
Just as an FYI, the age of consent here in New York is 17. ::wink:: Scott can shove it that much sooner! LOL
Author's Response: ohh is it? well that's convenient isn't it ;) rnI was sure it was 18. thanks for the correction :)
Date: 05/06/2009 11:53:57 PM Title: Second Chance To Make A First Impression
I have to say I loved the way you took the actual events and tweaked them just enough. I suspect that this is what all us shippes pictured during that scene anyway. Well done!
Author's Response: thank you =)
I just couldn't get over it...he didn't kiss her when he had the perfect chance...! ^^
[Report This]Date: 05/06/2009 9:58:07 PM Title: Second Chance To Make A First Impression
Very nice!
Author's Response: thanks :)
[Report This]Date: 05/06/2009 5:27:05 PM Title: Second Chance To Make A First Impression
I like the way this was written. I think it is a very nice AU story, even though I usually don;t go for AU. Please continue!
Author's Response: thank you :) and there is more to come soon
one thing I have to say; I've never really understood what AU means on this site...I thought it only applied to no-powers / normal-world type of stories? Stamp of Approval, for example
Date: 05/06/2009 3:37:26 PM Title: Second Chance To Make A First Impression
It was a cute way of changing the scene from the film!
Only one thing...I kinda laughed when Logan described her eyes as 'Bambi eyes'. It would imply he's seen Bambi...and just the thought of that...LOL!
Author's Response: *gasp* I didn't even think about that LOL ...he probably hasn't seen Bambi though ;) maybe he's seen a poster of it somewhere... ^^