Awesomness dipped in chocolate, coated in sprinkles. This was great! Absoutely great! I'm really exited for whatever you have next, although I'm pretty sure that its the mission coming up. *grins* I can't wait until you put up some more!

Author's Response: oh goodness, you have commented on all my chapters - you're my hero, girl! ;) seriously, thanks so much for taking the time to do that, it means a lot to me.rni'm glad you've been enjoying the story, "awesomeness dipped in chocolate" is one of the nices things i've been told about my writing, hehe ;)rnas for a beta..no, i don't have one, but i keep thinking that maybe i should find one...i don't know...i guess i'm a little scared of having the flaws and mistakes of my stories pointed out to me, but that's just silly, because someone has to do it...so, yeah, i guess you're right, i should go looking for a beta reader.rnhaha, and scott just turned into the biggest jerk in this story, i don't know why...it's easy to write him as a dick ^^ however, i'm starting to feel bad about that because i've recently discovered my (extremely well-hidden!) liking for scotty...but i can save that for another story ;)rnand the whole bond thing...no idea how that happened actually, but i'm glad that the explanation worked for you and that it didn't seem too far out there...it was partly inspired by bobby and john (halfway through the story, i discovered my not-so-well-hidden love for those two as well, but only when they're together/as BFFs)rnit'll actually take some time until the mission starts, they've got some other stuff to work through first...*cough*x-men origins*cough*rni'll post the next chapter soon and i hope you'll like what's to come as well. rnagain, thanks for the extensive commenting, it made me veeeery happy! :)