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Reviewer: TrickyBusiness Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2011 7:39:54 PM Title: A Journey I Just Don't Have A Map For

Great chapter. I thought the motorcycle scene went well. In fact if you think about it, it could motivate Marie to move past the free of never having touching and isolating herself to giving her asense of freedom and courage to be able to face her fears, which can be just as invigorating. Keep up the great work.

Reviewer: rogue91 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2009 12:48:09 PM Title: A Journey I Just Don't Have A Map For

motorcycle scene was awesome, dont worry about it

Author's Response: thank you :) I actually tried that thing I wrote about while I was sitting on the back of a regular bicycle yesterday..it was pretty fun, though probably scary as hell if anyone's actually going motorcycle-like speed and not just like 5 mph hehe

Reviewer: Corinne Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2009 9:06:27 PM Title: A Journey I Just Don't Have A Map For

i loooooove the motorcycling/flying!

i've done something similar on my ex's bike. IT IS A RUSH LIKE NO OTHER!

whooo, hot stuff!

Author's Response: hehe thank youu :) I'll really have to try that some time...*off to find person with motorcycle* -- too bad I'm terribly afraid of even sitting on the back of a motorbike lol

Reviewer: askita Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2009 11:04:14 AM Title: A Journey I Just Don't Have A Map For

It worked really well, you did a great job of explaining what she felt when she was realizing her freedom. Also, great stuff! Awesomeness completly!

Reviewer: alesia Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/15/2009 8:08:01 PM Title: A Journey I Just Don't Have A Map For

I think the motorcycle scene worked great. You allowed us to discover what he wanted her to do just like she did. I liked the dinner scene as well

Author's Response: that's great to hear, thank you! =)

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